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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 5

Mr Handa was sitting in his room, it was the next morning 5 am, though he was an early riser but would wake-up by 6 am if had no commitments, he was all lost in his thoughts and only thing in his thoughts was his daughter Geet and her future...it was time for his princess to get married and go where she actually belonged. However strong a man may be, the thought of parting from his daughter can always manage to bring some tears in his eyes. Though he was angry currently, but could not control his emotions when alone.

Though he was a man of plans and had already planned of Geet's marriage as soon as her results are up as she wanted to marry only after getting the degree, and he had also said he won't force her on that part. But the destiny is always more powerful before any plan...probably that's why they say

"Man proposes, God disposes".

He sighed, and recalled how his behaviour and anger troubled his family, his 2 most precious possessions his wife and daughter...he's glad that they love him so much that they never complained of whatever he says in anger as they very well know at that time his heart and mind are shut and only anger speaks.

But he was very helpless this time as this was the most sensetive issue for him as he simply HATED love marriages, not that he HATED love or didn't believe in it, but sometimes some incidences may just change your perception to life, also by his own personal experience he had a strong belief that "love happens only after marriage".

He also realised that he is being unfair to Geet right now, by asking her such questions, not that he didn't trust her, he just cannot stop himself from making sure about it, as there's only one thing in which he can never compromise and that is Geet's happiness.

As these thoughts were running in his mind, he decided to review all the events that happened since the last evening, the root cause of all the mess, when a young man came to meet him in his office.

-------fb------

Yesterday 6 pm at Handa's office

Mr. Handa was sitting in his cabin reading some files when his intercom buzzed. His secretary informed him that CA Maan Khurrana is up to see him. He was about to refuse, but somehow couldn't, maybe that was the power of the two letters "CA" before his name. He asked his secretary to send him in.

He heard a knock after two minutes and allowed the person in. A young man in his late twenties, looking quite professional yet handsome in his formals, entered his cabin and greeted him. Mr. Handa asked Maan to sit.

Mr. Handa : so what brings you here Mr Khurrana..?

Maan (spoke making eye-contact with him) : Well sir, I would directly come to the point as I don't know to beat around the bush and believe that both your's and my time is precious.

Maan paused for few seconds waiting for a reaction. When Mr. Handa gestured him to continue...he spoke again.

Maan (spoke softly but confidently) : I am here with a proposal. I want to marry your daughter.

Mr. Handa was taken aback with this sudden proposal, though he was planning for Geet's marriage and had already asked the broker to look for prospective grooms for Geet, but didn't expect the (prospective) groom himself to come straight with proposal that too so early.

Mr. Handa was processing Maan's words while Maan was waiting for his reply.

Since Mr. Handa was very shocked and loss of words but didn't wanted to show that to Maan, he decided to play safe for a while and know the whole of Maan's side of story, obviously he had heard Maan's name in the market as one of the successful CA's and perfect in his work so wanted to give him a fair chance.

Mr. Handa (spoke finally) : Don't you think...your father should be here with this proposal and not you...? As such matter's need an elder's advice.

Maan (answered with straight face) : No i don't.

To this Mr. Handa gave a confused expression..Maan continued

Maan : because I don't have one.(he paused again, and spoke again with a disgust this time)

He's dead.

Maan answered with a hint of hatredness on the mention of his father, which was enough for Mr. Handa to know what he actually meant by DEAD...!

Mr. Handa was again taken aback with his straight forward approach and confidence on himself. But he he needed something more to judge him fairly as we cannot judge someone by the nature of their parents or anyone else for that matter.

Mr. Handa : And why do you think I should accept your proposal. I know you are a well established person, good-looking, self-sufficient and successful, but you are not the only one with these qualities there are many others out there too.

Maan : I LOVE HER ( he said, as if using his last weapon or what we call a brahmastra)

But what Maan didn't knew is this was a bad move, as soon as those three words reached the ears of Mr. Handa he stiffened, and that reaction of his didn't go unnoticed by Maan.

Maan for a second thought that he made a mistake by saying that, but than he thought how can loving someone be a mistake...? It was a god's gift to man, the most beautiful feeling.

While this was going on in Maan's mind, Mr. Handa was badly fuming, hiding it behind his stiffness as he hated to show his emotions to anyone, and it meant anyone at all, his mind was stuck at the word LOVE and he could never approve of that no matter what. So he decided to dismiss Maan, which Maan could read from his expressions. So before Mr. Handa would ask him to leave, Maan decided to speak..

Maan : its been...

But Mr. Handa stopped him by showing his hand and spoke-up sternly..

Mr. Handa : well young man, I have listened to your part of the story. Now, I would like it if you wait for my response, leave you contact details with my secretary, I would get back to you as soon as i have decided upon you proposal. please excuse me now.

Saying this he shifted his gaze to his file, indicating end of conversation and gesture to Maan that he may leave.

After Maan left, Mr. Handa immediately dialed his broker (marriage broker) who also happened to be the brother of one of his friend and asked him to get him a list of best proposals for Geet asap. But the broker said it will take time, and he can give it at the earliest by day after tomorrow early morning, he had to agree having no choice.

He was now fuming in anger, the only thing he was dreading all these years since gest's birth was she getting into this mess, he had already made it clear to Geet and Rano that Geet is not allowed to be in love, and he knew she won't do something like that but then if all say "pyar kiya nahi jaata...bass ho jata hai" then there must be some truth in it...also he thought "taali ek haath se nahi bajti (you cannot clap with one hand)"
and all these thoughts just added up to his anger taking it to the 7th heaven.

With this state of mind, he decided to go home late so that he can buy sometime to think on the issue in all possible ways...but as the time ticked by...his need to go to Geet, ask her this question and hear a no increased like anything, turning his restlessness to anxiety and anger.

Then his thought went back to his past, he had only remembered his hate to love marriages and burried the reason deep somewhere in his heart.

He recalled that it was around some 30 years ago when he lost whole of his family in an accident, though he was already young around 20 in age, but was vulnerable and alone, it was that time when his Mamaji (maternal uncle) helped him in all the possible ways be it physically, morally, emotionally or financially.

In just 2-years he had a new small family with his mamaji-mamiji and sister Meena, who was elder to him by 2 years...everything was smooth when one day suddenly his di eloped with her lover, got married to him and returned with him...mamaji immediately disowned her as he never believed in love and upon that eloping was highly unethical for him, a bigger crime than committing a murder. Soon after that mamaji had a major heart-attack and died...mamiji's death followed shortly as she could not bear 2 shocks back to back.

But in all this one person, who even after surviving just couldn't take the pain, as his whole world collapsed again in front of his eyes, and that was the last day he believed that a feeling called LOVE between a man and woman who are not already bound by the sacred knot is not SIN. The last day he had expressed his emotions. And rest was all history

.

Mr. Handa : NO..! that can't be...my daughter can never do this to me.


He shouted and his thoughts about the past broke with his own voice.
He decided to end all this up asap, and left for home.






more of this part in the next post..coming up shortly😉



Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

He reached home by 11 pm and moved to his room directly and immediately summoned his wife to have a talk about all this.


mr handa (angrily) : where's geet...?

rano : she slept...

He was not convinced but didn't push as he knew his current anger, so he decided to confront rano right now instead of geet


mr handa : what do you do all day..?

rano : ji...??

mr handa (sternly) : aisa kya karti ho purey din that you can't supervise what kids are doing..?
you should keep an eye on what they do all day, who they meet, and whom they talk on phone, and all...but no you are more intrested in your so called outings with your friends...bachhe ager bigad jaye toh tumhe usse kya fark padta hai...


he paused for a few seconds then continued

mr handa : i want her to be married asap

rano : paar aise achanak...? aakhir baat kya hui hai...?

mr handa (was in no mood to answer her...as something else was bothering him than anything and that was the word LOVE by Maan) : mujhe geet se ye ummeed nahi thhi...bahut disappoint kiya usne mujhe

rano : aap shant ho jaye..mai baat karungi geet se...wo mujhe sabb batati hai kuchh chhupati nahi

mr handa : bass abb baat karne ka koi fayada nahi...maine faisla karr liya hai

rano : thik hai aapko jo thik lage wo kariye...bass mere aakhri sawal ka jawab de dijiye...kya geet ne aaj tak kabhi aapki baat kaati hai...ya fir aisa kuchh kiya jo aap ko pasand nahi...? you know she didnt...toh kya uska itna bhi haq nahi ki usse safai ka ek mauka miley...?

This made him think. He knew his geet well, he trusted his up-bringing, but with all the happenings around the society he had a hard time believing anyone blindly. He spoke after few mins

mr handa : mai kal kaam se ja raha...6 pm wapas aaunga.

( and rano gets his message)

After that he lied on the bed, pretending to sleep..but could he..?

The conversation with Maan was going on in the back of his mind. He kept thinking all night

He had an imp official work to look into tomorrow, though he knew he will not be able to concentrate a bit on that, but his physical appearance was needed there...also he had given Rano a chance to talk to Geet..

Finally he decided its good to buy some time, as the broker also will be up only on day after tomorrow and if he can give Maan a fair chance than why not his very own daughter...she deserved an opportunity of being heard.

With all these thoughts a light sleep took him over and he slept.

Morning he woke up and left for his work, all through the way he was occupied with the same thoughts.

He finished his work somehow and returned, the return journey being no different.

He entered his house at 6, and moved to room, where his wife followed him, he didn't speak immediately as he believed "silence speaks more than words" so he was judging Rano's expression. When she spoke up...

rano : shall i call geet...?

mr handa looked up at her and she knew it meant "not now"
finally he decided to speak

mr handa : did you talk to her..?

rano : yes

mr handa : what did she say

rano : she doesn't love anyone. (she said directly)

mr handa : are you sure..?

rano : i trust my daughter

mr handa (felt offended with her words and spoke sternly) : i trust her too but that doesn't mean i will become blind and deaf...!

he really felt bad with her tone tone and words but coud care less, as right now he wanted to see geet

rano : i'm sure she isn't lying as she never lies.

mr handa : go call her

rano ( reluctantly ) : aapko nahi lagta its a bit too early for marriage...she is not ready.

mr handa (sternly) : right now i want you to call her and not defend her.

He knew she was right, it was early for her marriage, not that she was very young or something but that he was rushing with the topic suddenly.

Rano left to call Geet, while he was processing what she said, he knew that he was over-doing everything and hurting that in process which hurt him back equally..but his insecurity was not letting him let go...all that Rano spoke did bring a bit of relief to him...but somehow a bit of doubt still lingered, probably it was due to that deep buried untreated pain that never left even after 3 long decades.

Geet entered the room.. he could easily read her hurt expressions even she hid it perfectly just like he used to.

geet : papa...you called me..?

mr handa : hmm...sit need to talk
(to rano) want to talk to her alone

mr handa : you know what it is about..?

geet : yes

mr handa : you want to say something ...?

geet : no...i said all to mom..there's nothing more from my side to add.

Her straight answers amused him, he knew his daughter is grown up, but the realization came up right now.

mr handa : so then...are you ready for marriage...? ( he asked, using his last weapon as he wanted to check as many times as possible, himself not knowing the point where he will be assured about this)

He saw the shock in geet's face, he knew she will be, but tan the sudden change in her emotions also didn't go un-noticed by him

geet : i can neither refuse nor question your decision ever and you know that.

At this moment he could not hide his emotion in his eyes...a feel of proud came up on its own, and he was glad she read it too, but he immediately masked his emotions again. And was ready with the next question which was completely out of context for geet, but very importanat for him.

mr handa : who is MAAN KHURRANA ...?

He asked to make sure if she knew him and to what extent, on that sudden question she was quite while he was waiting for her reply..
and suddenly it came from her as if she wanted to confirm.

geet : maan khurrana the CA...?

mr handa ( nodded and spoke) : yes...do you know him??

geet : yes...i know him

He was again slipping to his anger mode slowly...but continued the conversation.

mr handa : have his number..?

geet : yes i do...! (confusion was evident in her voice)

mr handa : how you know him and why did you exchange numbers...?

geet : umm...he is the best tutor for tax in the town and we used to attend his classes during IPCC, its like 3 years back and number we were supposed fill in forms while his i needed for emergency if i had any doubt.

Came her straight reply as if trying to state the fact. But with that he didn't miss the feel of proud she had while talking about him, it seemed she was proud to know him, be his student.

mr handa listened to her...he was processing her words

There was a silence in the room for about next 20 mins, after that geet spoke...

geet (coughed to break his thoughts and spoke when he looked up) : papa mai jaaon...? (she asked)

mr handa ( became serious again and spoke) : hmm...be ready its your engagement next monday followed by marriage next month.

The conversation with Geet brought the final relief to him. He was now 100% sure...no no 110% sure that his daughter was no-where at fault. Maybe Maan loved her or he didn't, that wasn't his concern anymore. He was happy that his daughter was not into this love mess and he was not left with even 0.00000001% doubt after the respect he saw in Geet's eyes for Maan, the man who was a "teacher" to her, he repeated it again and again to make himself sure...his anger was long gone now.

But his all relief was short-lived...

As he realized what all he did in fit of anger, he pre-poned Geet's marriage, leave marriage its one month away, he's supposed to get her engaged next week. The last part was completely a slip of tongue, as he had thought to say that if geet said she loves Maan or anyone one else for that matter.

His mind stopped working...he said all that without thinking the consequences, and now he cannot back off as he knew by now his daughter would have already dreamt of everything as he had seen that hint of sudden rush of emotions on her face before she left.

He was in a fix now...he had asked the broker to come also, and suddenly wanted to back out from the marriage thing as after knowing Geet's side of story he had no heart to marry her off so soon

What a pitiable condition I'am in..the thought to himself, and started to think of some solution. His thought process was broken by the sound of door and he saw his wife entering and lying on her side of the bed quietly, and he knew she wanted to finally call it a day as she had enough of all the mess since last night.

He too joined her on bed shortly, to give a break to his thought process and take some rest as he was has been so restless since last evening. His eye's went to his wife's face, worry quite visible on her face even when she was in deep sleep, he softly kissed her forehead and decided to discuss everything with her first thing in morning as soon as she wakes up. She had every right on her daughter's life and equal say in all his decisions. He took her in his arms and slept off with a little peace.

-------fb ends------

As Rano woke up and found herself near him, she immediately knew what happened at night after she slept off, she smiled, finally he was all relieved and now she knew he would tell her everything, she looked at his face and found him in thoughts again, she frowned thinking what is bothering him now..? but decided to break his thoughts

Rano : Goodmorning...! (she said sweetly to break his chain of thoughts)

His thoughts broke with her voice, and he looked at her too...her smiling morning face and sweet wish made his morning look actually good. He smiled back acknowledging her wish. He was now sure that all his problems are over and if some worry is still left, he can easily sort it off with her by his side.

Precap : Saturday conference...!

Note : so how was maan's entry...?😆
laga jhatka😛😆
back to the first point...shadi hogi..??
keep thinking😛

ps: plz check the note below

Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Note

about update
the part in ittalics is the convo from prvious parts but with the POV of mr handa so pls go through them again

about story
the story will soon take a U-turn
and as i said it will be a rom-com
so pls stay tuned

about me
well the sad news is
i am suddenly caught up with loads of work
that includes 2 presentation, 1 project and 9-hr a day class, not to forget exam
bt all will end by 31st july
so updates will be little slow till then


ps: please leave you prcious comments as i'm very unsure about how this part came up...


Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


Hi aina!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

me back

Update was simply dear!!!!!!!!!!


as i guessed real culprit in all this is our beloved MSK 😉 😆

His entry was outstanding !!!!!!!!!!! 😎

Mr.Handa is going crazy with the turn of events so as geet!!!!!!!!!! but our maan babu uska kya

haalat hai dear?????? 😕

Ab geet ko babaji bhi bacha nai sakta na !!!!!!!!!! 😆

Ab handaji chup-chap marriage ki tayyari shuru kijiye!!!!!!! 😆


its getting more and more intresting with more updates!!!!!!!!!

aina iam impatient dear jaldi shadi karado indono ka!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kel khatam dukaan band hojayega!!!!!!!!!! 😆


waiting 4 next !!!!!!!!!

do cont soon




Uma/Basanti...



Edited by umamaaneet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yehlo yeh sab maan ki wajah se huwa hai par banda tho straight forward nikla, dekho kitna acha munda hai directly jaakar baap se hi haath maanga aur yeh mr.handa tho ek dum aag baboola hogaya. ab kya hoga geet ka aur maan ka.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow maan brought the proposal that he love her waiting for next

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Posted: 11 years ago
Mr.Handa too bad
trust ur daughter tat her decisions would b rt
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Posted: 11 years ago
haha..maan..
sab confusions ke peeche maan hai..
he strtly came to handa asking hands of geet
but he doesnt like it n even doubted geet
n questioned her too
n decided her marriage so soon without any clarifications
poor girl now in dreams of marriage
par maan kese manayega is handa ko
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Posted: 11 years ago
i love one thing..maan is already in love with geet
par geet tho teacher ki nazar se use dekthi hai..
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice part
love the maan's entry
with whom geet will marry
waiting

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