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Posted: 11 years ago

As it was weakend I thought it was perfect time to meet him... by now I knew he knows about us... but how much was the question!

As I entered the house one of the maids recognised me .. as I told her to inform sir about my arrival to meet him personally she rushed into the house. ..n came back after a while leading me to the study. .. n left!

It was a large room with Mr.Handa sitting casually on the his wooden chair reading something. .. his whole personality carried arrogance. . Sensing my presence he looked up from the book. . Walking towards the table he picked up a file. .

Maan isn't it. ..

Yes

So what brings you here. .

Your daughter! I guess. ...
(He narrowed his eyes on me then looked calm n composed)

Hmm.. must say u r quite intelligent! Ok then let's come straight to the point! I don't like you around my daughter. ..

Don't!

let me complete .. when elders speak it's not good habit to cut in between!

How would you know anyway u have been a orphan n a charity case from your childhood!

Look generally I don't even talk to low people like you but I c u have nicely lured my daughter taking advantage of her innocence!

So here I have proposal or a solution to the issue u created!

Take this file read it carefully. . I'll be back. . Then u can tell me ur decision. ..

He left leaving me with the file. . All the while I controlled my self not to snap back!

Opened the file only to get shock of my life!

It was MARRIAGE REGISTRATION PAPERS!

I carefully read the papers to find any hidden clause but they weren't any! By the time I finished reading it I saw him stand in front of me...with a evil glint in his eyes... Now I was getting scared of him. .

Easy money that's what you thought of my daughter right maan!

Ok now let's play ur way ..MARRY HER!

Now don't act shocked. . This is what u wanted right. .. so b it!

I couldn't understand the person in front of me. . What's running in his mind! Alli could think was Misthi! .. before I could think further he broke my thoughts. .

U have to convince her the marriage. . It would be kept under wraps..

Absolutely no one must have a little bit of clue of her being married. ..I will be there to sign in the witness cook up some story to convince her! N last but most importantly she will be staying here with me as Geet Handa even after marriage. .

This is the only chance I give you to prove your self worthy enough for my Daughter n This Huge Empire!

Now you may leave. ...

As I came out of the house I saw misthi sitting among few other girls all alone..That's the exact moment I took my decision!

I took by bike n moved out of the gate only to be stopped by the watchman. . To ask my name has he had to make some entry in his register. ..

By now I knew Misthi had noticed me on the gate... so I left without turning back!



DREAM-15



It's getting late wonder where maan is he didn't even call me once...Looking at the clock I thought to heat up the food again. .

As I entered the kitchen I heard the door open n maan walk in with a bright smile on his face. .

God he looked so worn out! Yet that smile something was amiss he suddenly hugged me from back...I could clearly feel the difference in his hold!

He was drunk!

Jaan what's wrong? Is everything alright??

Misthi. .. I don't want to let u down. ..I will not let u walk away from me...

Please don't leave me...

Saying so he passed out!

Next Day we planned a outing as it's been long. .dad was out of station so it was just two of us.. I purposely avoided talking about it as we wre out after such a long time ..

As we reached I saw we were in fields vast every ware with greenery ...cool breeze blowing though out the field. .as I started to run ... maan was behind me trying to catch me..
Shouting. .to asking me to stop n trying to reach me...

U don't have to run jaan ...to reach me all u have to do is trust ur self! I'll stand by u

I said with with pain in my voice vanishing into the field. .


Leaving him alone to reach me...





To be continued. ...





Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part so finaly mr.handa's true face came into light hope maaneet ill be together nd dont stress urself v can wait 4 d update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: christipie

Nice part so finaly mr.handa's true face came into light hope maaneet ill be together nd dont stress urself v can wait 4 d update 😊

Thanks for ur concern!😳
It's just that I wanted it to end as soon as possible!
So the quick updates. ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for liking!
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting...Geet's dad did not play the usual dialogue of "kitane paise chaihiye" but agreed for the marriage...some evil plan taking place in his mind.

the dream and the lines Geet said in the last were fabulous..does she feel he is not trusting himself enough to take the challenge thrown by her Dad.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

interesting...Geet's dad did not play the usual dialogue of "kitane paise chaihiye" but agreed for the marriage...some evil plan taking place in his mind.

the dream and the lines Geet said in the last were fabulous..does she feel he is not trusting himself enough to take the challenge thrown by her Dad.


Thanks for liking! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

nice

ye kaisa twist hai


Even though I have time to give the next part n clarify atleast a bit of ur doubts. ..
But I prefer u wait!😈

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Posted: 11 years ago


Part-16


Things were always simple for me...but now I don't even have a clue of what's going on... but one thing I was sure of was the girl beside be in the Red saree which I bought for her for the very first time. .giving me the scilent strength which was much needed for me at this moment. .. signing the register. ...

Now we r officially married!

As days passed my restlessness increased so did the distance between us... some thing was amiss which I was not able to pot my finger at...Geet,her dad, office every thing was same but there was certain fear which was creeping in my heart like warning me "This is just the beginning!"

One day as I was working in my cube I received a letter. .
Opening it I was surprised to find it from Misthi!

Jaan!

I know u like me address u that!
U must b wondering y this letter when I can talk to you directly right!

But u r wrong this time. ..Don't make faces n stop enquiring about me... I'm not at office. ..

The other day when you came up with the proposal I already knew about it as dad had a chat about it in the previous night itself. .I will not want to go into the details as I know u might have guessed what it was all about!

I'm leaving Maan!

It was only condition for which dad agreed to our marriage. .. n I knew ur decision when I saw u near the exit that day...

That's why I was avoiding u to atleast get used to stay away from u!

Maan I don't want to leave u alone. ..

U have to stay strong! It's u who will be my strength. ...

There are few documents in the cover read them carefully n sign them. ..

I will call u somewhere in middle of the night!

Please make sure you attend it!

Misthi


She left!
leaving this damn letter. .. What does she think of her self ! How can she take the decision alone...o God! why am I crying. ..

I somewhere felt I ve been through this feeling of her leaving me ... her words. . Kept ringing in my head...

I immediately left the office to home.. only to find it all tidy...

Making it impossible for me to even breath...

Misthi! Please don't do this to me please come back!

That when I noticed a small piece of cloth peeping out of my wardrobe. .
Opening it I surprised to find ladies clothing neatly stacked up ... with a note on the door

I'm part of your life now
So it's only fair if u have a part of me in ur lifestyle...😉

I was pleasantly surprised then I looked around house it looked more ours now!

With her novel half read on the side of bed..
Flower pots by the windows ..Plants by the doors...
Sitting with cushions. .. n the best part her pic on our bedroom. ...

I didn't know wether to laugh or cry ...she is such a sweetheart sometimes I really feel lucky to have her with me..

With all the jumping n roaming around I finally settled on the chair looking at the phone waiting for it to ring!

Every time the phone rang I thought it was her... it was only 7 in the evening!I don't know when I dosed off ...I woke up hearing the phone ring!

I didn't need her to speak to know it was her! She was crying on the other side...

Misthi! Is everything okay. .why r u crying?? Where r u now tell me I'll bring you home. ...

Please misthi! Atleast say something!

Jaan! I don't want to stay away from u. ..
(She managed to say n started to cry...After a while she composed her self.)

But I guess it is necessary! Did you sign those papers?

Yes!

You didn't read them right!

Maan! I want this to be the last time u sign anything without reading! Ok those papers were the Power of Attorney! From now on u will be handling all our business till I return back!

Dad won't be attending the office from now on ... take care of him ... he's got old we r his only family! Irrespective of his behaviour stand by his side...he is too proud to accept the fact but he needs us now. .. hope u understand!

Misthi what about me???.

Jaan I'm with you in every step n every decision u take...have faith...

I knew u haven't had anything since morning go I have made pizza 4 u... n I took my part

Misthi when will you be back???

Soon...

If u find it difficult to hold on to me at any point of time...try to move on maan!

Misthi!

This is the last call to u ... Don't know when I'll call you again. .as this is a pco no. N I ve got the next flight to catch. ..

Misthi please don't cut the call! I want to here u more please. ..

Take care JAAN!

With that she cut the call leaving all shattered!




To be continued. ...



Hi people!
From now on u will find dreams clash with the reality. ..
Wonder if anyone noticed it in the previous part!
It was geet's very first dream about maan!

N about the twist thing...
Every story has a tiny miny twist in it n this is mine!😉



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Posted: 11 years ago
nice bt sad update.
Why mishti leave maan n go?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat59

nice bt sad update.
Why mishti leave maan n go?

Thanks for reading!
As she said. . It was her dad's condition!😉

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