The Sheriff's Mail- Ordered Bride- A MG OS-Cowboy Style - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: rashmivaish


A beautiful OS for a beautiful Banner..
Lakshu kafgi tarakki kar rahi ho..lagta hai ek competition shuru karne waali ho
and the competition will be like this...
(Attention Please...
here is a Banner made by Me-Lakshmi
I want to start a competition
All are invited to take part in it
come and try to write an OS for this Banner..whoseos will be selectedas best by the Judges will get Rs. 5 lacs as the winning amount😆😆😆)
...
Well Thanks Nisha for writing a beautiful OS.
Two persons hungry for love and care went in search for each other ..and they met in some dramatic situation..
Maan... usne puri train me sirf geet ko hi bachaya ..aisa Kyun..train me to aur bhi log honge na😆😆😆
Sorry ..I was pulling your leg...
They felt some attraction for each other but were meant to be bound to some strangers and both said goodbye to eachother half heartedly to spend their life with their future partners..
OMG..they spent four days without seeing each other😲😲😲

and finally they got their sweetest surprise after their wedding when that saw their partner..Life could never be this beautiful for them
Lovely OS

PS:- Ratna 's banner is additional beauty to the concept
They are really looking the persons from the wild west


Awesome comment Rashmi 👏...banner OS contest idea is super ⭐️...but the prize money we have to think once again 😆...thank u for liking the banner 🤗

thanks image
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



competition??😲 banner ke ideas tum de do ... then we will arrange😉

5 lakhs???😲 Tum sponsor kar ahi ho?? wow... mujhe bhi thoda commisiion do na...😳😆

arrey 5 crores bhi kar doon to kya farak padta hai.. kaun sa main ya tum dene ja rahi ho😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Oh my god i absolutely loved reading your os. It was such a fresh and new idea that ive never came across. It was simple and sweet and i truly enjoyed reading it! Keep up the good work!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: dqno1

Bole toh jhakass Wahini 😆

loved loved loved it

I adored the banner that Lakshmi made and told her as such that it was more a story than just a banner!

You filled in the words that the pics had left

Awesome banner from Ratna too👏

Dhamaal collabration of minds here.

Mazaa aa gaya!

Rashmi ke 5 lacs ke liye i will compete too😆

Yaha koi likes bhi nahi deta Rashmi, tumhe 5 lacs kaise soojay?😲

Koi nahi, jaha chaah hai waha raah hai😆


arrey yaar sirf idea diya Lakshu ko
waise ye mere ideas dhdadhar maan leti hai to maine socha ye wala bhi Maan legi😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: --Ratna--

Nisha 🤗
Thank u for this awesome story inspired by Lakshmi's beautiful banner
A cowboy and his mail-order bride story...Maaneet version set in the wild wild west
Sheriff Maan is an orphan cowboy and advertises for a bride
Geet is a poor and lonely girl who sees the Ad and comes in reply
But her train is robbed when she is almost there
But our hero comes right on time to save her
He takes her away from there and takes care of her ... both are admiring each others looks...then the reality strikes them when someone calls out ''Sheriff is that your bride?'' ...he pretends it is just his duty as Sheriff to save her...she is sad because he said it was his duty and nothing else ...they wave each other a sad goodbye ...the elderly lady Savitri guides her home and shows her around...she gives her all the info about Maan...Geet cooks him a nice meal ...by the time he comes home she leaves him a note and goes to bed ...awww what a sweetheart he is ...he searched for her and covered her with a quilt ...lit the fireplace and rubbed her feet till they were warm ...Geet was so touched by his care she shed happy tears ...his note and the compliments he paid her cooking had her giggling ...the next 4 day passed in exchanging notes and not seeing each other ...both of them resigned to make the best of their upcoming marriage...finally the wedding day arrived ...the bride and groom were ready...the marriage ceremony happens...finally the moment of truth when he lifts her veil to kiss his wife...the happy couple kissing each other...cheers to the wonderful couple ...the rest of the story is left to your imagination ,...but one thing happened for sure they lived happily together forever


Waah Ratna Waah.👏
I feel like deleting my story and putting this comment in it's place. This explains the whole story perfectly and with pictures too. When I was a kid I refused to read books if they did not have pics. I think somewhere in me that child still lingers that it why I love these picturesque comments so much😆
Thanks Ratna for that superb banner. It is just perfect.
🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: SnehaMaaneet

Wow
awesome os
loved it
Sheriff Maan loved him
and last part wow amazing

Thanks yaar. Glad you liked our Sheriff😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

the apt song for me at this time...

aaj mein upar... aasmaan neeche😳

i cant believe this... meine tho bas yuhi bola tha... and my yuhi will result this awesome os, i had no idea... thankiee so much for this surprise...

will edit this after i read now...😃

I didnt had a slightest idea that some thing like this awesome story can turn up fom my simple pic... once again thanks for this ... Really meant a lot to me... Tightest jhappis to u😳

🤗Jhappies jaaneman. How could I not write, when the whole banner was screaming for a story to be told. You said it yourself that the whole thing is a story in itself, and so I thought I would try my hand at it.

I actually wanted to write a story for the Greek Gods banner, but then you had already posted a lovely one for it and to my mind the story of Eros and Psyche fitted those pics and so I did not attempt to write for that one. However when i saw this pic I was inspired😉
The story was so fresh and had this whole feel of old western style... it was really a pleaure reading this... Maan had to give an ad for a suitable bride... uff... yahaan tho bina pooche hi peeche pade hain kithne😆

two lonely souls met with a wanted poster... both looking for just love...

I loved that true cowboy style stunt u added here... wow... that was simply superb... the moment her life was in danger, he came in and saved her like an angel and swept off her feet for a ride on his horse...😆 and both shamelessly yet trying real hard to control drooling on the other😳

and i just loved the whole convo... polished style of sir and madam...typical country style

their note exchange was cute... i especially loved the one written by maan praising her cooking skill...

maan was just THE PERFECT GENTLEMAN here... does anyone like him exist?? the way he cared his future bride even before knowing or seeing her... the way he was committed to her... the way he supported her ... wow... am deewaani of him😳

and the ending ... again wow moment...what a relieved moment for them and a lovely moment for us😳

thanks for such a wonderful story ... its more special ofcourse as its based on my banner... thankie again ... but aage kya hoga?? can we get an another part of this?? please


Aagey aap ka imagination jaaney😆
I am glad you enjoyed the whole thing. I have watched a few western movies and read a few books set in the old west. I drew inspiration from those.
Glad you enjoyed the whole thing though😉
Aise baaner banate rahogi toh hume inspire karte rahogi.
Thanks Laxmi.
🤗

@ RATNA

that was a super and an apt banner for the story dear... wow... thank u
I first cracked up when I saw that banner😆
But it's perfect😛
Thank Ratna for making it.
🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: rashmivaish


A beautiful OS for a beautiful Banner..
Lakshu kafgi tarakki kar rahi ho..lagta hai ek competition shuru karne waali ho
and the competition will be like this...
(Attention Please...
here is a Banner made by Me-Lakshmi
I want to start a competition
All are invited to take part in it
come and try to write an OS for this Banner..whoseos will be selectedas best by the Judges will get Rs. 5 lacs as the winning amount😆😆😆)
...
Well Thanks Nisha for writing a beautiful OS.
Two persons hungry for love and care went in search for each other ..and they met in some dramatic situation..
Maan... usne puri train me sirf geet ko hi bachaya ..aisa Kyun..train me to aur bhi log honge na😆😆😆
Sorry ..I was pulling your leg...
They felt some attraction for each other but were meant to be bound to some strangers and both said goodbye to eachother half heartedly to spend their life with their future partners..
OMG..they spent four days without seeing each other😲😲😲

and finally they got their sweetest surprise after their wedding when that saw their partner..Life could never be this beautiful for them
Lovely OS

PS:- Ratna 's banner is additional beauty to the concept
They are really looking the persons from the wild west

I am completely in favor of the competition especially the 5 lacs.😆
I will be on the participation side, so sponsors make sure the 5 lacs is ready😛

I had so much fun writing this OS. I thought of all the cowboy cliches and added them to the story. Starting with guns and the horses😆

As for why Maan went straight for Geet...remember she was being held at gun point?
So obviously any cop a.k.a the sheriff will obviously first try to rescue the hostage na?😃

I hope you enjoyed it half as much as I enjoyed writing it😆.

Isn't Ratna's banner just perfect?😉

Thanks Rashmi for being here.😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: honeygrape

awesomme story...thanx to lekshmis banner,...can we have anothre part for this


Thanks Purvi😃
Don't know what more I would write. To me the story is complete. If I think of anything I will add, but for now this story is complete😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Ameeraalikhan

Lovely so nisha😊

Beautiful banner as always Lakshmi


Thanks Ameera.
Yeah the bigger thanks goes to Laxmi though.😳

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