Series: Twines of the heart [OS 6- P 20]

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JeweledCrown-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Waiting for all the stories

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ammu5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#172

feel purity while reading...its simply divine..plz do update sooner

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rubimad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#173

OUTSTANDING. BEAUTIFUL..

YOU HAVE WRITTEN IT SO NICELY THAT I DON'T HAVE ANYTHING TO SAY. MUSIC IS ENTANGLED IN THE VERY HEART OF THIS STORY BRINGING OUT ITS BEAUTY.

GEET'S FEELINGS FOR MAAN, HER ANGER, INDIFFERENCE, THE SUBTLE TENSION BETWEEN THEM , YOU HAVE CAPTURED SO BEAUTIFULLY.👏

OH GOD! YOU SO REMIND ME OF ONE OF MY ALL TIME FAVORITE WRITER.

PLZ CONTINUE SOON. DON'T LEAVE IT. EAGERLY WAITING TO READ WHETHER THEY GET MARRIED OR NOT AND IF THEY DO HOW WILL THEY SORT OUT THEIR DIFFERENCES...

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rubimad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#174

waiting eagerly for an update

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JeweledCrown-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: JeweledCrown-
Waiting

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Sundari

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+ 13

Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Read the first one
Very soulful,
I always look fwd to ur works since I read u for the first time in the confession anniversary OS competition
I like ur works very much 😊

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Sundari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

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A question of concern indeed...
Why is an intercaste/community marriage such a big deal wen it is out of love and a normal thing wen it is "arranged"
Clearly reflects the double standard of the society and also the so-called "pride"
Now what she is asking isn't unfair given the circumstances...

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Sundari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#178

oops! initially i thought they are individual OS'

but seems like they are all in order forming a story still being independent... i like the idea!!

so 2nd meeting that is...

m kinda loving their convo 😆

feel like to see them like this throughout, different than our typical lovey-dovey maaneet 😉

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Sundari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#179

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The bond b/w the sisters is so adoreable n indeed the time n distance cnnot affect it !

Meena is worried about geets decision on marriage...
While geet says its for selfish reasons!
Well indeed, the long lost attraction that she had for him has somewhere contributed in her decision for her yes.

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Sundari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#180

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Aww the cute little kid is worried that her Mamu will not lover her anymore, he will love the fairy now...
The way maan manaofies her is too cute in itself...