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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
are u riposting this story again as i read this 2 part in past and than never update again.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
amazing part
loved it
so maan also has a son and his name is rahul...is rahul maan's biological son or adopted son..?
he really loves rahul very much
rahul and khushi are in same school by mistake rahul pussed khushi and both fell down and khusi got little hurt maan took her in his arms and took her to nurse her wounds he felt connected with her and he amused to see her innocene ...
maan and geet came face to face after four years and geet ran away from there not wanting to brust out on him...maan also shocked to see her after 4 long years and felt hurt seeing disgust in her eyes for him ...what happened between them that geet hates him so much...
and other side sid really loved geet but knows that his love never gonna reciprocate
geet is thinking about khushi she is thinking that is she keeping khushi away from father's love..
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
nice part
geets mom wants sid n geet to marry
sid too loves geet
but he doesnt want 2 force her
he loves khushi a lot n pampers her
maan dropped his son in school
is he really his son..i doubt
meets khushi n his heart goes to her
maneet met n geet left the place..
maan too is in shock
sid que her
will she ever say what relation they hold
n whats the past
why both r seperate
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Oh finally you update at least one of your works, i thought u disappeared somewhere. Anyways coming to the update it was a mixture n yeah m kinda confuse too since its just a 2nd part. But m sure everything will be clear soon once the story goes further till then i dont know how patiently i would have to wait. The curiosity is already killing me. Coming to the update i swear down Khushi is the cutest ever kid, gosh she talks soo much but still her cutest n innocence radiates from her like anything. Her nakharas with Sid were so adorable and the way she made him go down to his knees had me laughing. But the end she did gave in her sweetheart n made him happy with her antics. Coming to the Maan part well m kinda confuse seeing him with a kid who called him a Daddy. Seeing them it clearly said Maan loves Rahul like anything n Rahul seems kinda mature types boy. But what confused me more was that is Maan married to someone else then? Since m sure if Rahul had been Geet's child she is no way leave him back to Maan. So i guess Maaneet werent married here nor like divorcee which i thought in 1st update. So i now wonder what the title 'broken relations' means? Anyways seeing Maan meeting Khushi in 2nd update itself was surprising n i really dint expect that. And since she dint made him remind of anyone i wonder did he even know Geet was pregnant before them separating or something cos m sure she is his daughter only? Though unless you decide to give me a shock by Khushi not being Maan's child at all which is kinda impossible. Okay i now i have too many questions running into my head m so damn want to read more since even Geet had seen her past after 4 years and the fact that all this happened in one update only had just got me heck lot curious. And oh the last part was damn cute as well, Khushi to seems sharp, intelligent, smart and also kinda mature to her age kid with the way she immediately guessed that something is wrong b/w her mummy n her sweetheart. And then how cutely she tried vanishing Geet's frown off her forehead was really adorable. Though i do feel bad for Sid n somewhere assuming he is a positive character i kinda already want Geet to say yes to him or at least not hurt him like she did outhouse the shop. But now the question is will she accepts his proposal of her marrying him since she had seen him after 4 years? Woah now that is one heck big of a comment and i hope i dint bore you with my blabbering. Great update Anu n pls do continue your others works too. Waiting for HUV n IY2 updates.





-Sanjana!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
superb part...maan met khushi and rahul is maan's son...I desperately wants to know about maaneet past
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
What is their past that they are now separated and in pain ??

Nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Fabulous update
Both kids are really cute n there talk
eager to know about there past
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Does maan ditch her
y did they get seprate .maan has a son geet has a daughter ye to prologue se saaf pata chalta he k rahul is not maaneet son
kya maan ja kisi aur k saath physical relationship tha jisse rahul hua aur geet maan ko chod k chali gai
plz plz jaldi update do itna lamba wait mat karwaya karo plz
I hope maan ne esa kuch na kiya ho past me jise maaf karna readers k liye bhi mushkil ho
but maan ka fault tha ye pata chal gaya coz he didn't try to talk to geet
Na hi usko dundne ka try kiya
maaneet married the ya nahi ye bhi nahi pata
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
i think khushi is maan's daughter...but rahul?...

emotional update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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