DESTINY PLAY 2 updated Last Part on 17-7-2014 /Page 102 - Page 49

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LAST PART


DEV was so worried for his son already and now Geet's sibbling was also with them and in worst condition. Beaten up marks was clearly visible. Maan's men constantly monitoring and try to catch the picture as much as they can. Maan left the monitor room in a pace moment. With a jerk he opened the door of a room where she was caged. He glance her with his furious eyes,but she wont scare at all.. Geet turn her face and he stepped toeards her. Maan bend on his feet and glance her. He raised his hand and caressed her hair sling and put behind her ears softly. Geet irritates thought he again came to abuse her.but she wont react stiffed likes a stone. Maan opened the rope of her hands slowly. Geet stare him in confusion and trying to scann his mind. Is this is his new trick to made her mouth open.

'do whatever you want Capt. Maan. But i am not going to open my mouth. Ye Saahil or Parth ki zindagi ka swaal hai.' Geet smiled in a sarsacstic way and determined not to leak any info.

'mujhe pata hai tumne ye sab kyu kiya. I know the reason.' Maan said softly and his eyes turn more dark then before.

Geet's eyes narrowed. She start analyising is he genuine or fake?

'mujhe pata hai tumhara...' Maan is just on the verge of revealing the truth when she raised herself as her hand were not fully free,and falls on him. She shut his mouth with hers. Maan was laying bneath her and she sealed his mouth with her lips,not want him to complete.


Isn't it that she was the first girl of his life or first to whom he kissed,but the simple touch of her made him crazy. For a moment he turn numb and lost,feeling her soft supple lips. When Geet assured that she made him shut she slipped from him and falls on the side. Lack of her warmth bring back him and saw her tensed face. Geet quickly tried to freed her hands as soon as she can. Maan helps her. He freed her from ropes now and was about to start talking again but Geet put her plam on his mouth and signaled him not to talk with her. Maan took her to washroom because there is no camera fiited and gave his mobile to her.

Geet very carefully typed msg and told him that she wore a watch due to which each and every convo of their can be heared by the kidnappers. And she wont allowed to remove it coz the moment she did they killed her brother and Parth,as watch work on human temprature.

Maan signaled her to stay there till he came back again. After 15 mins he came back again and opend her watch. Geet scared but e assured her with the signal of his eyes that nothing wrong is going to happen. He loosen the strip and placed one square plate device and pulled the watch from her hand. Then he keep the plate aside and took her to the monitor room.

'Geet ab btao.' Maan asked her.

'Maan wo watch..' She was hell scared.


'relax unhe pata nahi chalega ki tumne wo watch nai pehan rakhi. Kyunki wo devise plate jo maine us watch k neche rakhi hai wo human temp.jaisi garmi us watch tak transfer karta rahega or wo watch chalti rahegi. Now just tell me what's going on?' Maan told his plan to her.


'Geet tumne to kaha tha Saahil hostel me hai to firr wo un gundo k bech kya kar raha hai? Infact un logo ne torture kiya hai use kafi?' Dev concered for Saahil and asked for the reason.


'Dev tume pata hai na main militry join karna chahti thi? Or main select hoke training k liye b gai thi.' she reminds him.

'ha to?' Dev get confused.

'usi training or Tumhari family k sath friendly relations ki wajhse Kidnappers ne mujhe choose kiya. Papa ki achanak death ki wajhse mujhe traning complete hone se pehle hi wapis ana pada. Papa ne kafi loan liye hue the mumma k ilaz k liye wo to bachi nai par loans chukate chukate papa ki death ho gai. Ab Saahil ki zimmedari or loans ki wajhse se mujhe army join karne ka mera dream drop karna pada. I start for a job and luckily found it soon. But that was only a trap for me. Company gave me a home. I was shifted with Saahil there and with in two days they took away Saahil from me and forced me to help them or else they killed him. I wont but having no choice i committ this crime.' Geet shed tears feeling guitly on her act.


'Geet tum Uncle ki death k baad hi mere pas kyu nahi aai?' Dev scold him.

'main tumhara ehsan nahi lena chahti thi. I am sorry. Or sab itna jaldi hua kuch samjhne ka muka hi nahi mila.' Geet apolozise.

Dev hugged her. 'galti meri bhi hai. Mujhe bhi dhyan dena chahiye tha tum logo pe. Par kya karta Uncle kabi b ready hi nahi hote help lene k liye.' Dev consoling her and himself.


'guys ye time sentimental hone ka nahi hai. We have to take some action.' Maan reminds them and parted her from Dev.

'Geet tumne us jagah ko dekha hai ander se?' Maan asked her.


'ha dekha hai.' she told him.

'good. Have u any idea k kitne log hai?' Maan wants to make sure when he attacked they have full proof plan for that.

Maan showed her the blue print on the building and she told him whatever she knew. Maan alerts his all officers and told his plan to them.

Meanwhile Dev recieved a call from kidnappers. They summoned him to come alone. Maan signaled him and he went from there.


'hum log agar Dev k pichhe gaye to unhe pata chal jayega. Wo log har waqt humpe nazar rakhe hue hai.' Geet told him.


'hum Dev ki pichhe nahi jayenge par yaha se nikalna to hoga na.' Maan start thinking and got an idea. He planned to hide in ambulance which carring the injured guards. He and his whole team hide in ambulance to went out of the mansion without coming in the eyes of kidnappers. With the help of Geet,Maan get the information of the hidden cameras fitted by Geet in the mansion. With the help of computers he controlled the view they showed to kidnappers. One fixed tape is running and the camers showed the kidnappers that the Maan and his team still roaming helplessly in the mansion.

Maan is not ready to involved Geet in his mission so he left her in the mansion and left. Dev reached to the godown. He followed all the instruction given to him. His eyes were closed. One man came and opened the piece of cloth. Dev scanned and found armed men all around. But all had a mask on their faces. So no one can recognised them. Their leader come forward and welcomed him. He too hide his face behind the mask.

'welcm Dev. Achha kiya jo humari baat maan li.' he said with a laugh.

'what you want. Tell me i am here now. And where is my son. I want to see him.' Dev demands.

'yahi hai wo so relax. Mill jayega tumhe. Bad tum humara kaam kar do firr tumhe tumhara beta sahi salamat mill jayega.' He said coldly.

'nahi first i want to see my son.' Dev denied and asked for Parth.

'alright.' leader agreed and signaled his man.

His man went away to brought Parth there. Seeing Parth Dev's heart bleeds. He want to embrace his son,but not allowed to do so. On the other hand Parth is also crying for his father's warmth.

'dad save me. Dad save. Inhone Saahil bhiya ko b mara.' little soul pleading for help and also told about Sahil to his dad.

'Sahil yaha kya kar raha hai?' Dev enquired.

'sahil kya kar ra hai its none of your business. If you want your kid alright then do what i want. Sign these papers.' he roared angrily.

'konse papers hai ye?' Dev is wasting their time till Maan is not coming as he told him to do so.

'tume Parth chahiye ya nahi?',the goon decreased the gap between knief put on his neck and threatened Dev.

'ha ha.. Please dont hurt him.' Dev paniced seeing Parth's life in danger and only praying for Maan to come.


Maan came thee and attack his men from back. They hold them and cut their necks from a sharp knief. Gradually Maan and his team making a way to inside by clearing the guards one by one. The crawling on ice so no one can see them coming. Soon they were inside but one guard see them and alerts others. Now the open fight is started. Seeking the chance Dev snatch his son and run towards the cage where Saahil is caged. All are firing on each other. Some of his men died in the firing. Maan's anger grew and he become a wild beast. Maan threw a bomb and killed Kidnapper's many men at once. With this his grip over situation is firmed. Gradullly he managed to killed all his men. But their chief is missing. He wasnt there. Maan get worried and his fear was right. He was coming with Saahil,pointing gun on his head.

'achha bewakuf bnaya tumne mujhe un jhooti video clips se. Par capt MSK. Ye gun b asli hai goli b. Agar mujhe yaha se jane nahi diya to main yahi iska sir uda dunga.' He cautioned all and Maan signaled his men to put down their guns.

'tum yaha se bach k ja nahi sakte.' Maan cautioned him.

'i am going cap.' he laughed and shoot to hit him. Bullet insert in his leg and Maan bend down. Kidnapped point the gun on Maan's head.

'tume tumhare kiye ki saza zaroor milegi. Just because of you mera sara plan khrab ho gaya.' He is fuming in the rage of revenge and pulled the trigger to burst his head. All his men seeing helplessly as if they move he will do anything with Maan and Saahil.

'Dev sign the papers or i will shoot both.' he commands again.

'no dont do that. Main sign karta hu.',Dev assured him and took the papers. He signed the papers for the sake of Maan and Saahil's life. Maan is seeking for a chance coz he clencehd the Saahil's neck so hard. Maan's any wrong move put his life in danger. Dev handover the papers to him.

'thanx alot. Ab mujhe tume me se kisi ki zaroorat nahi hai.' He kicked the Maan away and dragged Saahil with him towards outside. Maan is stepping slowly but helpless due to Saahil.

Kidnapper is heading towards outside. He killed his many men coming to his way. But the moment he is going to hit Maan coming towards him,one bullet hit his hand and gun dropped down. Both looked in the direction. Geet was standing with holding a gun. She shoot him to protect Maan and Sahil. This was the moment Maan seeking for. He slipped towards him and kicked him hard. Saahil got freedom from his grip and he ran towards Dev. He was so scared and hugged him tight. Dev embraced him too with Parth. Protecting both childeren and moreover hide their faces to keep themselves away from the blood game. Maan and Geet overpowered the chief of them. They beat him to death. Now he was in their cluctches.

'thanx alot Maan. Just because of you Parth or Saahil dono sahi salamat hai.' Dev showed his gratitude.

Sahil ran towards Geet and she embraced him. She kissed him on his face all over and caressed him. Her eyes were wet but due to happiness this time. 'relax Geet Sahil thek hai.' Dev assured her.

'Dev Geet tum log janna nahi chahte ye kon hai?' Maan asked and grabbed their attention.

'he is criminal or hume ise kya?' Dev said casually.


'he is not an ordinary criminal Dev. Kai pehchan hai iski. Jinme se tumse judi hui hai.' Maan revealed and made both Geet and Dev stunned. Maan snatch mask from his face and showed his real face to them. Dev's eyes popped out.

'chachaji aap?'' Dev was in a shock.

'ha chachaji. Dev inke or b karname hai. Inki talash to hume kab se thi. He is not only a kidnapper of your son but a smuggler of gun and boms also. He need money for his illigal work so he deciede to kidnap Parth and for that he targeting Geet taki fase to wo fase. Ye papers jispe tumne sign kiye hai inme likha hai ki tum apni puri property ek xyz fake co. K naam tarsfer kar rae ho. Baad me ye use bech k sara paise apne illigal kamo me use karne wale tha.' Maan told chief's whole plan to all.

Dev felt disgust about him. As he was his uncle and stooping so low. 'Maan do whatever you what to do with him. Mera inse koi lena dena nahi hai. Par ha,Geet ko kuchh nahi hona chahiye. Wo beksoor hai.'

'filhall to mujhe use b arrest karna padega. Baki jo court ka faisla.' Maan arrest her too and Dev took all the responsibilty of Sahil. He took him along with them.

Dev hired lawyer for Geet and saved her from imprisionment. Court show mercy and freed her from all alligations and gave death sentence to Dev's uncle who proved terriorist also.

'Geet tum apni training puri karo or apna sapna bhi. Main or Meera bachho ka pura khyal rakhenge.' Dev assured her and asked her to complete her training and join army again.

'it means tumne?' Geet's eyes gleamed.

'ha kisi ne mujhse kaha tha dil ki baat zada der dil me nahi rakhni chahiye. Meera mujhse pyar karti hai or Parth ne b use accept kar liya hai to maine b socha kyu na life ko ek or chance diya jaye.' Dev said with a smile.

'i am so happy for both of you.' Geet hugged him and congratulate both.

'Geet dont worry about Sahil. We take very good care of him. Trust me.' Meera assured her and boost het to fulfill her dream.

Geet agreed and joined again. Her training starts and soon cadet divided. She recieved a letter to report her captain...




NEXT - EPILOGUE... ONLY IF I GET LONG COMMENTS AND PROPER LIKES. OR ELSE TAKE THIS PART FULL AND FINAL...
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First 😆
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Second 😛
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superb part...I knew it geet will be innocent she has done all this to save sahil...wow maaneet kiss...maan very smartly entered goons area and saved sahil and parth...so it was dev's uncle who did all this...meera and dev together...captain will be Maan...plz do give epilogue
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update

and please dont do that with us ,give a long epiloge too


maan is way too intelligent to know all about dev's chachaji

he is behind all this but i guess this is what money does making enemies


but glad that both children are safe

geet is gone through so much ,only to save her little brother she has do it

but i like the way she in the end saved maan from that man

and at last dev proposed meera

by the way the kiss between maan and geet was awesome

i think this is what maan felt

and i hope they too have a love story

after all its maan and geet

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Posted: 11 years ago
And the captain s maan rt?
Nice update
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Awesome update babu...
loved it a lottt...
maan ko samjh aa gaya k geet ne sab kuch kyu kiya...oye hoye maaneet kiss
hmm tho kidnappers ne geet ko ek watch pahna k rkhi jiss se wo geet pe nazar rkhe huye then unki baate b sunn skte the
geet ne sab kuch bata diya maan n dev ko k kaise usse trap kiya gaya tha...geet ne maan ko uss jagah k baare me jo pata tha sab bata diya aur mansion me usne jo camera lagye the unke baare meb bata diya...
kidnapper ka call aya dev ko aur usne dev ko akele bulaya...maan n uski team b ambulance me chup k mansion se nikal gai taki kidnappers ko kuch pata na chale...
kidnapper dev se kisi papers me sign chahte the...maan n uski team waha aa gai time pe n unki fight hui kidnappers se...
uff kidnapper k chief ne sahil ko gun point me rkh kr dev se papers me sign krwa liya...n wo maan ko b maarne wala tha but geet waha aa gai n usne chief k hand me shoot kr diya...
ohh tho dev k uncle the iss sab k piche...maan ne geet ko b arrest kiya kidnapper ki help krne k wajah se...dev ne lawyer ki help se geet ko court me save krwa liya...
wow finally sab thik ho gaya n dev ne b life ko ek chance dene ka decision le liya meera se shadi kr k...dev ne geet ko apna military join krne ka dream poora krne ko kaha...
geet ko letter mila apne captain ko report krne...
hehehehe mujhe pata h maan hi hoga geet ka captain 😛 😉

eagerly waiting for epilogue

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