THE LOCKET (24) MG FF *** Epilogue pg 120 ** link to new story pg 168 - Page 90

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BDayGal-11Jan



Bold - you dont know me yet 😉 😳 🤣

Why does the above sentence make me like you even more😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chalo Sheen, I am going out. Will catch up with you soon. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad

Chalo Sheen, I am going out. Will catch up with you soon.😃



Okay bye Meri rooh ki behen 😉.. Yeh jaan ke be-had khushi hui ke koi mujhe is wajah se bhi pasand kr sakta hai Lol 😆 🤣

Its Sleeping Time 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing epilogue...
loved it...
the flashback are awesome...
thank you for wonderful story...
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Posted: 11 years ago
superbb epilogue for a superb story
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Posted: 11 years ago
that wat thudlicious elpilogue to a very thudlicious story.

omg so many grandkids with in little time spam😆😆😆 dadi maa ko nihaal kar diya dev and maan ne😉😉😉 with grand kids

now the way u wrote how geet went back to past and narrate what had happened and how maan had full filled her each and every wish was wowww.
avi ur writing had rocked all through the story but in this last part and epi was mind blowing. just tooo good.
you have end each and every loop u started in the story and in a very beautiful way without rushing 👏👏

then omg the son on maan khurana the total copy of him and hayee the way u showed how he copy his dad in each and every way. just a little part of him but touched my heart to much

then dev tara part was hilarious baby with in nine months😆 and dadi covering as preterm😆😆😆
but why it does happen in real😉😉😉

I have two examples in my family baby with in nine months of marriage😆😆

thanks for such a wonderful story and pls do come back with another rocking maaneet😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BDayGal-11Jan



Hahaha Avii kitne ache se janti hai mujhe 😆
But bach gya bechara 😳


😆 bohut acchi tarah se😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Susegad


Avi is diabetic sweet. Let's just say I am not😆

Glad you like the crazy characters. I guess crazy people like me only attract other crazies. Acche log mujh jaise logo se milo door rehte hain.😆

Avi tum kaise aa gayi phir meri zindagi mein?😲

This is a big mystery Milord.


ab mujhe bhi yaad nahi hai... was it because of Mari or Palin?

main sweet hu?😲 naughty I agree, sweet not so much.. considerate is perhaps the word ..😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
I ave not read your story but had thought to read it sooo had bookmarked your link and wen I was commenting about story accidentally tea fell on my phone and my phone crashed

sooo now I am collecting links from last 2 months

plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz help with the links
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Posted: 11 years ago

airight all happy happy ...all goody goody!!!!!!!!

well this is how it happens in maan-geet world.

the best part about maan geet stories is that are happy ending ...well most of them.

thank you very much for this beautiful story.😃

looking forward to something new from you very soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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