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friend_lee2006

@friend_lee2006

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Awesome update
Really love it
Please continue soon
Eagerly waiting

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

wonderful start..loved the concept of different decision made leading to an alternate possibility...but for Geet the decision has become painful, she is feeling guilty for keeping her son away...

and seems Maan knew her whereabouts all the time, his men are always present around to protect her.

waiting for her reaction when she meets them...

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Kshitija

@krndr

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

awesome concept of Alternate reality
definitely looking forward to read more of it

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huma

@huma12.

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

awsssmmm conceput totaly diffrent from privious

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Gr 8 Concept ..
Read your Preg with a kid ...😃
M one of your regular reader
wanted you to continue your other FFS ...
its OK though ...😭
but this concept looks promising ...👏
continue soon

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Nice start .. loved it !!!

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.OneDirection.

@.OneDirection.

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

awww ...everything seems to be a mystery...!!!
dont know how samrat gonna react ...

interesting ... cant wait to read more

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

geet in delhi

so many que in her mind

was she always secured by maan

maan n samrat in hospital

geets mamta is flowing n even concerned for maan

what happenned to them n even arav is hurt too

were they attacked..

maan saying not 2 give hope 2 sam

maan is r8

what if geet again leaves sam

n the small boy will be looking for his mom..

nice part

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

wow lovely emotional update...te way geet ki shock and pain thinking she is going again to delhi, were she left her baby was lovely emotional..her restless wen she came to hospital and te way her wory and shock to see her baby was lying in bed and my maan was bandage, they silence was lovely emotional..te way geet shock arnav, so many questions running in her mind but two mens ki silence making her mad was lovely emotional..te way geet ki restless thinking wat she will say to her son, and my maan saying dont give hopes was lovely emotional..i love te update