SS-Falling for My Wife/Last part updtd

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Get_a_life

@Get_a_life

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#421

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beautiful part...

umm...
maan big J
aur khud jo uss chudail (natasha) k pichhe madrate rehta hai uska kuchh nahi 😳

anyway...
dono ki life me so many ups and downs chal raha...
and the baby thing...
making maan restless..
n geet ka toh pata nahi 😆

umm..
u changed the story a bit frm here...
well i got little confused..
bt lets see..
nxt part may clear off things more 😊

m not a new reader 😆

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aglaeca9

@aglaeca9

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#422

Very nice... continue soon... n pm me plz...

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nukhba1991

@nukhba1991

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#423

its been 4 and a half day since u updated last ... eagerly w8ing for the next update and ur flowless and awesome work ...plz dont make us w8 for long :(
missin u n ur update :(

update ssooon

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#424

Mahi 🤗

For the late comment 😳...was meaning to but it got delayed somehow or the other...hoping my long comment will make up for it...Maan rushed to work so that he does not see Geet ...the last night incident stll fresh in his mind...he is so in love and mesmerised by his wife's beauty...the necklace scene was so beautiful ...the way he got lost in her was so obvious his sister teased him about it...The flowers sent by Natasha were irritating 😡...loved Geet's explantion of how beautiful a gift flowers were...it was truly romantic...but our Maan is so J now imagining all the guys who must have gifted her flowers ...where ,when and how flashing in his brain ...there small tea/lunch fight ..

The library scene 😳...the way she comes in search of a book all dressed for bed ...our brooding hero wondering if one of the books has a flower pressed by her...the way he corners her near the shelf ...their kiss...the newly awakened feelings causing him to loose control...the same feelings causing confusion in her...the fear she may loose more than she already lost to him...his pain seeing her tears and hearing her words ...the anger that makes him lash at her ...hurting himself in the process...

Thank u so much for this awesome update👏...plz continue soon...waiting to see how Geet solves Shefali's problem of going to Jay's mall opening...and many more Maaneet scenes

Edited by --Ratna-- - 11 years ago

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#425

waiting for next part...

update soon!!!!!!!

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#426

books mein phool..that was poetic..again Maan misunderstood, he is relating everything to her lover of his own imagination, and in this he is getting annoyed and hurting her more...lovely update.

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 11 years ago