MG~ FF~The Jinx - UPDATED Pt 10 / Pg 137 / 19th Sep ................. - Page 56

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

Hi lakshu humdono same answer diya

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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(F banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi)
The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 5



Part - 6



It was a long time, almost 3-4 yrs he was seeing Geet , even he didn't hear her name

in KM,, once or twice he heard from his mom nd Dadima's talk nd guessed that she was not in KM nd went for higher study ,, he never asked nd bothered that time ,, Many things had changed in last few yrs ,,today seeing her here he was shocked nd now this baby ... Geet's baby ,, but many Qs wr pocking his head nd he wanted to know about them ,, he garnered himself to asked her.

Maan: aauumm ,, but u didn't say anything when I asked u Geet u r married ?

Geet: there was nothing to say Mr Khurana ,, I knew u didn't like that so kept quiet .

Maan: now i'm asking again ,, when u get married nd where is ur husband ?

Geet sighed , looked at her kid who was playing there then looked at Maan with a fake smile.

Geet: i'm a single mother mr Khurana ,, he left us nd moved on in his life .

Maan: what !!! why ? when?

Geet: before his birth ,, he didn't find me fit for him nd he walk out .

Maan: who was he ? Any Indian or American ?

Geet: He was an Indian nd now I don't want to talk about him ,, he moved on in his life nd i'm happy in mine .

Maan: but he should be responsible for d kid ,, doesn't he come to meet him ?

Geet: he don't know about d kid ,, I didn't inform him .

Maan: what ? But why ? he must have to know about his kid ?

Geet smiled: Mr Khurana ye USA hei India nahi ,, yahan koi farak nahi padta ,, koi nahi puchta ,, aur mujhe bhi jaroorat nahi .

Maan: but he is a father of ur child Geet.

Geet: he moved on nd he is nothing for us ,, kids r belong to mother here ,, father's name is not necessary ,, it's quiet normal here ,, ye sab India mei chalta hei ,, yahan kids ko jaroorat nahi baap ke naam ke sahare ki ,, govt full responsibilities leti hei ,, hume koi prob nahi ,, aur rahi baat hume chodne ki to jab India me ek choti si bacchii ko uske family wale aur uski Maa tak chod sakti hei to koi hume kun ahi chod sakta ? mujhe ab ess sab se kuch farak nahi padta ,, pahale mei dusro ki daya aur ehassano per jeer ahi thi lekin ab to meri apni choti si family hei aur mei esme khush hun .

Maan was tongue tight ,, her every word was dipped in pain nd bitterness which she bore in her past ,, his heart felt a heaviness nd didn't know how to react then he looked at d kid who was lost in his play , unknown from all good or bad things related his life .

Geet: Mr Khurana , I have a request , plzz don't disappoint me .

Maan: what ?

Geet: plzz don't disclose this thing to Yash uncle or in front of ur family members ,, plzz it's a humble request.

Maan: but why , didn' t u say anything to Dad about it ?

Geet: No , there is no use ,, he felt bad if he came to know nd asked many Qs which I didn't want to answer.

Maan: Dad always supported u nd favoured u nd u hide this thing from him.

Geet: i didn't want to bother him , he did a lot for me nd made me capable to face this world ( she paused ) meri wajha se kai baar unhe family mei sunna pada ,, main unhe aur takleef nahi dena chahati ,, aur ab to waise bhi unki health theek nahi to plzzz kuch matt kahana kisi se ,, agar meri wajha se kuch galat ho gaya to sab mijhe hi dosh denge ,, ye baat to aap khud bhi janty aur kahaty thy na ki main ek curse hun ... A jinx .

Maan looked at her ashamed nd then lowered his head ,, closed his eyes tightly , felt a lump in his throat nd gulped hard .

Geet: plzz abbhi kisi ko kuch matt kahan ,, agar kabhi face to face hue to mai khud hi bata dungi , mera khud se batana jyada acha hoga ,, aur waise bhi wo ab uncle mujhe force nahi ker sakty .

Maan looked at her questioningly nd Geet gave him a smile .

Geet: he didn't say me about his attack nd don't how many more things , so he can't q me .

Maan dipped his head he knew Dad didn't say him many things about d family ,, it was only he who talked to Geet in these yrs ,, all wr busy in their life nd after passing time forgot about her ,, he himself didn't know where was she ? Even when he was coming US Dad didn't say that Geet is in US ,, why should he ? Who wanted to know about her ? It was he who remembered her many times but didn't have heart to ask about her , his own isolated , reserved nd busy life blocked all d ways .

Geet: u didn't reply me .

Maan: theek hei , agar tum nahi chahati essa hi sahi ,, main ahi kahunga kisis se .

Geet: thank u so much . ( Maan gave a painful smile )

Geet: wd u like to have coffee ?

Maan: yeah , but black .

Geet: OK . (She looked at her kid )

Maan: i'm here with him , don't worry .

She smiled nd went to kitchen for preparing coffee.


Precap --- Maan mingled with d cutie pie...

😃 Part - 7




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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
woaaa aftr a long time m 1st :)
lovely muahhh update yar Asalways :)
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Edited by sona-rai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi babbie
aaj iss samay online ..
school nahi gayi kya ??
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🤗 Hi sona ,, lol dear..
😃 how r u ,, ?
talking to u after long..😃
how is life..?😃

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