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Prologue...


She was for him , but he denied her in an illusion . He forced her and she embraced death for his happiness . she was Selfless ,pure and mature. He was selfish , stained and immature. What would happen when his illusion disappeared and he would face the bitter truth .

The sorrow of losing what we love is nothing to the torment of having it present but denied us .



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.






Epilogue

It was a beautiful start of their new life ,, they wr one in all sense .. Soulmate ,, Maan came out from d washroom , a smile crept on his lips seeing his love of life sleeping all tired ,, remembering their passionate moments he felt again charge nd wanted to take her all again but control himself ,, she need rest nd few more works wr waiting for them ,, he came close nd caressed her soft cheek lovingly ,, she opened her eyes with a smile ,, held his hand there nd packed on his palm ,, he bent nd took her tempting lips in his nd gave a long wet satisfied kiss .

Maan: get ready , Dadima is calling for pooja .

Geet: Oh god! ( she slapped her head nd got up with a jerk) Mei bhool gai ,, sorry , abhi ready hoti hu ,, aapne uthaya kun ahi pahale ?

Maan: easy Geet , we have time ,, how r u feeling now ?

Geet shied ,, lil better nd got up to get ready ,, took her saree which Maan select for her nd went to dressing area ,, Maan got ready in d room ,, she came out nd asked .

Geet: Maan theek lag rahi hu na ?

Maan looked at her , mesmerized he went close to her ,, took a lil kohel from d corner of her eye nd put a black mark behind her ear ,, she was awed with his gesture ,, Maaann ,,, kisi ki nazar na lage ,, mujhe darr hei kahin meri hi nazar na lag jaye Geet ,,, Maan plzzz ,, aur agar essa nei to aapko pahale lagegi , u r looking very handsome ,, accha ,, hummm ,, she craned her neck nd gave a soft pack on his cheek ,, he smiled ,, cupped her face nd pack her forehead ,, challen , humm.

They came in main hall where Dadima was instructing servants for arranging d things for pooja ,, Panditji was setting d Hawan kund ,, Dadima looked at Maan with a sweet smile,, Maan nd Geet touched their feet nd she blessed them .

Dadima: chalo dono baitho pooja keliye .

Maan: baki sab kahan hei ?

Dadima : aa jayenge ,, maine informed ker diya tha .

Maan nd Geet settled for pooja ,, Panditji started chanting d holy Mantras ,, slowly all d guests came there nd set ,, it took an hr nd after hawan panditji blessed Maan nd Geet nd they touched all d elders feet ,, after taking prasaad Dadima told Geet to make a sweet dish for ritual ,, everything was ready nd she made d Kesar Kheer for all ,, BF was served for all .

After BF A&A ,Meera and Yash took permission for visiting their home nd to meet with few friends who wr in Delhi ,, Geet requested them not to talk about her outside ,, Meera understood nd assured her ,, Pandeyji too was ready to meet his parents who wr in Patna city nd his flight was after 2 hrs ,, Dadima gave them lots of sweets nd gifts for their families ,, other guests went to see Taj Mahal , d carvan was there to take them with all facilities ,, after that Dadima got busy to finish some other post wedding works ,, Adi nd Mainsh wr there to help her ,, Dadima sent d newly wed couple to take rest .

Maan nd Geet came in their bed room ,, Maan held her hand nd borught near bed ,, he made her sit on d bed nd sat next to her taking her both hand in his ,, he seemed serious nd Geet looked at him curiously ,, Maan gave a smile to Geet but that was not able to hide his nervousness ,, he caressed her hand nd spoke slowly in a serious tone.

Maan: Geet I don't know how u'll take my words but I request u plzz don't think i'm doing this happily ,, I thought a lot nd then decided it for u .

He took out a pack from d side table drawer nd placed that on Geet's palm ,, Geet was looking at him nd d pack with questioned eyes ,, Maan shied , pressed his eyes to controle his fear .

Maan: Geet, u have a year of study for u ,, u have dreams for ur future nd carrier ,, last night I didn't use any protection coz I didn't want any hindrance between us but we have to take some steps for protection ,, aaumm ,, ye emergency pill hei ,, it'll help u ...

She gasped nd looked at him painfully ,, Maan felt hurt ,, he cupped her face nd spoke with all love .

Maan: Geet plzz , try to understand , i'm not forcing u , I just thought about ur study nd carrier ,, we never talked about it nd I don't want any discomfort for u .

Geet: discomfort ?

Maan: Geet without protection u cn conceive nd u have a full academic yr ahead that is why I thought to avoid ...

Geet: Maan plzzz ,, her eyes turned teary .

She never get a family love ,, she craved for a family ,, her own family and when she cd have her own family then why this stopping ,, no , no ,, she cd bear anything , but not this .

Geet: Maan ek baat puchoon ,, plzz sacch bolna .

She held his hand nd kissed his palm nd looked at him with wet eyes which tore his heart .

Maan: kya ?

Geet : agar meri study nahi hoti , kya tab bhi tum essa sochtey ?

Maan: nahi , lekin abhi tumhe prob ho sakti hei ?

Geet: kya yahi ek solution hei ?

Maan: matlab ?

Geet: matlab , agar mai chahun to , kya tum meri help ke liye nahi hoge , mujhe support nahi karoge humari khushi ke liye ?

Maan: i'm always with u Geet , in all ur decisions i'll be with u ,, but it cd be tough for u that is why I'm telling u that we cn wait .

Geet: Maan we don't know that it cn happen today or after few months but i'm ready to face .

She hugged him nd hide her face in his neck ,, Maan plzz mujhse ye tab nahi li jayegi .

Maan: Geeett , I'm not forcing u sweetheart , if u don't want then don't take , i'm with u .

He wiped her tears nd cocooned her ,, showered kisses on her ,, taking her in his arms he lay down there nd soon they wr in d pool of love nd passion .

Two days passed nd now all wr at d airport to catch their return flight , happy nd contented ,, Adi stayed in Delhi to look after d business ,, Maan gave all responsibilities to him ,, soon he was going to engage with Pinky ,, Maan took 10 days leave from office but only Geet nd Dadima know what type of leave he took ,, he was doing d work from home but Geet cdn't complaint him bcoz she was responsible for this .

He asked Geet for HM but she refused saying that she cdn't leave Dadima alone nd wanted to spend her time in her home with her family ,, these 10 days they spent in home nd FH ,, took full rest ,, Manish was taking care of KC nd reporting Maan on phone nd brought all d files at KV every eve then collected in d morning , all wr very relaxed nd contented .

Days started rolling happily nd everything came on routine ,, Maan in office nd Geet had her leaves so she joined her office in KC ,, Maan didn't leave any chance to love her ,, his office's sitting area became alive any time when they get time * nearly 2 months passed nd it was a pleasant morning, all wr at BF table ,, talking normally ,, Nakul brought d BF nd placed on d table ,, d aroma of French omelet spread there ,, suddenly Geet covered her mouth nd run towards washbasin ,, she puck clutching her tummy ,, surprised Maan nd Dadima ran behind her ,, Dadima was caressing her back worriedly , Maan was holding her ,, he helped her in cleaning nd brought her back in dinning hall but again after a min she ran to puk ,, Geet had only morning tea nd now with empty stomach she felt lil giddiness ,, she held Maan for support ,, Dadima's experience hinting her something else ,, she told Nakul to bring orange juice for Geet .

Dadima: Maan esse bahar open mei lao .

Maan was worried for Geet ,, he brought her in lobby nd made her sit there in open air ,, she was all fine nd suddenly this , he wanted to take her to Dr.

Maan: Dadima mei Geet ko Dr ke pass le jata hun , she is looking very dull nd weak.

Dadima: haan lekin pahale esse thoda kha lene do ,, mai kuch banaker laati hu .

Maan : Mai BF lata hu yahin .

Dadima : nahi tum apna karo mai kuch aur bana ker laati hu ,, esse omelet matt dena iss condition mei .

Maan: OK ,

He took orange juice from Nakul nd made her to have some ,, Dadima made a spicy paratha , took some pickle nd brought for Geet to eat.

Dadima: Geet ye khalo , muh ka taste theek ho jayega .

Seeing pickle Geet's mouth turned watery ,, she took d plate thanking Dadima ,, ate that crispy paratha with pickle nd felt good ,, Dadima smiled nd casressed her head ,, Maan nd Dadima took their BF nd Dadima told him to take Geet to their family Dr . Maan postponed his works nd took Geet to Dr ,, Dadima was with them ,, Dr took Geet with her nd checked her ,, asked few questions nd then gave a strip for U**** check ,, after few min d result was there ,, it was +ive ,, Dr smiled nd called Dadima nd Maan in her cabin nd informed them that everything is fine nd Geet is expecting ,, so take good care of her nd she wrote some normal tests and meds for her . Dadima nd Maan beamed with happiness nd Geet turned red ,, they wr back after an hr nd Dadima brought Geet in her Bedroom straight way ,, she blessed her , hugged her lovingly nd showered her live on her then she patted Maan's cheek lovingly ,, he hugged Dadima with smile ,, Dadima excused herself to pay thank to God nd to bring something to eat for all .

Maan nd Geet wr alone in Bed room ,, Geet gave a blushy look to Maan ,, He sat near her on bed , cupped her face nd packed on her forehead .. Thanku Geet ,, She hugged him saying .. r u happy ? I can't explain Geet ,, Maann ,, Geeett , love u sweetheart .

Months started passing ,, Maan and Dadima wr taking all d care of Geet ,, Maan fulfilled all demands of her princess ,, helped her nd loved her,, all wr enjoying this happy period ,, at given time by Dr Geet dilivered a baby boy ,, there was no bound of happiness for Dadima nd Maan ,, Dadima sent Maan 1st to see his son nd Geet .

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It was a very emotional moment for him seeing her Geet with d bundle of joy in her arms his eyes turned wet ,, he sat near Geet having her close to him nd packed her forehead ,, Geet handed that cutie to him ,, very carefully he took him ,, Maan felt chocked when he held that soft cute pink baby ,, his son ,, he is a father now nd these wr d totally new feelings for him ,, he packed d forehead of d baby lovingly nd then cocooned Geet to him ,, this lil cutie completed their relation .

Geet asked about Dadima nd He called Dadima in d room ,, she was d most happiest person this time ,, she was a great grand Dadima ,, Dadima blessed Maan nd Geet thanking them for giving this happiness to her ,, she took that most precious gift of God in her arms nd showered her love nd blessings ,, she named him .. Aushmaan .

After facing many loses , ups nd downs nd torment Maan nd Geet became an undivided souls forever .. Maaneet ,, their son joined them with a living cord nd KV was filled with happiness .

This was not d end but it was d beginning of a new journey ... A beautiful journey of Maaneet .


Thanku so my dear friends nd readers ,, I completed this small tale of our beloved Maan & Geet bcoz of ur love nd support ,, without ur support i'm nothing , ur likes nd loveable comments encouraged nd motivated me ,, Thank you so much nd a big warm hug to all . LOL.

My special thanks nd love to my dear friends lakshmi nd priya who made beautiful banners , pics nd gifs for d SS which made it more effective nd enjoyable ,, both r d important part of all my SS . Lots of love lakhsu nd priya nd a tight hug , Thank you so much .

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