MG SS - Rakshak #2 Updated Epilogue, Pg 66 Feb 13 - Page 30

Nice update

Waiting for next update....

Wow !! The changed Maan is so mature here!!

He knows the important of father and at the same time he has complete trust on his and Geet’s relation that Geets dad will not be able to separate them.

But Geets fears are also right. Her father is cunning and can do anything!

loved the conversation between them!

Hope they will be able to win Geets father.

Already waiting for next part!

Great work! Thank u again for restarting all ur ffs!!

thank you for updating

Part 15

Impressive update.... greatly written

I am sure Mohinder will try to do something to separate Maaneet

Geet's anger and pain is justified

at least Maan apologised

of cos Geet cannot stay away from Maan

so Maan consoles her

her fears are reasonable

well Maan is now her need

great she opened up to Maan regarding her dad's misconceptions

but she only needs Maan

Maan's question is justified

glad that Maan is trying to make her understand

liked that he wants to win Mohinder's approval

however Geet is adamant

is Maan taking Mohinder lightly?

intense kiss that showed everything

not surprised that Mohinder invited himself

loved that Maan wants her to complete her studies

hate that he was denied this opportunity

how will they survive without each other?

passionate moments

I think you're just skiving out of writing their closeness in detail😆

And I won't say I don't mind because I do....

The story is going good despite that.

I knew maan's reason for suggesting geet visits her dad, he doesn't have his dad and wants her to have her dad in her life.

I don't think geet overslept because of night's activities, she just doesn't want to go, that's all.

Originally posted by: SundariP

I think you're just skiving out of writing their closeness in detail😆

And I won't say I don't mind because I do....

The story is going good despite that.

I knew maan's reason for suggesting geet visits her dad, he doesn't have his dad and wants her to have her dad in her life.

I don't think geet overslept because of night's activities, she just doesn't want to go, that's all.

But I may bring it on if I feel the need of these detailing. That time may be you will feel the same. Sorry dear can't help it.

But the story will always keep moving 😊

Geet was hurt with his decision but can't let him down too Maan try to make her understand about relations

Maan have faith on him and he trust Geet and that trust is so strong Geet father soon realize y Geet in love with Maan

Maan asked her plan about her coming exam and listening her answer he was too hurt and disappoint Geet than realize how much he value father relation and he don't want her to sacrifice her study bz he left his studies bz of circumstances

Geet try to warn him about his dad but he already knows everything but he want Geet to face his father bz mohinder love for his daughter is not fake

I really appreciate your frank opinion. It helps very much to the writer and help us improve.

Saying this I am sorry that the update didn't go down well with you but I had intentionally done the closeness detailing in this update. It was much needed to show the progress in their relation of Hubby wifey and how far Maan has come in complete acceptance of this relation.

But more that that it is was important for future update buildup for emotional and physical urge of husband wife to be justified.

Okay...

i gave you enough hint of what's coming up😆

Ye Geet ki umar kitni hogi🤔

Even though she acts matured at times, she feels or acts like she's in her early 20's she is still studying so maybe 19 or 20 I'm guessing...

When she's around maan the zeal of her character really comes out... Poora wo young Love wala feel aata hai...😆

❤️

Originally posted by: tellyme

😆 don't worry dear you will soon be deprived of these soon for long.

But I may bring it on if I feel the need of these detailing. That time may be you will feel the same. Sorry dear can't help it.

But the story will always keep moving 😊

I got what you are trying to say in circles...😛

That should make the distances bearable💔

Originally posted by: tellyme

I really appreciate your frank opinion. It helps very much to the writer and help us improve.

Saying this I am sorry that the update didn't go down well with you but I had intentionally done the closeness detailing in this update. It was much needed to show the progress in their relation of Hubby wifey and how far Maan has come in complete acceptance of this relation.

But more that that it is was important for future update buildup for emotional and physical urge of husband wife to be justified.

Okay...

i gave you enough hint of what's coming up😆

I am more interested to know how you will accomplish that.

Only thing from top of my head is detention.

If maan came to me for advice we'll be in high court with habeas corpus petition against mohi😆