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Hi buddies!! Me back DISHA😃 with my 2nd OS...😉 I will not drag this as my 1st one.Just one part😛I dedicate this OS is to my angel(gunjar),Mahi,Pooja,Uma,Ratna di,Gayatri di,Kate,Tanvi and chaavi and all my friends of IF and my pyaari maaneetians😳

😃Maan's thoughts in lavender...OK!!😃

Geet Aur Uski...😉

Maan had a very tiring day...credit goes to his first film in Bollywood😉😆.These days he was missing his Mishty very much.He was not able to give enough time to her. Mishty just her name gives peace.How much his life had changed after her arrival.She had filled his life with full of colours. Thinking of her,he started his car and drove to KM.Maan came of from his Mishty's land by the constant ringing of his cell.Just seeing the ID a wide smile adored his lips.He parked his car at a side of the road and attended the call. Hello Mishty...missed you baby..Maan said huskily.But on the other side...Maan *sob* Maan *sob* plzz ghar jaldhi aa joo...plzzz Maan .Maan was shocked hearing his jaan crying. Mishty, shona... kya hua?tum ro kyun rahi ho...kya hua baccha...asked a worried Maan .Maan plzzz *sob* plzzz ghar jaldi aaoo and the call ended. First Maan was shocked hearing his jaan crying and over that the call ended abruptly.He was hell worried now.He drove the car as fast as he could and reached KM just in few minutes.

He rushed inside the mansion.Mishty...shonaaa..kahan ho tum?He ran like a manic.He searched her everywhere and atlast he found her cuddled in the bed and sobbing.He rushed to her and cocooned her in his embrace .Instantly Geet hugged him and started crying.Maan don't know what happened but he was worried seeing her condition.He just hugged her tightly and asked her Jaanu kya hua?? Umm...ro kyun raahi ho...taabaith to teek hai na ...ro kyun rahi ho shona and he separated her from him and cupped her face.He kissed her forehead and said worridely shhh..shona ab rona bandh karo...chupp... but tears were continuously flowing from her almond eyes.She just tightly held him.Maan panicked seeing her condition.She has not even uttered a single word.Maan ..woh...woh..she just pointed the her laptop and the started crying again.Maan thought ..laptop mai kya hai??use dhek kar yeh ro kyun rahi hai... now he was confused.Shona..meri taraf deho toh..and once again he cupped her face kya hai laptop mai??bolo..aapni Maan ho nahi bathaoge..umm...Each and every second seeing her crying was killing him.Maan woh... woh... mar gaya Maan...and she started crying badly. Koun mar gaya shona...TUMM!! And once again she hugged and cried .MAII???? asked a shocked Maan.Geet yeh kya bol rahi ho tum...mai teri saamne baita hoon aur tum kahrahi hai ki mai mar gaya...saaf saaf bolo..koi bad dreams dheka hai kya??Nahi Maan woh woh..she ran and took her laptop and showed it to him.Iss mai kya hai Geetu...Maan *sob* isee padd ke dheko na and just kept the lappy on his lap and continued her job(sobbing)😆

Maan started reading it "...Maan!! aap hume chood k nahi jaa sakthe...utto Maan ..dheko Maan... ye dheko Maan...humari Musky...woh aapke bina nahi reh sakthi hai Maan...pls Maan apne aanke kol ke dheko Maan ..aapki Geet aake bina nahi reh sakthi hai...aap jaanthi ho na..Maannn...Geet completely broke down and cried seeing Maan lying lifelessly..." and he just closed the lappy.

After closing it Maan gave a *what is this* look and his famous glare.Geet showed her puppy face and said Maan dheko na kya ho gaya ..usse mai tumhe Dev ne maar dalaa...and again tears started cascading her beautiful eyes.Geet yeh sab kya hai... tum sirf yeh story k liye itni roorahi thi ..pagal ho gaayi kya??from where did u get this to read??...asked Maan with his voice little raised...Maan how dare you say it just a story...yeh kitne pyaari ff hai..meri fav bi hai...aapko kya pata humari ff k bhare mai...said Geet with a cute pout.Maan aapko pata hai..how much I am missing our GHSP...kitna pyaara tha na woh din...par who katam ho gaya...*sob*aapko pata hai kitne saare fans hume miss kar rahe hai *sob*...they think us a part of their life Maan. They are missing us soo much Maan...to keep us alive they are writing these beautiful stories...aur aappp.... Maan left a sigh and said Misthy yeh sab kya hai...ok... ok sorry baba for shouting at u...tum ro rhi thi..u know na I can't bear seeing u crying and he just wiped her tears...and kissed her cute cheeks.jao mai tum se kattii kattii katti...meri ff ko insult kiya na...said Geet and just turned her face.Maan got down from the bed and he knelt down..Mishty meri taraf dheko na..SORRY..plzzz.. pretty plzz...shona...dheko kaan pakad ke maafi maang raha hoon..ab toh maaf kardo...asked Maan cutely.

Seeing Maan like this a small cute smile adored her lips.Maaf kar deethi hoon...iss baar ok..par agli baar aisa kuch mat bola..teekhai??...asked Geet.Ok meri maa...dhaan rakoonga...and he just got up and hugged her.Mishty ek bath bolo..kabse ye chalraha hai..matlab reading stories like this??asked Maan.Maan thodi din pehale shuru kiya...ab meri shooting bi khatam ho gayi...so I am a free now...ghar pe akheli hoon na..bore ho rahi thi...one day accidentally I opened IF page...wahan maine humare naam ki thread dheka...phir mujhe pata chala yeh sab ..ki fans aise stories lik rahi hai...us din se I started reading .Maan saare ff,ss,os bahout acchi hai.Accha... asked Maan. Ha Maan.. superb stories hai sab...ek dham mast...Geetu totally kitne stories hai??and when you will complete reading??asked Maan...Geet started laughing...kitne stories...hehehe...Maan tu bi na...hehehe...uncountable number of stories hai...we can read for our whole life ...uthni saare stories hai...said an excited Geet. Geetu you are telling that all stories are superb ...par yeh kya hua...ussme hero mar gaya and coz of that u are crying chuckled Maan...then it struck him what he said...as these words escaped his mouth Geet started crying again. Maan's heart: Maan yeh tu ne kya har diya??idiot ab dehko Mishty rona shuru kar diya...Sorry..sorry sorry..Geetu baccha...dehkna in that story I will not die... Maan's mind:Stupid u too started...what are you telling??Maan's heart:Tu chup kar..meri Mishty ro rahi hai..i have to console her!! Maannn...this voice of Geet brought Maan back from his heart and mind battle.shhh..Geetu nothing bad will happen..ok...shhh ab raath bahout ho gaya ab soo jau...and gently made her to lie down in bed.Par Maan ...ussme...*sob* tumkoo...and hugged him shhh..jaan...kuch nahi hoga mujhe us story mai..ok??chalo ab fatafat soo jao...said Maan .He too just lay down with her and soon both slept...

Next morning...Maannn!!! Maannn...uttoo utooo naa...shouted Geet at the top of her lungs. Maan slowly opened his droopy eyes...Jaldi uttooo...Geet subha subha kyun itna shoor macharahiho??asked Maan with an irritated tone...Maann!! Meri hotty,cutey,sexy hubby ...aaj mai bahout kush hoon and she just slammed her rosy lips with his perfect M shaped lips. Maan was just shocked beyond words... Maan tum bach gaye ...bach gaye.and gave another kiss on his cheeks...but still Maan was in shocked state...Maannn!! shouted Geet and this time too it worked Maan came back to the present.Mishty...mujhe kuch samaj mai nahi aaraha hai..tell it clearly now...mai bach gaya??asked Maan with a puppy face,oopps!! Maan mai bi na...us story yesterday I was reading na..u remember! us story mai u r not dead...hehehe!! That was a dream sequence...that author (mahi😉) na for giving us a shock cum surprise she wrote that part...that was dream of veer..hehe(Fate of the unfortunates😉) and she continued laughing.Pagli kabhi nahi sudregi thought Maan and gave a kiss on her forehead...ab toh tum kush ho na??ufff...thank god us author ne mujhe maar nahi dala...thought maan ha Maan mai bahout bahout happy hoon..Maan aaj u will not go for shooting na..plzzz...hum bhaar goomne jaayeenge..plzzz...Maan just nodded his head and gave a smile...Geet just got down from the bed but Maan pulled her with a jerk and said huskily...Mishty rooz us author ko na aise surprises dene k liye bolo..tabi toh mujhe aise sweet kiss milegi and he wincked.Geet started to blush.Maan tum bi na..bilkul besharam ho gayi ho...phele Ram ki tarah thi par ab Krishna ki tarah naughty ban gaya...ab chodo mujhe ready hone do..and u too get ready soon and she just ran away from there.


Maan just got down from the bed... at that time Geet came at a tuffan speed and said..Maan mai tumhe batana bhool gayi...mai pregnant hoon...said Geet excitedly...KYA!! Really??asked a surprised Maan. He just lifted her and twirled in the air. Maannn what are u doing??mujhe neeche utharooo...said Geet .Maan just brought her down ...he just knelt down and kissed her tummy...my babyy!! and he got up and kissed her forehead Mishty..thank u soo much I LOVE U Jaan!! Today I got the biggest happiness.. and he went on expressing his happiness.But Geet gave *what happened to him* look to Maan..Maan what r u telling...I am not able to understand anything!! said Geet who was totally confused .Geetu don't act smartly abhi toh tum mujhe itne badi kushi kabar bola ,phir itne acting kyun?? asked a surprised Maan. Arrey buddhu...mai matlab mai nahi...us ff mai Geet hai na...who pregnant hai...har waqt mazak...ab chalo ready ho jau...mai aur pregnant hehehe...we are just 23(😆😉) ...come on Maan... she said coolly and went away Maan just want to bang his head somewhere...oh babaji...yeh Geet aur uski ffs...😉

Sorry for the mistakes...😆

All your pyaari comments are welcome😳

Sorry dears...network problem + everything got deleted first time😭😭

Thank u DevilClan, Vandy di,aparna3011 for ur comments..it was really encouraging me to write it another time🤗thank u sooo much😳


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vandy28 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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No prblm dear...wil b waitn...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi disha ..
yeh idea aate kahan se hai tumhe
geet aur uski ff ..wah kya baat hai ..
geet mast maan passt ..
woh kya jaane hum IF waloo ka dard ..
missing them too much
os was mast ..

thanks for it ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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no prblm 😃

Very Nice OS ! Awesome ...
Edited by AMIT_TheFanOfGC - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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dishu dishu...first of all big hug🤗 dear...
missed u sooo much...
wah meri choti devil kya masth os likha thumne...
arre mahi ki ff ka wo shocking part aur yeh os bass masth hai yaar...
tu ne tho kamal kardi...
lekin bechara maan kitna dargaya yaar geet ko rothe huva dekh kar...
aur geet is just next to impossiable..
wah kya super dupper hit hai yaar dishu...
mereko bohut mazaa ayya yeh padkhar dear..
u r just awesome disha..
aur wo wali jab geet says i am pregnat 😆 it was just hilarious when she said wo ff mai😆
i was just smiling through out the time while reading it disha...
just lovely...
geet aur uski ff's great idea dishu 👏
love u dear...
Madhu_31 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: gunjar

dishu dishu...first of all big hug🤗 dear...
missed u sooo much...
wah meri choti devil kya masth os likha thumne...
arre mahi ki ff ka wo shocking part aur yeh os bass masth hai yaar...
tu ne tho kamal kardi...
lekin bechara maan kitna dargaya yaar geet ko rothe huva dekh kar...
aur geet is just next to impossiable..
wah kya super dupper hit hai yaar dishu...
mereko bohut mazaa ayya yeh padkhar dear..
u r just awesome disha..
aur wo wali jab geet says i am pregnat 😆 it was just hilarious when she said wo ff mai😆
i was just smiling through out the time while reading it disha...
just lovely...
geet aur uski ff's great idea dishu 👏
love u dear...


😆
missed u too angel😃
🤗
this os is mainly for u..coz u asked it na😉after that only i started thinking of this😆


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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
waiting for update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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tera naam CD se change karr k BD rakhna padega..

OMG...!!
teri devilgiri mujhse bhi aage nikal gayi hai...

geet was crying bcoz maan died in fate.. 😆
poor maan... pehle misti crying...then thr reson sooo stupid
still he has to bear the tantrums

the pregnant thing was good 🤣
i felt thtb real bcoz of her mood-swings 🤣

awsm 👏
🤗 for u
Edited by mirror1521 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome os
geet was crying beacuse maan died in an ff😭😆
mujhe bhi rona aata on sad endings😭
but loved the os, loved geet innocence !!!!
and how was she when she got to read that it was a dream, maan ko bonus mil gaya😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you so much my dear Disha for this lovely gift🤗
It's a lovely OS😆
I didn't understand some parts due to lack of my knowledge of hindi but I tried to read it the way I understood and it's wonderful my dear...🤗❤️

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