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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry for the delay, kaan pakkad ke! 😃

wanted to read peacefully


Finally the moment arrived

Absence made the heart fonder❤️

Aur kyun na ho?

After all Maan ke arms mein dance karne ke baad Vicky kya cheez hai😆

I liked the spirit that returned to her after she made up her mind

It was like a load off her shoulders

Cool update.

Nice one Aditi
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They are said to be life altering events for a reason Geet. But they make you stronger and even better person.
I agree with the sentiment

She finally overcame her past and can look forward to a future.

I liked the scene at the beginning when she was reminiscing about how she met Maan

She had indeed come a long way



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But reality was different. She was in black jeans and a white polo Tshirt with a high ponytail without any trace of make up. Maan was in his Tracks and Tshirt. It was more like a casual meeting than a date. However it was special. In that moment Geet realized that sometimes the simplicities of reality can surpass the intricacies of imagination because right then in that moment everything was just perfect.

Their first date was also like their first meet; unplanned and ordinary but a defining moment. Geet also had the epiphany that with the right person any moment is the right moment.


These lines are so true


they are so laid back and calm. I want some romance soon. It is their time now😃


the idea of keeping the relationship a secret is causing me to hope for some office naughtiness


loved it


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: BrainEaterOwl

Wow now those double updates were really beautiful.

Loved how Geet has started seeing things so positively in her life after realizing her feelings for Maan. Even watching a sunrise makes her calm, at peace n contend unlike before.


And m excited about Meera-Sid visiting to Geet to Mumbai.



And the marine drive meet was really a surprise. It dint feel like they werent talking or say kinda ignoring each other after Lonvala fiasco. In fact when they met it was quite like how two friends meet, casually n warmly. And what followed once they met was just seemed so natural. Loved the way things proceeded n also the flow of events/conversation. It dint at all sounded forced or rather say sudden. It was like one thing lead to another n they both opened up to other about their feelings, apprehension, fears, insecurities n lists just goes on...



Even though i knew her feelings, i really dint expect that she would tell him about it in all honesty just in the first meet after they meet each other after 1 week of separation. I thought she will shy around but she totally surprised me with her frankness. Guess Maan makes her very comfortable. But then like i said it went in flow. I seriously loved to the level Geet opened up on the first day itself. She admitted she missed him. Then the heartfelt confession. Her fears about his expectations and that she is dating THE MSK. It felt like many things happened in just a day. They have progressed so much already, it dint felt that it was just the start of their new relationship. And then their first date. I guess these updates were full of surprises for me.



And this Maan, what should i say about him? He is truly too good to be true, indeed. His level of understanding n patience always amazes me. Even now he was ready to give Geet all the time she needed n was so so understanding when she shared her apprehensions. And then his generosity, how easily without thinking he offered his pent house and tried solving her problems. If you havent shown his insecurity about that age gap b/w Maaneet, i would have simply considered him some unreal creature. And also that he is hiding something from her may be cos he is scared she might hate him once she comes to know about his past. If things werent in updates i would really thought like he is just isnt a normal human being and some god who is just too perfect. I dont know but i always feel people should not be flawless. So thank you Maan isnt one in here.



I really enjoyed reading both the updates. Now m excited to know Meera-Sid reactions over Geet's relationship. And also hoping that both would meet Maan.



-Sanjana!


First of all thanks for such large comment in details! They really make me happy!😊 Honestly while writing that part I was nervous, What if the part turned out to be too simple! There was no drama, climax or anti climax. Just two people talking and confessing their feelings. But the response from you guys made me happy that you enjoyed that part.

I myself don't like flawless characters. They are unreal and I wanted the Maan of my story to be as real as possible. Maan has his flaws just like any other person in the world. He will open up slowly as they go deeper into the relationship. Till then I hope you are gonna enjoy the story.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ammu5

awesome updates...finally geet accepted hr feelings

Thanks a lot dear!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 31 - vicky helped her to look into diff aspect. it was much needed for her... geet realised she missed maan & started loving him...he made place in her heart..

I liked pari & naina were worried for her...both's thinking were diff but they realy concern for her


Yes dear! To realize the presence of someone a little absence is required.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 32 - vicky is so sweet and understanding...

liked meera & sid talk..both visiting mumbai as geet wanted to talk face to face...
geet did not hesitate to confess her feelings..she was suddenly opened her heart in front of maan that he got a pleasent shock
how he confirmed her feelings were from her heart that she not taken this decision by anyone's pressure...
very beautifully and realistic convo bet them..


I am happy you liked how I portrayed Vicky and the sid-meera conversation. I was totally nervous about the convo between Maan and Geet and it relieved me to see that well taken by all of you. Thanks a lot dear!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

part 33 - geet shared about meer-sid's stay problem with maan and he readily offered his pentahouse for four days..

he agreed that she can talk about their relation with meer-sid and agreed to keep secret from others...
i liked geet slowly slowly opening her worry about them, the huge diff bet their life style..but maan paitently made her understand his pov..


They have differences but they connect with each other at a different level that helps Geet talk about her worries and insecurities freely. I am glad you enjoyed it.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashmi234

loved both updates
cant believe ...geet accepted her feelings for maan
omg... maaneet in relationship
plz continue soon


Thanks a lot dear!! I believe it was time for them to begin their journey togather😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply fabulous
loved it.


Thanks a lot dear!😊

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