~Akhri Khat~ LAST PART pg/20 || July 23rd || - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Awesome update...

geet is orphan...
Both loved each other and got married...
But i feel that geet is not doing her best to save the marriage...

.Loved it..

Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Congrats for the new story :)
Nice pro
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for the new story dear
awesome update
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Her loneliness had made her hard, and thus preventing her from opening up her and enjoying the love and care she gets.
I can't blame Geet here, coz she has lived all her life like one.
With time and understanding things, she will turn to a great wife, DIL and SIL.
Nice start.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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welcome back. congrats on the new story! Interesting prologue! Fab start! Superbly written! Past n present well incorporated! Maaneet married - love marriage! Bt after they came to India everything changed. They argue! Geet leaving! The aunty stops her to talk to her. update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update...geet don't want to live with maan family
hope she understand maan...waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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since geet is an orphan & had lived her whole life alone so it is genuine that she will have problem living with more people in the house. but she forgets one thing that CHANGE is the nature's rule. maan lost his father & now his mother & sister are his responsibility. rather than supporting him at this time she is being selfish thinking about her & maan's life.
m waiting to see what happens which make him to say those words to her
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Interesting prologue...
Geet can't adjust in joint family...well fr sm1 who has lived alone fr so long its bound to be difficult...
Geet leaving maan...waiting fr nxt part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loving it!!! Close to reality.
Misunderstandings do happen

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