MG SS Dastak -Dil Ki (A Knock at the Heart)Final Part-4 Pg-20 updated

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

hi thanks 4 da pm n sad update! Geet pregnant n Maan dies in an accident! Dadi n nani take care of Geet! she dies delivering a baby girl! well written

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ankvk

@ankvk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
beautiful update & loved it...can we get epilogue???

Thank you...I'll try to give a poem as an epilogue...😊

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Madhu

@Madhu_31

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

lovely update dear

sad that maaneet left😭

but happy that they are together in heaven😃

and happy for their princess nagma

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ankvk

@ankvk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: -Mithuna-
Lovely😊
Maaneet left their nagma

Thank you!!

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Maybe I was prepared for the end😕

Didn't feel bad for their death. ...

Strange!

Loved the whole story. ... n importantly ur writing style⭐️

Waiting for more work from you. ..😊

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ankvk

@ankvk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
Maybe I was prepared for the end😕
Didn't feel bad for their death. ...
Strange!
Loved the whole story. ... n importantly ur writing style⭐️
Waiting for more work from you. ..😊

Thank you so much...

I was wondering why you never commented for so many updates...😛

Thanks...I will write a different one now...not tragic...

😊

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: ankvk

Thank you so much...

I was wondering why you never commented for so many updates...😛

Thanks...I will write a different one now...not tragic...

😊

It was more of romantic than tragic😉... I u c from my side...

Minus the end that is...

N about comments hmmm...

U will know me ... slowly😊

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ankvk

@ankvk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

It was more of romantic than tragic😉... I u c from my side...
Minus the end that is...

N about comments hmmm...
U will know me ... slowly😊

Thanks for your prompt reply...take care...

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ankvk

@ankvk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: aparna3011
why maaneet leave this world
left with nagma for daadi n nani

In this story they had to...there was a knock at their heart and they met...as per destiny...they had to meet to leave as well...

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ankvk

@ankvk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
hi thanks 4 da pm n sad update! Geet pregnant n Maan dies in an accident! Dadi n nani take care of Geet! she dies delivering a baby girl! well written

Thanks for reading and commenting dear...

Means a lot to me...