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Posted: 11 years ago
Just read all the parts and its a very unique concept... Never have we seen Maan working under Geet, he always is an independent businessman. Never I imagined him to live a messy life... But loved this uniqueness. Nice concepts and lovely dreams...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyasi

Just read all the parts and its a very unique concept... Never have we seen Maan working under Geet, he always is an independent businessman. Never I imagined him to live a messy life... But loved this uniqueness. Nice concepts and lovely dreams...

Thanks for liking! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest


but fortunately it works for good...

Ya ya!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part-13

Suddenly I felt some waight on my shoulder!only to find her faint in my arms. ..somewhere deep down I knew that I was the reason of her condition! Getting down the car I carried her in to the house. ..

As few of the servents saw us entering the house with geet in my arms tgey immediately rushed towards us as got aware of the situation. . Guiding me towards her bed room. .

I gently placed her on the bed making sure not to hurt her!

As I was about to move I saw a faint smile on her lips n she slowly regaining conscious. .

As she adjusted to her surrounding blinking n then watching me stand there just by her side..

I quickly withdrew from her n started to leave. .when one of her maids explained me her condition. . All she did was weep or faint!

Maan!

Her voice god I've missed it so much!
Then I heard her most painful sob!

God I would do anything at this moment to make her smile..That's the exact moment I understood what importance her held in my life!

Tears streaming down her eyes. . With messed up hair..longing in her eyes it was like some horrible nightmare. ..

Am I not beautiful?

For a second I couldn't hear what she was saying!

I knew that! One day u would also leave me..( sob)c u r so good looking. . N look at me! I look ugly. . I knew it that's why even mom left me... n she bust into tears...

I immediately rushed to her talking in my embrace. .

Shhh.. just calm down. .. here drink some water. .

She had a sip looking at me with her big round tear filled eyes..

Who said ur not beautiful? ? I already told you u r, were, n will be the most beautiful girl for me. . Don't u believe me??

Then why didn't you hug me??

She asked with so much innocence. .is she the same geet handa from the office who manages such a huge empire! I couldn't help but smile at her. .I thought it was time to put my guards down. .

U are soo rich n all.. I thought I could never match ur status!

To which she gave me a cute glare.. n pushed me away. .

Go ..leave me I don't want to talk to u..she said pouting turning other side. .

Misthi!

That was it she was in my arms crying. .
Now it was getting too much

Stop it! Here I'm feeling guilty for your condition n u r increasing it..(I bit out a bit harshly)

Ok!God this girl I couldn't even get angry on her!

Hmm .. now u take rest I will leave as it's getting late..

Ummm...

Do you need anything!

U will talk to me right??

Hmm??

Now that everything is solved between us..

Yes misthi I'll definitely call u now take some rest!

I couldn'thelp but notice ..
She was truly a princess. .I thought looking around the room!



It was huge yet homely!
Just like my Misthi! I thought shaking my head. . While heading home. .giving a last glance at her ...




To be continued. ...


Hay people!
Hmm.. I c the only person missing is MR . Mohindar Handa!😉
If time permits will update again in the morning. ..


Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...why will Maan not agree when Geet is asking so cutely and innocently.
I am also missing Big B in action...Maan surely is going to lose his job first.
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice
maan is feeling guilty about her condition
he share his fear of difference in status of both
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part - 14


Days passed quickly. .I made sure to take care of her.. but the amount of work increased so did the pressure!
I didn't know y I was given such a huge project alone...

Today she returned to office. .I saw her enter all cheerful and healthy. . I couldn't manage time to go n talk to her..as I was little held up in work..

By evening I was called to her cabin..as I entered I noticed the frown on her face looking into some file. .as she looked up to me. ..she quickly masked her expressions. .

Mr. Khurana what is this.. It's such a huge project. . N such a silly mistakes are not expected from you!

U could have asked for a team to help u though it ... how on earth did even think about handling the whole thing alone... as an experienced person you should have known that such kind of projects are bound with huge amounts of money stake n good will...

By the end I could see tears clouding her eyes...

No wonder these mistakes .. it would have been so stressful!
(She whispered softly my b to herself)

I want you to look In to the file n make sure it is not repeated! Now u may leave...

As I stepped out of the cabin I wonder what she was talking about. ..I quickly rushed to my cube to check on the file only to b shocked it was not my work!
Something was amiss...

But first thing first. .Misthi!

I quickly took my cell n typed a message. .

Wow Misthi u look more beautiful when u r angry!

After some time ..

Loved ur pink dress today!


Can I have pizza for the night..

I was thinking of going on a long drive what do u think???

Open the door will u???

It was 8 in the night! By the time I reached home.. I knew it she would be hiding herself in my home... correction our home. ...I thought smiling. .

As I entered in I strangly found it empty. I thought to freshen up first n look for her..

As I stepped into the kitchen only to find the oven bell ring n she who was sleeping on the kitchen stool wakeup...

Oh u r back ... c I made pizza. . U sit I'll bring them. .she said avoiding any eye contact. .

Sighing I left taking a seat In the hall while she followed me with food. .

Misthi! Look at me ...c we work in the same office n u r my employer there. . There nothing wrong in u shouting at me... actually im proud of you c u didn't try to hide or cover things for me... I like it this way .. Please let us not bring our professional lives back home...it will get awkward. .

After a bit of silence. ..n her making faces. .n blessing me with some wonderful curses. ..

I'm hungry!

No u r not having it here...pick ur stuff it's getting late. . U better leave. ..

But pizza. ..

I'll pack some for u ok..

But if u need any thing else. ..

I'll manage misthi!

Jaan. ..

Nop.. not working. . Leave! I said sternly. .

She walked away pouting. . As I was about to close the door. .she came back running planted a quick peck on my cheek n rushed back gigling...

As I was alone I was thinking about the series of events happening in the past few days. .. missing client meetings. .sudden issues in raw materials. .. strikes in the sites. .n today the file. ...


I think it's time to meet you Mr . Handa!




To be continued. ...



Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

lovely update...why will Maan not agree when Geet is asking so cutely and innocently.

I am also missing Big B in action...Maan surely is going to lose his job first.


Thanks for liking! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

nice

maan is feeling guilty about her condition
he share his fear of difference in status of both

Thanks for reading aparna😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice parts maaneet r together nw nd i guess all wrong things happnd wit maan r done by geet's dad hope maaneetcill sort out dis issue waitng 4 nxt part update soon

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