MG FF :Saath Nibhana Sathiya pt 12 n note pg 107 11/may/17 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved all the parts, so its a start of new life for maan and geet, hope they balances each other and respects their relation in every way. Just hope maan takes good care of geet unlike her jijaji
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm! Lovely updates! Well written! Pls change part 4 to part 3! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Maaneet are married...loved both parts..awesome.😊 waiting for the next..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Awesome ... liked both d parts ...
thanks for double updates ...
continue soon ...
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awesome update
love it
waiting for next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Both updates are really nice.
Cont soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so they started their married life
it was very normal starting of their relations and I loved it
please edit again as we can find an few places Riddhima instead of Geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for new story
Loved the CS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you so much guyz for all the likes and comments

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 4

when maan is in washroom...geet change the bedsheet...and take out the maan's cloths from wardrobe...and then change herself in this...with matching jewellerely



[hmmm guyz I'm not going to tell u everytime...that what geet wears in her hhand...so guyz here's the pic of geet wedding chura...and she'll remove this chura with some rituls...after 1 month of pregnency...



no makeup just lip gloss and kohl in eyes...and sindoor in her mang...
geet place the mangtikka on her head and then bathroom door click open and maan comes just in towel...around his waist...maan look towards the dressing table where geet is standing both look towards each other through the mirror...maan is dumbfounded by the geet's beauty...maan comes near and stand beside geet and his hand around her waist hold her protectively...he places his chin on her shoulder and whispers in her ear...

Maan :u look beautiful in red...(and geet blushes...)(maan turns geet and now both are face to face...)(they both are lost in each other eyes...maan's hand is still on her waist...and geet's hand on his bare chest)(and their beautiful moment broke by the sudden knock...maan quickly wear his kurta and jeans...and geet cover her face with saree pallu...actually the sequence work on pallu covers her face..geet opens the door and found annie on the door who comes to call geet...

Annie :hey Bhabhi aap par ye saree toh bohot pyari lag rhi hai...aur aur jyada sundar lagegi jab aap ye apne face se itna lamba ghunghat uthaoge...ohho...main bhi kaha baato main lag gyi...chaliye...terrace par aapka intezar ho rha hai...

Maan :princess terrace par...lekin rasam ki tyariyan toh niche hall main hui hai na...

Annie :ha bhaiya mooh dikhayi niche hall main hi hogi...lekin pehle tulsi pooja hogi...aur tulsi pooja toh terrace par hi hogi...(maan nodded...)...bhaiya aap bhi jaiye apni study main aapka P.A aaya hua hai...

Maan :ha abhi ja rha hoon...

(geet and leave for terrace)
(on terrace...ananya...and some married ladies...and unmarried girls waiting for geet...and when geet come...with the instructions of ananya geet complete the pooja...and they all go downstairs...)

(In the living area...Mooh dikhayi rasam started...all comes lift the veil and praises geet beauty...and polite behaviour...and keep gifts...in her lap and then annie takes the gift from her lap and place on the table...)(geet touch the feet of elders...and greet youngers with sweet smile...)(In last Ananya and dadi comes...ananya lift her veil and places on her head...)(dadi comes...and gift gold kangans to geet)

Savitri :bahu ye kangan...mujhe meri maa ne diye the aur kaha tha main apni beti ko uski shaddi par doon...lekin meri beti toh hui nhi...jab ananya bahu ne mere hath main pahlei baar maan ko diya tha jab maine soch liya tha...ye kangan...main apne maan ki bahu ko doongi...aur aaj ye waqt aa gya hai...(dadi wears geet golg bangles...and geet touch her feet...)...
(ananya come and keep a open jewelery box in geet's lap...)



Ananya :bahu ye humara pushteni haar hai...meri dadi saas ne maaji ko diya maaji ne mujhe diya...aur ab ye main tumhe de rhi hoon...is haar par haq sirf ghar ki badi bahu ka hota hai...ise humesha sambhal kar rakna...(and then geet touches ananya's feet and ananya blessed her)..sada suhagan raho...(afer the mooh dikhayi rsam finishes...snacks serves to the gyest...and they are start gossiping about their bahus, dresses , jewellerys...but geet is still on her seat...and getting hungry...(savitri dadi is a strict women...but she also very caring...)
(she call annie)
Savitri :anwesha ja apni bhabhi ko leja aur khana parosde apni bhabhi k liye aur apne bhaiya ko bhi bula le usne bhi kuch nhi khaya hoga...(annie nodded...and takes geet with her to dinning area...and goes upstairs to call maan from his study...)(when maan comes geet and maan eat their food in silence and after finishing the food...maan leave for the study to finish his remaining work...

After lunch...and evening snacks...all guest leave for their homes...

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