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Edited by vrinda22 - 10 years ago
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PART 40


geet went to rest room..on way she found a girl ..

Girl:geet..tumm na..

Geet:babaji..priya..tum...

She was happy 2 see her friend after years..

Priya:geet..tum..tumhari shadhi hogayi..

She asked looking geets sindoor n blackbeads..

Maan who came looking for geet saw her chatting with some girl..

Seeing him geet looked priya..what will he say if he found im talking here..without informing him..she got little nervous.. ..

Maan:geet what are u doing here..

Geet:wo..woh mei..

She doesn't know how he will take it..

Priya:geet..yeh..

Geet:priya..yeh..meri..

She blushed..

Geet:yeh meri pati..

Priya:hi jiju..im priya..we both were classmates..n its long time I hv seen her..hope u don't mind if I borrow her from u for some time..

Maan narrowed his brows..

The girl looked straight opposite to geet..she is in salwar she looked too young..her brows trimmed n her fair skin showed she uses spa..unlike geet..she looked talkative opposite to geet who always speaks in monosylabbus..

Geet looked at maan ..will he give permission.

geet st:yeh priya n her big mouth..what will he think...

Maan:where is ur seat..

Priya:this one she showed the nearest seat where they were standing...

He looked n saw a lady seated there..

Priya:she is my aunty.woh I m persuing my further studies staying with her..so,im going with her to Mumbai...pls jiju im getting bored n I hv lots to catch up with geet..

Maan:ok

Maan thought she is doing some masters or some higher studies n took just like that ..

Maan:ok geet u join her..

Geet nodded her head..

He accepted n that' made her happy ..



Both sat in their seat..the train started to move..maan can see geet from their seat..he has now taken opposite seat so he can keep an eye on geet..

Geet greeted priya's aunty.n both started to chat remembering their school life..priyas aunty started to sleep in her place..

Priya:geet..tum khush ho na..

Geet:hmmm..

Priya:jiju keeps u happy na..say me openly..im ur only friend n I know u don't open to anyone else..say me..why marriage at this age..i cant think myself in ur place..i have my dreams ahead..i have scored 95% in 12th.n I want to do engineering..u know na our place ..there is no engg coll..n I have to crib to my parents to allow me to do engg in other city..

She was going on n on without knowing geets heart paining ..tears burned her corner of eyes..

Priya stopped n looked at her when there was no reply from geet..

Priya:.wait...im saying about me..what about you.. what happpened to ur studies did ur mom stopped ur studies after 10th..n got u married..when u got married

She asked shockingly..bombarding geet with her questions..

Geet:.no..i hv written 12th.

She said her with pain of tinge in her voice..

Geet:.n then got married to him..its1 n months we have got married.

Priya:what????

Priya:whats ur result..do u know..i mean did he know..

Geet sighed..

Geet:I think he knew it..but he doesn't ask me anything about my studies..n I too have forgotten my studies..result se kya hoga ab.

Priya:geet.yesterday only results came..arent u curious to know what u got..

Geet:dont know what marks I got...mei tho shadhi shudha hoon..n its my duty to be a gud wife.isse zyadha mujei koi aur nehi sochna chahiye ..hai na priya...


Its not only geet..many girls are forced to think like that..she just want to have a safe married life without any obstacles..in that she has buried her own dreams..her goal is now focused on only one thing..that is she must be a gud wife n satisfy her in laws without any complains...


Priya:hmm ..so u both share a healthy married life.i mean..u know what im asking..

she winked

Geets cheek burned red with shy..she nodded yes..

Priya thought to cheer her up..now she cant do anything for geet than wishing her a happy married life..

Priya:.ahem..some one is blushing..meine socha tha geet ko kuch nehi patha.that too in that way..

Geet blushed more..

Priya:omg geet u just look like an apple..

Same time a boy came there selling bananas..

Khela khela..bhaiya ji khela..behenji khela..

Geet looked at maan who had a smirk in his face..how can she forget his way of fruits complementing her assets..she blushed furiously..

Priya:ahem ahem..

She cleared her throat..


Priya:geet..us din..do u remember how foolishly we behaved..

Geets face turned pale..she knew what priya is saying..which is about the incidence which only priya knew..n that one she cant forgot in her life time..still she fears thinking of it..its true she has moved on with maan n knew what is physical relation..that man her teachers husband didn't do anything but the small misbehavior still makes her think as a sinner to her husband..

both were talking in whispers so no one heard them..


Priya:jaanthi ho geet..god is there to keep accounts of everyones deeds..do u know what happenend to him..n his family..our teacher..

Geet:w..wh..a.t.

Priya:a man made his daughter fall in love with him..she eloped with him making teacher n her husbands name fall in shame..in a week of time their daughter was found dead n in police investigation they found she was been sexually tortured ..may be by many..

Geet gasped..she felt bad for that girl..

Priya:when the body was brought home teacher was fully broken..n the servant who saved u that time finally said to teachers husband he reaped what he sowed..he not only spoiled her many more girls too..n this came as another hit to teacher who heard it..she hit him cursed him n what not..she couldn't take the continuous shocks in her life..her husband was not sincere to her n his sins took her daughter away..atlast she lost her mental balance..

Geet:oh no..

Priya:teacher is now in asylum..n her husband is now living a lonely life ..he is repenting his deeds..his sin took away his wife n daughter.. but no one is beside him now..he is immensing himself in many charity n helps the needed ones.thinking god will forgive him for his sins..its gods justice for him.

Geet felt her heart heavy...till now she had never thought bad for anyone..even if he is a sinner ..what is it to do with teacher n her daughter..they were part of his family n the sin too came on them just to make him realize his mistakes..cant god do something better than punishing teacher n her daughter..

Geet was thinking on that part of Gods justice.

Priya:geet..geet..what happenned

Geet:hmm nothing feeling bad for teacher..

Priya:me too..

seeing geet too lost priya thought to divert the topic..

Priya:ok say about u n ur family..where r u going now..how many are there in ur family..

Geet started telling about maan Vicky where they r going n there chats went on..


Maan missed geets pale expressions as he started to chat with Vicky n others..but he didn't failed to notice geets smile blush n her animated talks with priya..she looked comfortable with her like she is with aishu..he thinks he must still work hard to make her comfortable with him..

After some time geet bid bye to her n came n sat in her seat..

She said thanks to maan to let her chat with her friend..vicky looked at maan n geet..maans expressions said what he is thinking..how can she thank him for a silly thing..its her friend n even if he was in her place he will give some time for his friend..

Man hummed n lost in thoughts..he is sure something is there behind this geet..but who kya hai..will she ever open up to him n say her worries n happiness..is there relation still needs a sorry n thank you like formality words..whats his position in her life..

All had their dinner n arranged their beds..


Maan asked geet to sleep in middle birth as one of the person had problem in walking.n the other person was not ready to exchange..he too took the middle one opposite to her n Vicky took the upper..only one dim light was glowing..all slept while Vicky was still listening songs in his ipod..his eyes went to have a look on maan.his eyes fixed on geet..he bent a little n looked geet who was tossing in her place...he shrugged off his thoughts n closed his eyes to sleep.geet was habituated to sleep in maans arms after their love..even her dress itched her today..its long time she has slept like this n it was hard for her to get sleep..maan too couldn't sleep without her..but later he slept..n geet too slept when she felt her lids heavy ..

Morning she woke soon with the sound of tea man..n maan too woke up..he helped her get down n both freshed up n had the morning tea ..

The rest of day went same like the day before with chats playing n side seeing .a small chit chat with priya..etc.they ordered the lunch in train n had it..geet didn't like it..she felt like puking it..maan too doesn't pressurize her .n ordered some soup ..later she had biscuits fruits n juice n filled her stomach with light things..

.by evening they reached Mumbai..priya n her aunty too got down..geet said bye to both..priya req her to visit her once before leaving .geet refused saying they are staying for only 2 days n she wont be able to visit them..but promised to be in touch with her..both exchanged the numbers..geet wished all the best for her future n joined maan n Vicky..geet was feeling heavy..but she was happy for her friend..atleast she got chance to fulfil her dreams..not like her..


The station was too rush n geet was struggling to follow maan n Vicky ..both were walking faster..poor girl has to run behind them..at one stage she missed them in the rush n she felt like crying..new place n she doesn't knew her sils place too how she will reach them.


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Edited by vrinda22 - 10 years ago
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will update in half an hour
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yup..
how r u dear
how is ur health now
n what r u doing in if without taking rest
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Originally posted by: vrinda22


yup..
how r u dear
how is ur health now
n what r u doing in if without taking rest


I am alright now even I am joining my college from 9th of oct
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wow waiting for update dear

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