~Akhri Khat~ LAST PART pg/20 || July 23rd ||

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BloodDiamond

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Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Lovely update 👏

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Awesome update...

geet is orphan...
Both loved each other and got married...
But i feel that geet is not doing her best to save the marriage...

.Loved it..

Continue soon

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MystiqueDew

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Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Congrats for the new story :)

Nice pro

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lehr

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Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

congrats for the new story dear

awesome update

loved it

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Her loneliness had made her hard, and thus preventing her from opening up her and enjoying the love and care she gets.

I can't blame Geet here, coz she has lived all her life like one.

With time and understanding things, she will turn to a great wife, DIL and SIL.

Nice start.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

welcome back. congrats on the new story! Interesting prologue! Fab start! Superbly written! Past n present well incorporated! Maaneet married - love marriage! Bt after they came to India everything changed. They argue! Geet leaving! The aunty stops her to talk to her. update soon

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Purpleparadise

@Purpleparadise

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Awesome update...geet don't want to live with maan family

hope she understand maan...waiting for next update

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Pooja Verma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

since geet is an orphan & had lived her whole life alone so it is genuine that she will have problem living with more people in the house. but she forgets one thing that CHANGE is the nature's rule. maan lost his father & now his mother & sister are his responsibility. rather than supporting him at this time she is being selfish thinking about her & maan's life.

m waiting to see what happens which make him to say those words to her

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Interesting prologue...
Geet can't adjust in joint family...well fr sm1 who has lived alone fr so long its bound to be difficult...
Geet leaving maan...waiting fr nxt part...