THE LOCKET (24) MG FF *** Epilogue pg 120 ** link to new story pg 168

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@bhanu_rekhag

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Posted: 11 years ago

#901

beautiful...

I loved almost everything in the story ...

Loved every scene n interactions of maaneet most...next is devtara ...

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love2_soma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#902

mmmuuuaaahhh...

superb ending...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

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Susegad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#903

Originally posted by: dqno1

ab mujhe bhi yaad nahi hai... was it because of Mari or Palin?

main sweet hu?😲 naughty I agree, sweet not so much.. considerate is perhaps the word ..😃

Oh yeah I do believe it was on IOYSW thread. During the bhoot mafia days.😆

Yes you are. Extremely considerate😳

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chahatshah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#904

nice epilogue will miss this story so much thanx for this brilliant writting

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priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#905

The Locket ended 😭patha hi nahi chala kiyeh apni oar keechtha chala gaya aur ismein dhoob gaya ab yeh katam hogayi hai par dil mein humesha rahega.

this is the first one where everyone loved dev and tara

maan ki har feeling and har expression tune itna khoob express kiya ki kitna bhi pado dil nahi bharega bas uske baaremein hi sochthe hi rahenge

OMG yeh devtara tho cricket team banane ki soch rahe hai kya😆already 3 bache ab 4 one on the way

wow sachin kitna cute hai perfectly suited pic aur yeh bhi giit hi bularahe hai apni papa ki tarah😆😆

sur ki entry bhi hogayi hai, nice name

sab apne apne life mein poori tarah settle hogaye hai

dadi tho sabse best hai dekho apne poton ko tadapne nahi diya office ko bhi badal diya apne family ke saath spend karne keliye such a lovely dadi

maithilima and sid ka bhi relation waise ka waise hi rehne diya which i liked it

aur yeh kya meri pyaari nakul bhaiyaa ko house mother banaliya😆

flashback tho ek dum mast hai the entry of sachin and sur in their lovely life

aur last mein sab maanetians ko bhi indono se milwahi diya😆

aur main gussa hoon tu kyun thanks bola meri pehlwaan pati ko kehkar tujko pitwaoongi yaad rakhna😆

ab jaldi se apni holidays katam karke aajao taaki jaldi se mujhe aur lakshu ko naya kaam milejayei😆

enjoy ur holidays

happy journey😃

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Ratna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#906

Avi 🤗...here i am for my long comment...hope i do justice to your awesome story...typing it at midnight after a long tiring day...plz ignore the mistakes...left a msg for all the amazing people who helped u with TL...hoping they will see my posts...if not could u plz let them know ...thank u 😊

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Ratna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#907

Avi 🤗

Thank u so much for The Locket

A beautiful journey of love ❤️

Maan and his Giit...loved the way u weaved in such amazing characters into their story when needed...lovable and real people...Daadi,Darji,DevTara,Chandan,Poonam,Maithiliamma,

Kabir,Megha,Sujal,Kashish, Annie,Arjun,Pinly.Adi...all of them were awesome👍🏼...only one i hated was Brij 😡 ...but what is a love story without a villian...was so glad he was royally trashed 😛...so happy to see all the families merged as one and having a wonderful life...sighhh the FB's...possesive and J Giit...seducing Maan☺️,...thudilicious part...romantic honeymoon ...ride with MHP fans😆...lucky they got to meet our Maaniit...and gave them naughty ideas too...not that they need them...those two our fully and totally into each other ...feeling very emotional the journey has ended...but happy all their dreams came true ...with God and both set of parents blessing them from above ⭐️...the best and most unique epilogue i have ever read...so much thought and love can be seen in each and every word 👏..

Dil se thank u Avi!

Happy 75th Birthday Daadima!

Adorable kids ⭐️...omg so many of them 😲

DevTara are still adding to the numbers 😆

loved the way u gave so much thought

in naming them...each and every

name has a meaning and purpose👍🏼

Sachin is just like Maan with Geet's eyes...

what a combination ...and the way he copies
whatever his dad does ...even calling his mom Giit...he is so sweet and intelligent ❤️

Sur Maan Khurana ❤️
Sur ,what a beautiful name for the daughter of Geet...only you could think of it 👍🏼..loved the way u described her..
replica of Geet with Maan's eyes...
i can see her wrapping her Papa around
her little finger...the sweet cutie ⭐️

Maan and Giit of this story are such

a made for each other couple..

...from their gorgeous looks...their kind hearts...their pure love..their strength and determination that made them fight all the odds

and become winners in the end...they are truly blessed...our magical Maaneet

Maaneet together forever ❤️

Words are not enough to show my appreciation so used so many gif's and siggies😳

TL will always remain close to my heart ❤️

Great job Avi 👍🏼

Here ends one more chapter in your love story with Maaneet 👏....waiting eagerly for another to start... when and how it will i can't say.....but hoping it starts soom... your love for Maan and Giit will make it happen❤️

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Ratna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#908

Lakshmi 🤗...thank u so much my dear...for all the beautiful and creative banners you made for TL 👏...u out did yourself again and again with each new banner 👍🏼...loved all of them ❤️...the rain effect one...the rose petal one...the wedding card...the family tree...these were extra special 👍🏼...all of them enhanced the feel of the update

Banners ⭐️

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Ratna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#909

Mari 🤗...thank u so much...for your patience and time in proof reading 100+ updates 👏..,,with some of the updates being posted in parts...it made the reading all the more pleasurable ...TL would not have been the same without your selfless effort 👍🏼...really appreciate it from the bottom of my heart ❤️

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Ratna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#910

Priya 🤗...thank u so much dear...for the beautiful VM's of Maaneet ...the song and scene selections were simply superb 👍🏼...u are so creative and talented 👏...they way Avi used your vm's to tell her story and give teasers made TL so unique ⭐️...always looked forward for the musical journey 😃