HUSNAA - Maaneet SS Note & chapter 2 pg32 1/1/17

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Prologue

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4zTFzMPWGLs

listen this song


Lahore ke us pehle jile ke do pargana mein pahunche ,

Resham gali ke duje kuche ke chauthe makaan mein pahunche,

Aur kehte hain jisko dooja mulk us Pakistan mein pahunche,

Likhta hoon khat main hindustan se pehloo-e-husna mein pahunche

Main to hoon baitha o Husna meri yaadon puraani mein khoya

Pal pal ko ginta, pal pal ko chunta beeti kahaani mein khoya

Patte jab jhadte Hindustaan mein yaadein tumhari ye bole

Hota ujala Hindustan mein baatein tumhari ye bola

O Husna meri ye to bata do hota hai aisa kya us gulistan mein,

Rehti ho nanhi kabootar si gum tum jahan

Patte kya jhadte hain Pakistan mein waise jaise jhadte yahan o Husna

Hota ujala kya waisa hi hai jaise hota Hindustan mein haan o Husna

Wo Heero ke Ranjhe ke nagmein mujhko ab tak aa aake satayein

Wo Bulleh Shah ke takriron ke jheene jheene saaye

Wo id ki eidi , lambi namaazein, sevaiyyon ke jhalar

Wo diwali ke diye sang mein baisakhi ke badal

Holi ki wo lakdi jinmein sang sang aanch lagayi

Lohdi ka wo dhuan jismein dhadkan hai sulgayi

O Husna meri ye to bata do lohdi ka dhuan kya ab bhi nikalta hai jaisa nikalta tha us daur mein wahan

Dhuen mein gulistaan ye barbaad ho raha hai,ek rang syaah ke ijaad ho raha hai

Heeron ke Ranjho ke nagmein kya ab bhi sune jaate hain wahan o Husna


Aur rota hai raaton mein Pakistan kya waise jaise Hindustan o Husna


wan me to continue or not ?

-kriti

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I n d e x

Prologue - 1st post

Character Sketch - See Below

Prologue with meaning - Pg 3

Chapter 1 - Pg 4

Chapter 2 - Pg 10

Chapter 3 - Pg 15

Chapter 4 - Pg 24

Chapter 5 - Pg

Chapter 6 - Pg

Edited by Devil_kriti - 10 years ago
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C h a r a c t e r S k e t c h

Maan Singh Khurana

Piya and Abhay Raichand

Rajveer and Priya Singh Khurana

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HUSNAA


Edited by CuteStrawberry - 8 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woww another story...congo-shongo CR🥳

Banner says a lot (love the way it has come out, beautiful work indeed)...a patriotic and love story...sarhadein ka fasla hai inn mohabbat karne walo ko...interesting


Prologue

Seemed quite different, though I oculdn't get some words but kinda deciphered the meaning entirely of prologue.

hmm Maan missing his love, Husnaa, and asking her how it feels in her place. He remembering her and their moments...wanting to know how she is doing and how everything happens there...quite interesting indeed.

So i guess he calls Geet as Husnaa...btw does Husnaa mean beautiful or love, sry couldn't get the exact meaning of the word😛😳

CS...simple and sweet intro😳
Edited by Cherishh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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My name z husna 🤗
This is d first thing that came ro my mind😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sounds interesting. Good luck to you!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sounds great...do continue this one...
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guyz plz chk out banner on pg 1
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Congrats for the new story :)
Can you please post the pro in English ??
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beautiful banner and C S...now waiting to read this story...

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