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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: JeevanaP

umbrella tha na.., par maine aur papa dono te tho thodi bheeg gayi...
kaam aur IF bhi 😆

Okk

haan agar IF nahin hota to kaam se break lekar eyes ko rest deti..ab IF par gappen maarna sabse bada relaxing idea hai😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: rashmivaish



Hi Ratna
abhi puri type nahin hui hai😭😭
2/3rd is complete..and I m thinking about what to add as a little shock is waiting there for you😉😉but you will find it a sweet shock..😆😆
after all I m the writer and I can take any liberty here
hai na😆😆

aww it's so cute Picture
thank u and I love you too


Ofcourse u can take any liberties...it is your story...hmmm what is this sweet shock now...will wait for the update...just tried my luck 😆...glad u liked the siggy 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

Okk

haan agar IF nahin hota to kaam se break lekar eyes ko rest deti..ab IF par gappen maarna sabse bada relaxing idea hai😆😆😆

idea tho relaxing hai but eyes ko strain bhi tho hoti hai...
sab ke liye yeh system chaiye
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: --Ratna--


Ofcourse u can take any liberties...it is your story...hmmm what is this sweet shock now...will wait for the update...just tried my luck 😆...glad u liked the siggy 😊


obviously Ratna
siggy was too cute as this picture is the cutest image of Geet ..she is looking just like a cute kid here..teaser de sakti hoon waise... agar chahiye to..😉😉
Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: JeevanaP

idea tho relaxing hai but eyes ko strain bhi tho hoti hai...
sab ke liye yeh system chaiye

haan yahi sabse badi problem hai and the kids who have already week power are the biggest suferers
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: rashmivaish

obviously Ratna
siggy was too cute as this picture is the cutest image of Geet ..she is looking just like a cute kid here..teaser de sakti hoon waise... agar chahiye to..😉😉


U have to ask if i want teaser ?😲...been waiting for it eagerly. 😃...plz give it dear...it will make the wait for the update easier ..i always used to be so happy seeing the teaser because i knew your update was coming soon...thank uuu 🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chalo update na sahi...teaser de do plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: --Ratna--


U have to ask if i want teaser ?😲...been waiting for it eagerly. 😃...plz give it dear...it will make the wait for the update easier ..i always used to be so happy seeing the teaser because i knew your update was coming soon...thank uuu 🤗


okk
just wait for few minutes😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Teaser


He again searched her everywhere but it was only his imagination. He was surprised at his own behaviour.He did not have now mood to eat the pasta and he left it on the table..But his mobile rang..

Maan looked at the caller ID.It was Geet..he hurriedly picked up the call and said-,,stop troubling me..

Geet-What? I m troubling you? How could you say that Maan..when did I trouble you?..and Maan realized that it was real Geet who called her not his imagination.

He slapped lightly his head and said-Geet I m sorry..wo galati se nikal gaya. I was thinking something else...Please don't mind..

Geet-Hmm that's better..

Maan -Good morning Geet..

Geet-Good morning..BTW it's afternoon here..Did you have your breakfast?

Maan fumbled on his words -haan naahin wo.o ..

Geet-What is this Maan? Ek baat boliye na ...Yes or no..and I know your answer will be no ..if you had have your breakfast then you would have said it confidently..so..Maan please have your BF before you leave..

Maan smiled from his heart hearing her soothing voice-Okk.. I m going to have..Did you have your lunch.?

Geet-nahin abhi time hai thoda.. I will have on time with papa..

Maan-Ok Geet..

Geet-Bye Maan and please have your BF..

Maan-ya sure .Bye..

And after cutting the call he took the bowl of the pasta in his hand and started to eat and finished that with a sweet smile on his lips ..after all it was the order of his love...

PS:- 2/3rd of the update is typed and i m stuck at some point.so update can take two or more days.If I get it done earlier then will post the update

Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rashmi 🤗...thank u for the teaser...awww Maan is searching for her everywhere and is sad when he does not find her 😭...but then she calls😃...one word from Geet and he has his breakfast ...so cutie...i love this Maan of yours so much ❤️...take your time with the update...will wait 😊
Thank you graphics
Edited by --Ratna-- - 11 years ago

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