DADI'S LAST WISH !! (completed!) - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
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brilliant concept...plz add me to ur pm list...😃
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Originally posted by: sanghita0000

brilliant concept...plz add me to ur pm list...😃

Thank U!
But I don't have a pm list!😕

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Originally posted by: cutestar12

Lovely update continue soon

Thanks but I guess u have to wait a long time for this one...😳
As im busy with the other story!

If possible give it a try "Story of my lost Heart! "
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Hay people!
I know it's long since last update. ..but iwas strictly warned by someone to write one story at a time !

M love my life overpowerd my love for this story sadly!😆
So this one is put on hold!

Till then if u wish u can read my othe work "Story of my lost Heart! " though😉
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Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Hay people!
I know it's long since last update. ..but iwas strictly warned by someone to write one story at a time !

M love my life overpowerd my love for this story sadly!😆
So this one is put on hold!

Till then if u wish u can read my othe work "Story of my lost Heart! " though😉



I hope it wouldnt be discontinued for long... And me loving Story of my Lost Heart very much... So, when you complete that story, we can come back to this one...
Me fine with this but please dont delay it too much...
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Interesting .. Angel and Witch !!
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Originally posted by: _BlackPearl_

Interesting .. Angel and Witch !!

Thank U! 😊
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Updating ina hour or so! 😊
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Part-6



Babaji y is this maan shouting like a dinosaur on the contrary babaji does dinosaur shout!
Geet if your discussion with babaji is over then answer me! What were u doing with my shirt?

Wo nothing much just fixing the loose button if u want u can check! I answered him making an innocent face ..Of course I heard the naina thing but I chose to ignore. .. this not the right time...

Ok! Give it to me ...saying he just walked out like a strom...

Babaji! U just wait im coming after making sure his so called business party is a success. .

He went to the party to be the centre of attention according to naina right! So b it... enjoy the attention Mr.Khurana!

As he entered I had the spot light turned towards him... which n led him to his clients. ...

Then I had a special waiter following him every ware n as the dance was announced I know naina would approach him ...

If you know to loosen the threads then I know how to fix them naina... I thought smiling wickedly at my next step. ..

As expected they were in the dance floor. . Suddenly the spot light was on n there was a down pour of glitter n flowers on them...

That was enough for the volcano to erupt!

As expected the party ended with a loud rore n a very angry MSK walking out of the party! Shooting dissapointed glare towards nina ...

Now that was for you naina! Enjoy ur first failure. ... looking at the tv screen which was showing the live telecast of the party!

She thought I would not have guessed her plans. .. too bad it's too easy to guess. ... come on naina that y I asked u to watch latest movies more... look what happened to your 70s plan seriously broken button!

Ok now I think Amitabh Bachan will be back in his angry young maan look! I better escape before he burst his frustration on me. ...


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On reaching back for the first time in my life I was glad to b back home. ... There was something today which gave me peace ... I settled my self on the sofa.. turning off the tv I know geet must have been watching. .. I turned to my side to find a streaming cup of coffee on the table...

I took it n headed to freshen up a bit!

On coming down I saw her arrange the table for dinner. ..

I quitely went n sat by her side ... as she started serving me ... I held her hand! N made her sit...

Misthi! I knew ur mad at me but I didn't expect this from you!

I thought when an angel gets angry it would be lot different n more interesting to face nc u r acting all humanly...

So for a change I wanted to feel how it b living with a real angel!

How would it be to have this dinner when I dine with a angel!

R u sure?

Yep... more than anything!

Ok u asked for it!

Next second before I could think the roof was opened n we were sitting under the huge tree in the open sky...

Before I could say any thing I was drenched with water which was pouring only on me...as rest was all dry like a desert!

Geeet!

What! u wanted to experience anger of an angel now this is just the beginning Maan...Enjoy your dinner!




To be continued. ...





Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago

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