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Posted: 11 years ago
good going maan...dekhte hai kaun kahan pauhunchte hai...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey sporthy in a story you need to keep some hidden parts and you can't disclose everything in one update. In readers point of view it's necessary for them to ask about their doubts.Now don't get upset on those. Just carry on. I too waiting to read your story.. Sorry last week I didn't have time for me either so couldn't read your updates but I'm with you dear and I know all the readers are with you.
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice
slowly things r coming out

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Posted: 11 years ago

DREAM-18

It was the same usual morning. . But there was a small difference. . Today I'm going to meet him... after 3 long years... the sun was extra bright so was my mood. .. I couldn't help but look into the mirror every 5 min... now I don't want him to c me messy!

Dad was already with me yelling at me to get ready soon as we were getting late. .

But what to do I was too much exited that I became clumsy!

After hurrying through the busy lanes of the city! Between att the shimmering night lights we entered the venue. ..
It was one high society party.. which my Maan hated!I thought chuckling at the very thought. ...

But all my thoughts broke as I saw him swaying away in the music with some random girl!

He was so much into the party that he didn't even noticed me!

What broke my hear was the hug n the closeness which he shared with that girl it was hard to get unnoticed. ...

When I was about to step out of the party! I heard him say

Y geet ?? u wanted me to move on right!
So I did!

His voice was cold n filled with arrogance. .. One I never heard!

That broke my sleep!





It was time to return back home ...but was it really!

Now I was so much used to living like this all alone. ..n with all those gossip surrounding him I don't know where to be happy or sad...

As I entered my room. . Dad came n gave me a tight hug saying it's time for me to get back to business!

Now I don't even have a little bit of clue of what's going on n what's happening around me any more. . I silently accepted every thing that came by! As I was prepared to face the harsh reality of my life!

I entered the office to notice there were many new faces whom I didn't even recognise. ..I directly went to my cabinn aske my pa to arrange a meeting with all the hierarchy. .stating I was asking about a brief overview of our company n a detailed report the next day morning first hour!

As the day came to a end I went to my hide out in the office which no one else was aware of..it was a huge empty hall dad made for me for my relaxation. . As he knows I love dancing. . I put on a random no.. n swayed away to the music. ...

I didn't even notice someone was watching me closely. ..

As I was dancing I didn't know when tears started streaming down my eyes. ..Tears of separation! tears of pain that I couldn't help him hold on to the thread which bound him to me..

Before I could realise I broke down into violent cry..That's when I felt someone take me in his embrace n cry with me

It was him I know that it was him!

U are late! He said out of the blue very late!

There isn't even a tiny chance. . I asked cupping cheek

No! He said tears streaming down his eyes kissing my palm!

It's ok Mr.Khurana.. I can understand! I said trying to break apart!

I should leave now!

No! Dare u say that word again! U r not going anywhere. . Not with out me at least!

Let me see u properly! He said moving apart a little bit!

Wow! U still look like a angel ..

My Misthi! He said hugging me dearly!

But that gossip. . N even dad said u...

U didn't believe me. ..he said hurt

No I do but dad...

I asked him to say that to you so that u come back!

He lied! I asked as the realisation drawn on to me...

He nodded still crying n holding on to me...tightly. .

Occasionally kissing me every ware making sure I was with him!

Jaan! Now stop crying what will every one think MSK crying not happening. .

Misthi u won't go back right! Promise me u won't ! Please misthi promise me...

Jaan what's this ..Don't cry stop it now ..where will I go!

But jaan .. I heard there are some issues going around regarding ur ur decisions ... do u think it's ok if I come back!

Yes it's perfectly ok... n u r back as Geet Handa not Geet Maan Singh Khurana! So it won't be a problem. .

Oh so again I have to stay alone. ..I said teasing him a bit!

What no! He said so abruptly that couldn't help but burst out laughing!

That's when I heard him say. . It's always a treat to watch you laughing Misthi!

Jaan! I missed you sooo much!

For which he tightened his hold on me as I was lying on him on the floor!

Misthi can I have a pizza tonight!

Now look my husband started placing orders. .

Of course my wife my wish!

Let's go home Misthi!

Jaan! But dad!

don't worry he took his medicine n slept!

As I reached home only to notice everything was the same. . As I left the other day!

But our room was a mess which increased my doubts as I was about to ask him ..when I heard the door shut! He approach me looking at me with some strange expression I couldn't identify!

He came near me too much near n...gave me a soundable kiss Grinning foolishly!

As I was about to talk he stopped me by kissing my lips this time. . There was no turning back after that!

I became Mrs.Geet Maan Singh Khurana in true sense that night!




To be continued. ...


Hay people!
With every thing out there's nothing much left in the story. .
So will b ending it in max two parts. .

That means part 20 will b the last!

N the very reason I started to write this one is back..
Hmm.. she once threatened me for not completing my story. .so I thought to give fast updates n finish it before she comes back!😉

Though I had so much in mind but its ok..u all wanted it this way😃

This will be my last note on this story!

Hopefully😆


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Posted: 11 years ago
Nw wts dis i cant understand geet's dad plz solve dis puzzle nd yup lovd d dum aloo part nw he hv becum cook 4 his son in law dats cool nd maan nd geet became maaneet wow dats great nd wt idea maan used 2 bring geet back waitng 4 nxt part
Edited by christipie - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: christipie

Nw wts dis i cant understand geet's dad plz solve dis puzzle nd yup lovd d dum aloo part nw he hv becum cook 4 his son in law dats cool nd maan nd geet became maaneet wow dats great nd wt idea maan used 2 bring geet back waitng 4 nxt part


Yaar it so simple. . More than anything he's a father. ..
N every father wants there daughter's happiness!

Be it my way I would have given out the truth slowly n it would have been easy for you to accept the fact but now. ..

N about maan's u will come to know in the next part!
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: caller123

Hey sporthy in a story you need to keep some hidden parts and you can't disclose everything in one update. In readers point of view it's necessary for them to ask about their doubts.Now don't get upset on those. Just carry on. I too waiting to read your story.. Sorry last week I didn't have time for me either so couldn't read your updates but I'm with you dear and I know all the readers are with you.


Now what will I do...
Update I've given. . Nothing can b done. ..
Just digest the fact like a bitter medicine!

I know everyone is with me but for a change I wanted to be with everyone. . C what happened!

I never thought of such a strange end u know kate!😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

good going maan...dekhte hai kaun kahan pauhunchte hai...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...


Glad u liked it!
Next part given. ..
Thank you for reading😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

nice

slowly things r coming out


No every thing came out!🤢
Thanks for liking!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks for reading! 😳

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