MG FF ~DIRTY REVENGE(PURE LOVE)~PART 16~PG 143~THREAD 2 added - Page 48

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

<font color="#660099">Awesome Update

First Maan was jealous but now Geet too became jealous
what was Sasha saying that lives cannot be lost because of one person
Geet driving but suddenly she knocks into another car </font>



ty dear..
sasha secret ke liye thoda wait karo..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jayshu17

<font color="#cc0033" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Lovely update!!!⭐️Awww Geet is so adorable...Loved her cute childish antics❤️her chinchan wala night suit😆😆Maan is drooling over her😳😳he is scolding Geetpoor Geet...How will he manofy her now??Loved it so much❤️❤️waiting for the next updateThanks for the PM dear😳</font>


ty jayshu..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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was too good...
geets jeealousy... did maan notice tht?

shasha kissse baat kar rhi thi??

loved geet ki chalu-panthi...


will read 12 ltr😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice ud
maan make geet gussa
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Poooja

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was too good...
geets jeealousy... did maan notice tht?

shasha kissse baat kar rhi thi??

loved geet ki chalu-panthi...


will read 12 ltr😔


ty pooja..
no maan didn't notice that..
fir sasha's secret wait for sometime..
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Posted: 10 years ago
~ DIRTY REVENGE ( PURE LOVE ) ~

~ PART -13 ~


As car halted in front of the hotel , both come out of car . Geet ran upstairs towards their room while Maan sat in lobby leaning his head backwards on sofa with closed eyes..


On entering room , Geet laid on bed on her stomach cryingly cursing Maan " he always do like this..always scolds me..khadus..dusht danav..das sar wala ravan..zalim insan "..


She sat on bed after crying for 5 mins " don't cry Geet..papa always says good and brave girls never cry and u r papa's girl so stop crying " sniffed wiping her tears..


Suddenly a smirk came on her face and mischievous glint in her eyes . She jumped from her bed to his bed and them jumped down on floor . She opened closet where he had arranged his clothes . She started looking for her desired clothes and on finding it she took them smilingly . It was Maan's track pants and sweatshirt which he had to wear at night and bechara has brought only one track pant..


" mujhe keh rahe the na ki main bacho jaisi harkate karti hu ab dekho yeh bachi kya karti hai " spoke Geet sitting on her bed..


She phoned room service through intercom " hello room service..I want a tailor in room no.505 and two markers , one in red colour and other one in black colour quickly " and cutted the call..


After 10 mins , a room service boy and a tailor entered . Boy handed her markers and left from there..


" yeh track pants aur sweat shirt mere fitting ki karni hai " said handing him both clothes..


" okk mam..ho jaayega but it will take half an hour " told tailor grabbing clothes and looking at them..


" thik hai " nodded Geet and tailor left from there after taking her measurement..


" mujhe rulaya na..ab dekho Maan sir main aapko kaise line par lati hu..hayye kitna maza aayega aur babaji aap mera support karna thik hai na ki us khadus ka " exclaimed Geet mischievously rubbing her hands..

( babaji saying " haa mera bacha..mein teri hi support mein hu..usne nalayak tere ko itna rulaya aur aaj tak kabhi mere paas tak nahi aaya..tu tention na le mein hu na tere saath..doni milkar usse maze lenge ")..


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Here in lobby , Maan was cursing himself for scolding her but it was just result of his tiredness . He felt bad seeing her tears , something pricked his heart . He is very well aware of her childhish nature and he had always surrendered himself in front of her childish nature but today he lost his cool . He thought to ask from sorry from her but then decided to talk to her after an hour so that by time she will be calmed. He ordered himself a coffee to relax himself..


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After an hour , a boy came to gave her fitted sweatshirt and track pants . Firstly , she draw a sinchan cartoon on sweat shirt with markers and then change into them happily then sat on bed after switching on T.V . Its been 10 mins she was shuffling channels but couldn't find anything interesting.. " babaji agar next channel mein koi achi movie nahi aayi na toh mein aapse kabhi baat nahi karoongi " threathened Geet looking upwards with baby face..

( babaji " jab dekho dhamki deti rehti aur mujhe iski baat bhi manini padti hai warna kon mujhse baat karega..ek yehi toh hai jo mera time pass karti hai mujhse baat karke warna sab mean hai " )..


Geet pressed ch button and channel changed to other there came her fav movie DDLJ . Smilingly she looked upwards saying " I love u babaji..u r great "..

( babaji "I too love u my bacha..chal ab enjoy kar movie ")..


Maan entered room with a two bags in his hand . One had that night suit and second he had just shopped some things to manofy her . He thought Geet must be crying covering herself with blanket but the scenerio inside room was totally different . Geet was sitting on bed covering her legs with blanket , a pillow on her lap , coke cans and lots of packets of chips and chocolates were laying on bed and not to forget two bowls of ice-cream too and she was totally busy in watching DDLJ..


" yeh dekho dinner ke time par madam chips kaha rahi hai..tabhi toh itni mari hui hai " mumbled Maan sitting on his bed noticing her eating habits..


" Geet yeh sab band karo aur chalo dinner karne " said Maan opening his closet for taking out his track pants and sweatshirt..


" Geet mein tumhe kuch keh raha hu sun rahi ho ya nahi " shouted Maan on not hearing her reply trying to find his clothes..


" Geet " yelled Maan but Geet totally ignored him..


" mera track and sweatshirt kaha gaye..abhi arrange kiya tha " mummbled Maan to himself keeping his hands on waist . He glanced at Geet to ask about his clothes but then sweatshirt which Geet was wearing caught his attention . He closely gave a look and instantly recognised that sweatshirt that was his , same brand " but how come it fitted to Geet and that cartoon character on it " wondered Maan frowning..


" Geet mere night clothes kaha hai " asked Maan angrily..


Instead of replying to him , Geet stood up on her place on bed and Maan eyes widened seeing her attire . She was wearing his clothes . He gave her an impossible look pushing his hair back . Without saying anything to her he sat on bed opening his lappy while Geet resumed watching her movie..


There was scene going on where Simran was going and Raj was saying to himself " agar yeh tujhe pyaar karti hai toh yeh palat kar dekhegi..palat..palat " and Geet being movie lover too was repeating dialigues in her style " palat..palat..jaldi palat..mujhe pata hai yeh jarur turn karegi " and bechara Maan was looking at her with shocked face . She is surely not of this planet..


The end portion of movie was coming and baby Geet was crying " haa..plz use jaane do..Raj uska intezar kar raha hai..jaane do Simran ko plz jaane do " more than movie dialogues Maan was enjoying Geet's version of dialogue..


As the movie ended , Maan stood up and kneeled down beside Geet apologising " Sorry Geet..I don't know how I lost my temper..really sorry " and Geet turned her face twisting her nose..


" acha tum jo bologi main wahi karoonga aur whatever u need I will bought for u " Maan was trying to melt Geet but its not easy . She was giving him silent treatment..


" lo chocolates..isse toh maan jao " said Maan forwarding chocolates after taking them out from bag . Geet pushed chocolates..


" hmm isse toh maan jao..lo tumhare golu ka dost " Maan handed her big winnie the pooh but Geet pushed that too..


" le lo na yeh tumhare wale se bhi big hai " said Maan..


" mera paas isse bhi bada hai ghar par " cutely told Geet without turning her face..


" toh apne babies ke liye rakh lo " teasingly said Maan making Geet shy at his comment but Geet instantly composed herself..


Next Maan handed her roses , sorry cards , story books , jacket , a doremon toy and lots of things but Geet ignored all the gifts making him sigh..


Precap - Baby Geet can't sleep without listening to stories..


Thanks for all the likes and comments 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update
maan ke night dress ko geet ne aapna bana liya😆
me wondering what will maan do to manofy her now???????
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Posted: 10 years ago
I need to catch up with some updates will comment after reading
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part simran😃
geet is cryng badly bt consoled herself sayng dat she is papa's gal👍🏼
den she got sm mischievous plan nd startd 2 execute it😆
she askd tailor 2 make maan's nite suit 2 fit her nd drawed her fav cartoon's pic nd babaji is supprtng geet🤣
other side maan was angry on himself 4 scoldng her nd decided 2 confront her aft an hour😛
when maan came 2 room he got 1st shock geet is enjoyng DDLJ nd eatng her fav stuffs😎
nd nxt shock was he saw geet wearng his nite suit 😉
geet just ignord maan nd watchd DDLJ nd maan watchd geet's antics😳
maan tried his best 2 make geet 2 talk wit him bt all in vain
waitng 4 d nxt part update soon simran
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Posted: 10 years ago
Okay this was such a cute and funny update 🤣
hahahahah she actually made her night suit out of maan's dress??

lol...heheh nice part

and then ignoring maan in royal style uff loved that..
bechara munda ab kya karega?

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