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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
ya geet's 4 or 5 was a bad dream that maan was attacked by some people which indicate this separetion
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

nice part

ya geet's 4 or 5 was a bad dream that maan was attacked by some people which indicate this separetion


Thanks for reading!
N about which dream
I will clarify in next part at the end!
Till then keep guessing!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sad part der r married bt still far away 4m each other plz bring dem together
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Posted: 11 years ago
Will update again. ..in an hour or so! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
whts going on...why geet left...dey got married too...too confusing...

nice update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Why did she leave..they could have tried to manofy her father...but still she is a caring daughter asking Maan to look after her dad...may be that way Mohinder will understand Maan better and realize what he has done...Nice update.

on a separate note - I read that you are updating from mobile...hope you are keeping backup of your work in word document or notepad.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part-18



There was a heavy down pour. .. with thunderstorms. . N lighting. .perfect situation to recall the flashback I thought sighing. ...Sitting by the window n watching the heavy rain...

It was raining heavily even that day as I started to recall the discussion between me n dad!

Come geet take a seat!
(Dad gustured be towards the empty chair opposite him!)

Daughters grow up very fast don't they!

Geet I know what's running between u n that Maan!

Before u start defined him let me complete. .. what do u think u can hide ur visits to his house or him carrying u to hospital!

For God sake u r not some random girl. . U r Geet Handa! Whom everybody wants to know ... What she wears, eats, where she goes n whom she meets... he completed narrowing his eyes on me!

I knew I was wrong I couldn't meet his eyes. ..

Only I know how I managed the media. .did u even think what you've gotten your self into!

How did you even think you'll fit into his lifestyle. ...ok let me frame it other way...how do you think he will fit into your lifestyle???

Dad... he's a good person at heart. .a self made man... I confessed with tear filled eyes. . Looking at him...

Ok... agreed he is good n all won't he be hurt when people taunt him for grabbing a big fish.. taking easy way to enjoy riches! Or even worse using u to ...

Dad!

C u couldn't even hear it from me ... then how will u live with it! N ur Maan he has to bare it every single day all his life!

U want me to forget him don't you.?

Yes it would be at least less hurting!

Dad u won't find any one who will stand by me more than him..u know that right!

Unfortunately yes!

So ...

So I have come up with a solution!

U will get married to him secretly n move out of the country leaving the business for him to handle!

Stand by him as his hidden strength. . Don't have any contact with him let him fall.. n rise on his own.. let him reach a position where no one will b able to talk to him looking into his eyes. ..

N last ..let him go if wants...

Dad! Why do you want us to get married when u want us to go on separate paths. .

Money Geet money!
U still have no idea about it's power. .
If it gets on to him ..then I don't want to think about the consequences. .. It will destroy the person he is n the one u admire so much...That's why I want atleast a thread joining you both..which at least u can cherish. ..

But I thought u don't like low people!

Yes I don't. . It's because of them I lost ur mother!

Dad! (A gasp escaped from my mouth it was the first time in my entire life I heard him speak about mom!)

She was robbed n killed by our very own servents! Though I punished them all but the trust I had on people was Lost!

I don't want you to go through it geet!

Please listen to your dad beta!

Dad!
I immediately rushed n hugged him tight

U never have to plead dad !Never ever!




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I broke away from my thoughts with the ringing phone. ..no prize for guessing it was dad!

Geet ur this maan is useless!
I heard him crib

Now what did he do?

U know he was supposed to attend a business party at the client's place n he denied saying he had a meeting with me!

Now u tell me who can lie on the face like him

When I asked him he very casually replied he wanted to have Dum aloo made by me so he denied the party invite!

Can u believe it! Useless he is... he can make so many contacts at such parties but no...

Dad are you by any chance annoyed as u have to cook for your son-in-law..

There nothing like that ok!

I think he's coming got to go.. or else he'll become CID!

Take care dad!

Sighing I continued my work. . Oh I didn't tell u right its my new hobby I started teaching kids paint n dance. ... One more thing which maan was not aware of. ...



To be continued. ...


Hay people!
Let me tell u all that I don't like you all!🤔
It's coz of ur growing confusion I had to write this part or say post it this early!

I wanted to move the story further. . But u all wanted the confusion to be cleared so here it is😔



Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Why did she leave..they could have tried to manofy her father...but still she is a caring daughter asking Maan to look after her dad...may be that way Mohinder will understand Maan better and realize what he has done...Nice update.

on a separate note - I read that you are updating from mobile...hope you are keeping backup of your work in word document or notepad.

Thanks for reading!
Nope I directly write it onthe forum n post..I have no backup why???
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Thanks for reading!
Nope I directly write it onthe forum n post..I have no backup why???


no, nothing that serious...it's just that it's your own work, you should have a copy with you...I saw one thread sometime back, where the author was not able to find her 2 year back thread..may be it got archived or something...so better to have backup.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest


no, nothing that serious...it's just that it's your own work, you should have a copy with you...I saw one thread sometime back, where the author was not able to find her 2 year back thread..may be it got archived or something...so better to have backup.

Ok will try n have one..
But Im too lazy to copy paste my own work u know!😆

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