MG FF Uljhe Rishtey---kahanni ek unkhili kali ki part 30on 103-1 sep - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Awesome update geet love maan wow
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Nice part...precap sounds goid...

n no db in story...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
part 19
nice part dear...
cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
nice update
geet is in love with maan

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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
awesome update geet in love song choice lovely loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
awsum update
so emotional n song is perfect for this
sam entry
interting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
no that lady is out atleat in maaneet life
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
loved it
she is so strong
people don't like to have kids even if they can raise them with all comforts n even if they do they neglect them
n her she is ready to fight with world for her baby who was never suppose to be hers n now it is her only family

Maan is such a influential person still he cant find his baby
hw will he react whn he comes to know that she is carrying his baby

Geet is to cute n innocent but strong n determined to
rishto ke kadar wahi jante hai jine kabhi rishte mile nahi, ya milke bhi na mile.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
ye lo aapka comment edited finally...
abi takk fate ka toh padhe nahi maine kal hi de diya thha😡😡
padh lena😳

Originally posted by: mirror1521

😛
mai late comment k liye sorry nahi bolne wali

😆

rahul ki toh geet ne puri band baja di🤣
bt cheap man has plan-B😡😡😡

lekin ye kya..😲😲
uska plan humare bechare maan ko bhaari pad gaya😕
poor thing
geet k babaji..abb maan ko KID se kon bachaega😆😆

and on top of tht he has started to feel for the kid😲😲
abb kya hoga😲😲

and geets kand🤣
she made MSK☺️
waah...for geet👏
parr lagta hai geet ko Mrs. KHURRANA banne k bahut jaldi hai😛.
kuchh karo yr mahi😆
hehe n maan caught wid MANEESHA
aaj toh uska badluch hi kharab hai😆
chalo maan ko ye lesson toh mila ki abb usse KID nahi bolna hai😉

loved the upd..👏👏


and as usual i am here with suggestions ..
yaha btau ya pm me..???😛😛😛
Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90

part 20


she again look to his cabin where he lost in some though she just touch glass which parted their cabin , she touch that glass like she touching him a drop fail from her eyes...ye sach nahi ho sakta , there is always unseen wall between us .. she just went to restroom sit on sofa and put her hand on her tummy and say baby main kya karu , kise puchu ,main unke samne nahi reh sakti kya karu baby ,kya hum koi aur job dund le ...hu yahi tik rehega , wo jab bhi mere samane aayne muje wo sab kuch yaad aata hai ek din main sb kuch badal gaya sab kuch one tear fall from geet eyes aasmaan aur dharti ka Milan kabhi nahi ho sakata kabhi nahi she just sms maan sir and say she want to go darga can she maan just called her and say yes

Arziyaan sari mein, chehre pe likh ke laaya hoon,

Tumse kya mangu mein, tum khud hi samjah lo...

Ya maula..., maula maula maula mere maula

All my desires, are written on my face

What can I ask from you, you interpret yourself

O lord... lord, my lord

till now he get that geet is avoiding him ,he himself also want to away from her that day kash wo din hi nahi aata he say in low voice sab kuch badal gaya ,main ku us din ise taraha ...dam he just hit table with anger why why I cant destroy her life my past is so dark and I don't want to geet face many trouble because of me god ye kya ho raha hai mera bita hua kal uska aaj aur kal bhi barbad kar dega mera past wo greedy women no no I cant I cant kya karu main kya don't know buthou his leg start to go to darga he just bend in front of god and say mere curse fate ka saya main us massom pe nahi padne dena chahta god kya karu , dil meri baat manta nahi bas uski hi yoodo main kh jata hai ,yaisa to main sam ke liye bhi mehssos nahi karta tha

ye kya hai just need of my body or else ...this attraction not good for us I know I will be curse in her life already she facing so much because of me and now no no icant now you show me right way god please thak gaya hu main thak gaya hu tear just start to come from maan eyes

Dararein dararein hai maathe pe maula

Maramat mukdar ki kar do maula, mere maula..

Tere dar pe jhuka hoon mita hoon bana hoon

Marammat mukdar ki kar do maula..

My forehead is scarred, O Lord (my fate is cursed)

Repair my fortune O lord, my lord

I am bowing at your doorstep, I have been destroyed and rejuvenated

Repair my fortune O lord


other side geet also lost in her fate , this life so much showing up and down in her life she just stand there with closed eyes , the image of her life , life as orphan , her try for food , book upon that big storm her pregnancy and that collage incidence all just come to her mind , he give painful look to god and mummer why babaji why main to app ne jo bhi diya apne man se apnaya her ek storm ko face kiya dard main pain main bhi happiness dhoonti rahi phir ku yesa kiya apane mere sath , ku dali ye feeling mere dil main unke liye ku ye sapana dikha rahe ho jo kabhi kabhi sach nahi hone wala ku babaji bahot thak gayi hu apane fate se ladte ladte please babaji babaji she just sob , she feel so helpless

Jo bhi tere dar aaya, juhkne jo sar aaya

Mastiyan piye sabko, jhoomta nazar aaya

Pyaas le ke aaya tha, dariya woh bhar laya

Noor ki barish mein beeghta sa tar aaya

Whoever has come to your doorstep, whoever has come to bow at your feet

Everyone saw him dancing, drunk in trace

He had come thirsty, and you filled the river

In the rain of light, he was drenched and he swam out...



maan feel something wired like someone his closed one going away from him where he cant reach to that person he just pray to god please geet ko thik rakhana please and come out from darga




hear geet took decision and just come out from darga and went to KM just took all her belonging and went out he give painful look to maan and dadi room but if she face them , she cant go from there she just mumere babaji in dono ko sab khusyiya de dena babaji and just went out from km she just mail her resign and mention there that hope you understand , please don't sue on me because I have to work fro you for three year but I cannot sorry , all nigh she just searching to so many hostel but all just give her negative ans thank god she have her month salary with her or else...she feel so much tired this tension and all just took toll on her and she just faint near gate of bungalow

O ek khusbu aati thi, main bhatakta jata tha

Reshmi si maya thi, aur mein takta jata tha

Jab teri gali aaya, sach tabhi nazar aaya

Mujhame woh khusboo thi, jisse tu ne milwaya

There comes a fragrance and I was lost in its search

There was a silken aura and I was drawn to it

When I came to your lane, only then I saw the truth

The fragrance was in me, that you made me realize it





other side maan who don't feel like to sleep just open his laptop to check mail and he have to mail one from detective agency and other one from geet he first open detc.mail they said that doc and nurse have mysteries death both died on same day and they working in so and so hospital it is out from Delhi now that shocked maan because that is last hope for his baby than he open geet mail and just run like mad person to her room and sit on bed helplessly , she just went , just went away like this because of because of me he feel like someone snatch soul from his body , he just sit their blankly , he lost power of think , tear just falling from his eyes , now he get what he lost , just lost

Tut ke bikharna mujhko zarur aata hai

Varna ibbadat wala sarur aata hai

Sajde mein rehne do, abb kahin na jaunga

Abb jo tumne tukhraya to sawar na paunga

I know how to break from within and scatter into pieces

Except that I only know the joy of praying

Let me meditate at your feet, I will not go anywhere now

Now if you reject me, then I will never be able to recover






same time dadima come out for water saw light in geet room , she think may be geet need anything , she just entered but get shock with maan state , his blank face , tear and empty room of geet dadi get scared with thought , with shaking hand she called maan and put her hand on his shoulder , maan just look to dadi for second and just hug her with her waist and say loudly wo bhi chali gayi muje chodke , jo meri life main thodi si hassi laayi thi chali gayi meri wajase , us din main us din main ...I made her to took such decision , I know she hate me , she hate me , that's why she went like this ...




dadi who is so shocked with maan word his outburst , with teary eyes she just cup maan face kya hua beta , kya hua , app kya kya geet ki baat kar rahe hai dadi want heard no but destiny play again game with them maan just nodded in yes

Sar utha ke maine to kitni khwahishe ki thi

Kitne khwaab dekhe the, kitni khosishe ki thi

Jab tu rubaru aaya...

Jab tu rubaru aaya nazarein na mila paya

Sar jhuka ke ek pal mein... ooo

Sar jhuka ke ek pal mein mene kya nahi paya

In arrogance, I had demanded my desires,

I had seen so many dreams, I endlessly tried

But when you appeared in front of me...

But when you appeared in front of me, I could not look into your eyes

By bowing head, in a second...

By bowing head, in a second, I attained all that I deserved




Mora piya ghar aaya... mora piya ghar aaya

My beloved has come home... my beloved has come home

other side someone come near geet and try to make her wake up but she have fever that person just took her in his house and called some one to called doctor

precap

new entry , geet new boss

sam back in maan life


and that night which change maaneet life


Note - debina cannot t play sam role because no one want her

now you all have to guess Maan ne kya kiya us din

give ans in comment

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago

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