Manneet new os Anhokha Bnadhan part 2, 3(A), 3(B) on 8 and 12,20 - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
lpvely story ..
maan geet dor dor ..
well maan ki galti hai ..
but yeh chori chori wala pyaar bhi mast hai
waiting for next update ...
post soon plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
part 3(B)


poor geet who feel goose bump on her whole body just mummer ,why he stop , she think that she is talking in mind but she say loudly but maan just go out from her room and send her sms

geet

don't worry bada wala kiss bhi milega without stop but time aane par

maan

our poor girl just sharam se pani pani just hide in duvet

maan just went to his room and start to think oh my god is he really love with sam because he never feel pulling like this just now he feel for geet its different , in 5 year relation he never ever go so near to sam , than really that is love or mere attraction or destiny want to meet me with her don't know but he love this feeling anxiety longing for her ...he just enjoy this hide and seek game from last five month , geet herself don't know that I just follow her every wear , shop ,mandir ,darga every wear all that image of geet some to start to his mind


he feel like she is life of his every day it start with her and end with her when

Na Hai Yeh Pana

Na Khona He Hai

Tera Na Hona, Jaane

Kuyn Hona He Hai

Tum Se Hi Din Hota Hai

Surmayi Shaam Aati Hai

Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

Har Ghadi Saans Aati Hai

Zindagi Kehlati Hai

Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

he imagine her eyes it every time give another expression like that day when he sms , chuha or his kiss on cheek and this pick oh love her,her face so shock and shy same time

Na Hai Yeh Pana

Na Khona Hi Hai

Tera Na Hona, Jaane

Kuyn Hona Hi Hai

Aa Aa..Aa Aa...Aa Aa..Aa Aa.. Aa..

Aankho Mein Aankhe Teri

Bahoo Mein Bahe Teri

Mera Na Mujh Mein Kuch Raha

Hua Kya

Bathon Mein Bathein Teri

Rathe Saogathe Meri

Kuyn Tera Sab Yeh Ho Gaya

Hua Kya

he first hurt this innocent soul because of his so called love but look now he cant imagin one moment without his geet yes his geet maan ki geet and from tomorrow he will broke all rule of dadima and tomorrow is first day with smirk he just sleep and just lost in geet memory

Aadha Sa Vaada Kabhi

Aadhe Se Zyada Kabhi

Jee Chahe Karlu Is Tarah

Wafa Ka

Chode Na Chute Kabhi

Tode Na Toote Kabhi

Jo Daaga Tum Se Jud Gaya

Wafa Ka

Mein Tera Sarmaya Hun

Jo Bhi Mein Ban Paya Hun

Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

Raaste Mil Jate Hai

Manzile Mil Jati Hai

Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi

Na Hai Yeh Pana

Na Khona He Hai

Tera Na Hona, Jaane

Kuyn Hona He Hai

Aa Aa Aa Aa Aa Aa ...

next morning he just went to geet room and geet who is in deep sleep he just pick her in his hand and geet open her eyes , maan just say don't shout geet and you are going with me out



geet eyes winded in shock first he is hear in early morning dam it is only 4 am of morning and he saying this all ager dadima and she panic neech uatriya muje please , dadima before geet say anything he just say don't worry about it I know what and how ii will monfy her so take chill pill but you have to go with balcony ...geet make big eyes oh no maan how I will




maan - main to 5 month se aa raha hu na and you don't come one day

geet - ye kya muje super women samje rahe hai


maan - to kya main superman hu



geet - chado bolo kasie jana hai




maan just tale her and both come out from balcony he just took her hand and both run to car and sit there and start their new journey maan just run away with his own wife ...wow



after some time they stop near small hotel and maan say her to fresh up and change cloth he give her parcel she just went in room which maan book for them



geet fresh up and look it is beautiful yellow dress it is simple and sober she just get note it is from maan yellow ajnabhi se dost ke liye


when she come out poor maan just lost in geet she looking like fresh flower beautiful he just mummer geet dress have low cut in back and geet took hair in one shoulder so it give view to all and our



Msk how he see it he just went near geet stand behind geet very slowly took her hair and put it back so her long hair hide her marble back




poor girl just control her moan in public place in this process his long finger just touch to her neck , shoulder and back oh her cheek turn dark red and maan mummer in her ear please geet don't shy like this nahi to sab ke sammane cheek pe kiss kar dunga

geet just mummer babaji



both just finish their B. fast and start there journey , geet don't even know where they are going , maan just say it surprised geet wait for some time and within three hour there palne land on there place geet when come out than her eyes fall on place it Kashmir oh she want to come hear from long back and maan just fulfill her wish like this , she just hug maan and kiss maan on his cheek oh poor boy already contorolong himself when she is around her and she is ...




he just say you like it geet say love it , both just went to there hotel and their reaction girl say with smile welcome Mr. and Mrs. kuhurana app ka honeymoon suit is ready , than geet get it they are on their HOONY MOON oh poor girl just mummer thank and bend her head in shyness , she feel same time happy , nervous , shy and her dhadkan it is sounded like dhak dhak dhak , and her hand turn cold oh poor girl it is so much for her



with her face maan get her thought and he just hold her hand and start to walk to there room geet literally shaking with thought their honey moon their first night ...




both entered in room she expecting room must be decorated and all but it is not than she give confused look to maan , maan just shut door and make her sit on bed and took her face in his palm and say geet don't get scare we are hear for 15 days everything happen with your consult so he left sentence incomplete and ask you get na what is I am talking geet just nodded in yes ...


i don't want to any one between us so I brought you hear , we start our new life when you are ready so now hum friends se agge ki journey to start kar sakete hai na and I am think wo geet forum ke geet jasie you are not that nave ki kuch bhi pata nahi hota about ...like anni always tale me and maan just wink to geet and went to bathroom for change and geet face oh it is worth to watch her golgappa face and eyes winded in shock and frown on face she just mummer babaji ye kitane Dust danav hai ...



preacp






maan give her another parcel , geet when that open parcel she just say chi chi babaji ye kya hai ,it is jeans and top but she never wear such dress

maan - arre geet tum to second dress main chi chi kar rahi ho phir baki dress ko kya kahogi

and before she say anything maan just say now closed your mouth and come out or you want help in change




Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
hi every one
just want to say that
thanks for like and comment on story
if you dont found like on your comment
it is just technical
problem because i always
read your comment
and give you response thru
pm so please don't get angry
if anyone not get response from me

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
lovely update mahi dear😊
maan is too naughty😉
atlast maan realised his love for geet fully
maan running away with his own wife😎 idea
waiting to see dadima's reaction😆
maaneet in their honeymoon 😳 good job maan👍🏼
maan is possessive for his geet😃none can change this habit of his😆
aur sabke saamne kiss ki dhamki😆lovely😳
geet hamesha☺️
maan is caring for geet feelings too👏 to start their relation
geet forum wali geet😆
precap-😳

👏 mahi dear for the lovely update

hi dears ...pls vote 4 maaneet they r lagging behind ...

goto this page and scroll down and see right side cast ur vote pls...iam sending to all...pls forward this to ur buddy's pls


Edited by disha31 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
galat ladki say pyar karey gey toh asi feeling kha say aai gi
love the update awsummm
ghare say bhagey maaneet honey moon k liya
Edited by fariya20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
ohhh he took her away
chori chori
so naughty of him
ahhh where did he take her
ahhh 15 days HM
wow thats long right
that wasnt love
just mere infatuation
or attraction
thats it
but her you love for sure
cheers for pm
so their real HM begins soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
lovely update
maan run away with geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Woo lovely update dear Mann kidnapped his own wife that's grt cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Maan takes his wife away! Theyr in hotel! MAan gives her a beautiful yellow dress! Geet looking gorgeous! Maan booked HM suite! Geet surprised! Maan assures her tht nothing will happen without her consent! they r der 4 15 days! update soon! Well written! lovely precap!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sweet update
Maan imagining geet everywhere... Song too good
Maan realized that what he felt for sam was just attraction... Wiyh geet its love...he can't imagine his life without geet
He took her to Kashmir
Ab aage kya hoga😳

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