Silly Little Heart!! (Completed!) - Page 26

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Zeal-DD

This is not the end I was expecting... Really Sad

this is what Geet got after all the wait, loyalty and responsibilities of business and Maan's family... Even baba ji can't be so cruel to her.. Seriously i'm totally againt Maan's decision and I don't care what he went through... He did wrong to Girl

Thankyou for the story... Weldone nice job


thanks for reading😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
read last parts...the letter destroyed all her dreams she weaved and waited for...but both Maan and Geet are strong enough to separate thinking betterment of each other, especially Geet who asked her parents to stay with Maan and Vicky.

ending well written, nice from story perspective, but not for Maaneet...
so till you write season 2, I am taking it as intermission...and do not make it too longgg 😊

Thank You for the wonderful story.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

read last parts...the letter destroyed all her dreams she weaved and waited for...but both Maan and Geet are strong enough to separate thinking betterment of each other, especially Geet who asked her parents to stay with Maan and Vicky.

ending well written, nice from story perspective, but not for Maaneet...
so till you write season 2, I am taking it as intermission...and do not make it too longgg 😊

Thank You for the wonderful story.


Yes boss this time hopefully it will be a happy ending!😆
Too long ???
Story or the wait???
Sorry these days brain not working🤢

N yes forgot to mention. ..
Thanks for liking the story!🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28


Yes boss this time hopefully it will be a happy ending!😆
Too long ???
Story or the wait???
Sorry these days brain not working🤢

N yes forgot to mention. ..
Thanks for liking the story!🤗


of course the intermission / wait part...
will be waiting for season 2..😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
hey spoorthy !
read this one on your recommendation...but, you made me so sad...with their seperation !! he could stay with his brother, with her parents...look after the whole business...but, cannot marry her...though, both love each other...!! cannot see them this way...like many of our friends ...me too will wait for season 2...with happy ending...them meeting some where...some time later...and their love story continues...!! will be waiting...
must say beautiful writing...congrats !!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

hey spoorthy !

read this one on your recommendation...but, you made me so sad...with their seperation !! he could stay with his brother, with her parents...look after the whole business...but, cannot marry her...though, both love each other...!! cannot see them this way...like many of our friends ...me too will wait for season 2...with happy ending...them meeting some where...some time later...and their love story continues...!! will be waiting...
must say beautiful writing...congrats !!

U only said give a small twist to the story. ..😛
So I wanted to let u know how my twists are😆
N about sequel. ..
Will plan it soon😃
Thanks for reading!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
I don't know!😕
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Posted: 10 years ago

still 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yaar work pressure bad gaya h!
N I'm not sure when I'll be able to update ongoing one's. ..
N at this stage if I start this one...
It will end up in a complete mess
So...
Thoda time tho lagega hi😕
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28


Yaar work pressure bad gaya h!
N I'm not sure when I'll be able to update ongoing one's. ..
N at this stage if I start this one...
It will end up in a complete mess
So...
Thoda time tho lagega hi😕


ok 😊

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