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Posted: 11 years ago
WOW such a wonderful update👏. Ranging from depression, jealousy, accusation, small tiff, peace, claiming possession n finally the hints of the unfolding truth.

U had me rolling with this "Why she had to come with that scumbag who had face of a gorilla and body too big for a human."🤣...Is Armaan that bad looking?😲

Maan is so helpless he loves n wants her desperately but cant express it yes KARMA knows its way

"After an hour Maan was miserable. He sat in a corner and felt depressed like never before. He hadn't drunk much but his insides were rumpled. Geet wasn't even looking at him. He was surrounded by people but was alone and he couldn't even show it. In this artificial surrounding he had to fake his usual air of control, charm when he felt anything but. She should have been with him, along his side. He was her husband not that stupid who maybe wasn't that stupid in her eyes. Gosh, he was such an unfortunate man. For saying he had the whole world in his hands when in truth he couldn't have that one woman who was his wife. That one happiness that could erase all his sorrows, he couldn't have that. Karma knew its way. Sinners like him had to suffer this bad and burn on this very earth."

This was sooo cute

"It was around 11. Maan was already irritated from that dinner party and was sexually frustrated-not to mention a little drunk too-all his muscles were in knots and each cell needed just one thing. And here she was demanding on sleeping with him. He groaned and closed the lamp, lying down on his side not so happily.

With a winning grin she pulled the quilt over and laid down real close to Maan. Damn, it was a hell of a king size bed still she was sleeping with her body touching his. He shifted away and she did the same with him. Once more he shifted, this time to the very end of bed and she came close again
Do you want me to sleep on the floor?
She giggled at his stupidity and shifted back pulling him along with her. He sighed as she wrapped her hand around him and positioned her head on his chest. And he loved her for doing that."

In this two year of marriage she slept with him in his bed only twice and this man very cautiously had managed to hide things from her. But how long will he hide? finally she saw how broken, terrified n guilt ridden he really is nothing to match the calm, composed n confident person she knows.

"He gulped it thirstily with his head down. Her heart was sinking by the second seeing him so tensed. Why he wasn't looking at her? She wanted to ask if he was fine. He kept the glass on stand, taking a shaky breath and raking an unstable hand through his damp hairs.


Did... I hurt you?
His voice came out low and broken.

Why would he ask that? And how was she to tell him without his eyes on her, did he forgot she couldn't speak?

She sat before him taking his hand his hers but he took it back slowly, limply. Tum thik ho na? He asked desperately-as if his life depended on it-raising his head a bit, not giving a glance to her face but enough to see her hands.

He gulped and nodded pushing his eyes down again like keeping them up hurt. With a gentle finger she tried to tilt his face up but he wouldn't budge. Just close the lights. I don't want to you see me like this.

Cupping his face, she made him look at her and when their eyes finally met she gasped. Red and glassy, his eyes were filled with fear and so much of pain. His whole face was a picture of misery. He appeared wretched, wounded without any physical injury. If she didn't know better she wouldn't have recognized him."

He destroyed her life n destroyed his too. This shows how much he has suffered for what he did this will do for me as his punishment

"He was ashamed. He didn't want her to see him like that. Weak and trashed. God forbid if she wondered what was wrong with him. Only he knew how stale he was from inside. Nobody needed to know that, least of all Geet."

This shows how extraordinary n amazing woman Geet really is I am just aweed by her gesture so loving n caring And Maan Oh man I've already forgiven him

"Very lovingly and carefully without any questions she pulled his head to her chest where he buried his face and let a few tears fall. He held her tightly and in his mind he was pleading for forgiveness. He had suffered enough, he wanted her to know that, to see that he hated himself for he what did but Maan was well aware that his punishment would never end and once she knew who he was she would leave him."

Although I knew it before but u confirmed about his sin clearly

"This night was different, he had arms to comfort him, and ironically they belonged to the one whom he destroyed. He had not imagined that his life would come to this, where he would need help of the one whom he had aggrieved, to a point of repentance where he so much loved the girl, who's everything he had taken away."

Finally her promise to save her husband. I will take it as a positive sign may be there is still a chance for him for her for Maaneet n for us!

Lub u🤗

Edited by mila1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Lolzz scrum bag armaan :P
Made maan so much jealous ;)
N akshay too :P
N simi..another headache to maan :P
I loved the way maan approached to geet for dance
N thn their convo was cute :)
Thn geet coming in the room n irritating maan
Maans nightmare!!!
He's so broken :( n guilty
But he won't tell geet the truth as he fears she ll go away :(
N now geet decided that she won't leave maan with his nightmares :|
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Posted: 11 years ago
muahh... for understanding... i love commenting on this... but sometimes i have to search time to read... n then search another time to comment... jab tak me comment nahi karti tab tak muje acha nahi lagta... n even when i comment i dont feel im telling everything i felt sometimes...
kash aisa hi hoga once we join in S/W job!!! damn im not even finding time for myself!!!


vuff... anyways coming to update 😃
i was happy reading it... at the same time i was sad... i know u r bringing MAAN's secret out soon,,,, n these all are indications... and once it is out... im afraid jo bi GEET ab aage steps lerahi hai MAAN ki taraf... wo peeche na padjaye phir se... aur sady updates miljayega 😭 i dont want that...

simi is damn irritating yaar... she made MAAN drink 😡 n made GEET sad,,, 😒
anyways,,,, at th end MAANEET were together 😃
hmmm... MAAN want to beat armaan... 😃 acha hai... in his J mode... atleast he is coming close to GEET 😳
and they danced!!!! loved this...
She smiled at him, feeling better seeing him jealous. Laying her head on his chest she placed a little kiss there. That was enough to calm him. ❤️


hayeee... GEET me itni himmat aagayi... loving this side of GEET...
hehe 😆 she hijacked MAAN's room...
loved these lines...
*Mujhe wo room chahiye jo aapko chahiye. I want to sleep with you.* She flushed at how that came out once his eyes widened and flashed with something. *Mera matlab hai... ke mujhe yaha akele sone me darr lagega na.*She made a puppy face.

this one is funny 😆

Do you want me to sleep on the floor?

She giggled at his stupidity and shifted back pulling him along with her. He sighed as she wrapped her hand around him and positioned her head on his chest. And he loved her for doing that.


what happened to MAAN in midnight... kya yaad aagaya vusko??
why was he afraid?? why was he asking if GEET is alright?
vuske aankhen!!! aisa bi kya hua?? is that abt that incident... wo share karhi leta GEET se... vusko batadeta...
when he said this... i felt bad for him...
Just close the lights. I don't want to you see me like this.

these lines are touching... almost the entire last part...
Very lovingly and carefully without any questions she pulled his head to her chest where he buried his face and let a few tears fall. He held her tightly and in his mind he was pleading for forgiveness. He had suffered enough, he wanted her to know that, to see that he hated himself for he what did but Maan was well aware that his punishment would never end and once she knew who he was she would leave him. He wasn't a coward initially but now he feared losing her.

This night was different, he had arms to comfort him, and ironically they belonged to the one whom he destroyed. He had not imagined that his life would come to this, where he would need help of the one whom he had aggrieved, to a point of repentance where he so much loved the girl, who's everything he had taken away.

but GEET's resolution is fab... but kya wo promise nibhapayegi!!!

oh my god!!! precap... confessions!!! im afraid actually to read next... to imagine GEET's reaction 😭
Edited by deepthich - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
gr8 part..
cont.soon

thanks for pm dear,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice story
read in one go
wonderful journey of maaneet
maan is a mysterious for me his character some thing is badly bother him
n geet she bear so many thing
thanks to maan that she came out that hell
waiting for next

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