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@paponecon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

where is the 2nd or last part...its go on always naturally wth me...when i read geet is an cancer patient i am imagining still now she will b ok n maan will cure her...when i read geet is married to dev omg so bad i am knowing that dev loves her still thinking there will b some connections btween maaneet...waiting for next...usually i dont like to read sad stories, try to avoid always this kind of stories so still imaging a beautiful ending...

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Mishti

@mishtimohabbat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Hey Sanjana... Been so long since I wrote on any of your work ! Usually msg you... but since its been so long and u have probably forgotten who this Mishti Mohabbat is ..and since I so unashamedly had left a blank res on pg1 I thought to fill in the blank ...so Ji i have left a comment on page 1, for your muse.
Waiting for the next ..to read in your brilliant words Maan's heart breaking side of the story... and to cry over this beautiful Maaneet love saga...

And PS: I'm so glad u are back ... I didn't fall in the temptation of reading the teasers for your other two genius piece of FFs ...because then the wait would be even more labourous! Lol ... Waiting for any piece of writing from you
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Mishti Hug 🤗 😳

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rockin_gal

@rockin_gal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Woww that was extremely heart wrenching yet I liked it. Well I always like your work.. Pshh like?! by like I mean loveee!! Well coming back to the story, you wrote it so well that I felt I was a part of it. I really felt for all the characters and related to all of them. I really wished there could have been a happy ending.no beginning for all the real heroes out there who are battling this disease. They are in my prayers. Well lastly I wanna say great job. Please update the next part soon and also the other ffs please?!!! Eagerly waiting for it. 😃

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

sad but beautiful story...

if Geet would have been Maan's wife then I would have screamed on u but as geet is Dev's wife and Maan is her doctor so in any way it is sad story...Maan will never get her whether she is dead or alive...

waiting for Maan's side of story...

thanx for pm...

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

eagerly waiting for next part

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custodian75

@custodian75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

A very emotional story. Loved the character of Maan and Geet. Very strong.

Please update soon.

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ramahesh

@ramahesh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

eagerly waiting for next part dear
pls continue soon

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Reading the title filled me with so much apprehension and fear and yet, your having written it made me read it.

Having the C word wreak havoc so close makes me not read sad stories period.

Having said that, I salute the mastery of your writing

A husband caught in a fight to hold onto someone he loves. Loved Dev here. Trying to keep her for as long as he can. It is not easy for him to watch her wither away delibertely in front of him.

A girl trying to steal from fate what she can. She has already battled once before but knowing the odds she wants to stack the deck so that she does not lose completely. A baby nurtured inside her; sadly the only control she has in her life at present. How can she not fight for it?

A doctor who will rescue her, support her and help her win her goal. There is nothing more that a person in love can do for another selflessly than this.

Masterful characterization. It is a love story. Not the roses and hearts kind but one that touches deep in one's soul.

Thanks for the lovely writing Sanjana.

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

A Painful And Heart wrenching Update
Yet its a reality of our lives , Geet and Dev married and I'm sure
they marriage is filled with love and happiness yet sorrow and pain
is path of their marriage .
Geet wanting to keep her pregnancy and deliver her baby because
she already loves her unborn and she is right in her place too
while Dev and the rest of the family feel that she can always get
pregnant again later and that is also right
but Geet feels if she fights now still later it may happen again so its
best to carry her pregnancy to term .
however its the most greatest sacrifice a mother does yet I somehow
feel leaving a baby to grow without its mother its the deepest longing
a child can have .

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Monikaarora

@Monikaarora

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

its very emotional story! . well written dear! plz continuee soonnn.

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