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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan angry on Brij...Maan doing sword practice...becoz of brij and adi stop him...Maan has to take care of geet and pinky he is worried...all enjoying in their secret place..

Flash back... 😳...
MSK ek kiss se darr raha hain..😆 Awesome update...😃
Edited by svani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 14






maan look to that direction and get shock of his life he mummer ye mere sath ku hota hai unko bhi yahi jagaha mili thi and god can geet have to saw that ek to wo ki** he put his hand on own cheek and now this lo bhugato MSK


there are two dove who all lost in there love and geet look to the and ask she first feel they fighting with each other but there they with each other just like adi bhai and bahahi she have so much question so she ask maan


poor maan geet ke sawalo ka mara try to diveret her but her eyes glue on that birds


she lost in deep thought and ask kahi wo adi bhai aur bahabhi jaise pyyar to nahi kar rahe hai na


matlab birds love each other fhir muje kon pyyar karega maan feel pain in her voice yes she dont know about love and all but she start to feel alone now maan start to understand adi word marriage so soon and this bal vivah and vidhva


he so much want to hug her console her but ...he is confused


main hu na tumare sath at last maan say softly


geet - so u also love me like them lakin u are not my husband na than This husband word start to hammer on maan mind ...


geet - i know u r my krishana and me radha krishana radaha ka husband nahi tha na maa ne bola muje


maan get happy with geet ans and ask ma ne bola


geet nodded in yes sachi she say u r kahna for me so main radha and u r my khanaji na maan heart feel peace with geet word yes they are friend like them


maan want to hug her and god fulfill his wish same time some squarral went near from geet and in fear geet hug maan but maan hug her tightly like he want to hide from all his new feel start to took toll on him adi kiss image bird kiss image start to come in his mind maan cup her face and bend little to her face and brush his lips on her rosy soft lips he don't know what is he doing but he feel it is right and perfect both froze in their place when first time their lips touch each other ...whole world stop for second to look this new shurwat ek anokhi prem kahani ki jo na kisi ne deki na suni hogi ek Amer pream khata jo her ek genration main sunai jaayegi maan aur geet ki kahani maaneet ki kahani





geet feel something new she feel like it is right always right his hard lips she gulp hard but she don't feel scared she trust him her bila , veer baba son maan singh khurana maan never do anything only touch his lips to her nothing else he want to live in that one moment his whole life dont know why but he want to do that so he do that








geet more push herself to maan hug they looking like fairy tale ke prince princess sun orange light on them and all silence around with greenery its looking so divine so beautiful


maan come back in reality with sound of foot step and he went away from her little bit geet cheek turn red in shyness ...she feel so shy to look into maan eyes


other side maan happy yes happy he know that his feeling for geet is more than friend and he is happy that geet accepted his action don't get scared or hit him or stop him and her red red cheek saying all is good maan closed his eyes and mummer baba main galat nahi hu na main galat nahi hu na and he feel veer baba smiley face in his closed eyes and he get that his baba blessing with him and her


maan went near geet and took her hand in his hand say geet pata nahi main wo ku kiya lakin main aur mera dil jante hai ke wo galat nahi tha lakin ye baat tum kisiko mat batana yaha tak ma aur bhahi ko bhi thik hai




geet nodded in yes her eyes glued in their hand when maan touch her and took her hand in his hand she feel current pass from her body her nave mind don't get meaning of all this but she know one thing veer baaba ka son galat nahi ho sakta she look to maan with turst a unconditional trust on maan


maan feel proud of their relation sabse alag bina kisi naam ka trust, worship pooja ka pyyar ka




precap


teaser wala



Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mahi teri stories padhte rehna padta hai.. but samajh hi nahi aata k kya comment du...
abhi bhi pata nahi chal raha.. ki kya likhun...
but sach me mujhe darr lag raha hai.. Maaneet ya Adi pinky ke saath kuch bura mat hone dena... plzzz pata hai ... teri story me sab achha hota nahi hai... but phir bhi... Maan jab Gunda banega tab Geet ko mat khatam kar dena...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
too good
maaneet cmng more close
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mahi jis tarah se apne yee update likha I m speechless.
It is one of d best parts I hav read till now 👏
Brilliant
Maaneet ek anokha rishta 😊
Edited by kamnagupta7 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n double superb updates! beautifully written! Maaaneet get closer! Maan realises his feelings! Geet shy! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear Mann is feeling for geet and he thinks what he did is right hope brij did not do any think wrong with them
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Posted: 10 years ago
now maan realize his feelings for geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
read both the parts and they are just awesome


sooo much innocence in maaneet's words
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part dear...ye maan tho bechara humesha fas jata h. 😆 .. 😉 ...waiting for next part ...

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