DADI'S LAST WISH !! (completed!) - Page 28

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

That's coz of pratiba!

Remember I've asked u once... if itwas prathiba's story??

Now u know the reason. ..

Originally posted by: chahat59

Ya i got it.
I will think something about it first i will complete koi aap sa

Originally posted by: mauaa

Yr all the stories r treat to read.. Kaash kabhi khatam hi na ho.. Pr ho jaati hai.. I wish i cd also do sm magic like geet..

Originally posted by: mayurmaaneet

whoaaa nice.. hahaha lol.. mishty is funny.. geet is an angel yay.. cont soon hun..

Originally posted by: -Adwika-

Wow awesome story yaar

read it in one go, and ur other works too, they r superb, specially I love Beyond logic, I love the scary gangster and angry wife,, u know from the time I started to read the story ( that is just few weeks back ) mere dimag me ajeeb ajeeb concepts aate rehte hai, jisme se ek aisa hi kuch tha and reading it in real made it more fab,

Well maine jitni stories read ki hai main saari stories ke comment issi update me kar rahi hoon ( hope u don't mind

Silly Little heart, god it was the sad story but still I loved it soo much, as u said har story me hapy ending ho zarori toh nahi but still some where I wanted it to be happy ending, can u plz give one moe update of that story stating it as epi and showing that Geet is trying to be happy in her new life but still somewhere have feeling for Maan but she is avoiding it so that there won't be any problem in Maan's married life

Story of my lost heart , haayee prince and princess story with perfect masala, yeh toh bachpan me sunni

hui stories se bhi kaffi acchi hai, the way maan saved Geet and later when they fall in love, hayee kitne acche se bataya, and when Geet got to know the status of Maan and everything after that was becoming fab after fab, ek update read karne ke baad lagta tha ke abhi ke abhi dusra upate read karoon, and I did that 😆 aur poori story finish kardi in minimum 1 and half hours, can u imagine

Dreams to reach u, hey this story really took me to dreamland where I imagine my prince to be as Maan, jab me yeh story read kar rahi thi baar baar mere dimag me ek hi soong aa raha tha " Pyaar hua, ikraar hua hai, pyaar se phir kyu darta hai " maybe it doesn't go along with the story but still mera dimag baar baar issi song ko play kar raha tha aur abhi bhi kar raha hai jab me comment likh rahi hoon, but have to say this sweet story which took my heart with it and made me read ur other stories too

Tiny Surprises and Sweet Shocks, wow the ordinary man Maan whos life got changed by one call when he got to know that he is no more ordinary but one of the richest Maan, life the sweet bond between Geet and Maan, arey yaar Geet date kyu nahi likhti apni dairy main Maan ke saath mujhe bhi confuse kar rahi thi, but yeh toh surte hai ki Geet too has feelings for Maan like Maan has, OMG I m waiting for more plz update soon

Don't let me go, I thought this story will have same sad end as Silly little heart but with a change that in this Geet will be married but thatnk god it wasn't like that or else main bohot sad ho jaati, but kya ending di thi ek dum se poora scene hi change kar diya even Rahul was forced to marry geet and OMG maan was rahul friend thank god issi bahane se Maan ko ghar me entry bhi mili aur Geet ko J karna mauika aur uska accha fiada uthaya Maan ne, Geet khud uske paas aa gayi, but in normal and but similar situation Geet humesha Maan ko kiss karti thi but isme toh Geet ne aakar Maan ko thapad maar diya, that was really different😆, I loved it sooo much

Dadi'd last wish, wah dadi kya wish maangi apne, first and angel for Maan and who could be better than our Geet and that angel should be her granddaughter in law,I love Geet's entry, Maan ki halat dekhne, opps sorry padne layak thi, he was shocked that his dadi has sent an angel for him, love the scene where babaji and dadi see live telecast of earth with popcorn, aur jab Maan ne Geet ko gussa dil laya toh Geet ne bhi usse angel ko jab gussa aata hai waise treatment diya god Maan ki halat toh buri ho gayi thi, but in all this I just hat one thing and that is naina, god usse kyu aana tha, pata mujhe toh laga ki tum maan ko naina ke trap me phasa dogi and then Geet ebing a good angel will come to rescue Maan, but yahan par toh aisa kuch bhi nahi hua and I m really happy for that, Geet and Maan on mission to impress the other but ab Maan ko pata chal gaya hai that Geet want to impress him, now I want to see Geet kya kya karegi Maan ko impress karne ke liye, but yeh naina kaha gayab ho gayi, I don't think mujhse koi update miss hua read karne ke liye and u close the chapter of naina, if it is so please do let me know mujhe janana hai ki naina ka chapter tum kaise close karti ho.

U know u r one one of the awesome writer present over the forum,

and please ignore any spelling mistake, and story mistake mujhe jaisa jaisa yaad aya waisa waisa maine comment me likh diya hai and sorry agar kuch galat ho gaya hai toh

and one more thing I m waiting for more and more and more and more and more updates, so please please please, jaldi se dena😳

pheww comment on story finish hopefully main kisi bhi story ke baare me galat comment nahi kiya hai, agar aisa hai toh bacchi samjh kar maaf kar dena😉😛

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Hmmm... u missed the part where maan was granted the power n asked to choose. ...

Usme naina ka end hogaya😛

Beyond logics well that was written completely out of boredom!( Listen to the song kabhi anatu meri gali u will relate more to the story) Hmmm n its story is still forming so will update after completing Dadi's Last Wish! Which has only two parts left!!

Dreams to reach u hmmm that was a cute love story...

N my first work of course. .. Thanks for liking!

Story of my lost heart! I wanted to write something wery complicated story suddenly. ..n as it reached the point where the story gets thicker I felt no one's really reading it so I thought it would be better to end... thank you for reading it!

Silly Little Heart! It was a os n then converted into ss I didn't plan any sad end but it could not have a happy end! Well planning a sequel to it soon. ... hopefully it will have the happy ending!😃

Tiny Surprises. .. plz don't wait for that one... I feel it would get discontinued🤢

Don't let me go well no comments on that!😆

Hmm just started a new story WORD CALLED "LOVE"!! Try it if u are free. ...

Hmmm hope I've covered up everything!

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING N REPLYING TO ALL MY STORIES...🤗

Originally posted by: -Adwika-

OMG the sequel of Silly Little Heart, wow please usse bhi jaldi start karna, if u have enough time then but still will be waiting for that too read

Tiny Surprises, please please usse discontinue mat karna, its so not done, u know agar tum abhi discontinue karogi toh present reader+future readers dono ko bura lagega and a new readers like me will feel more bad, please aisa mat karna, if u wat take time but dont discontinue and even if u don't feel like completing it done just give a summary of the future upates so that at least it would have an ending