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Posted: 11 years ago
Yaar not feeling like updating !
As u all know my stupid decisions. ..
So plz understand ...feeling low n hurt!. .
If I write something now that will definitely be" THE END"
so ...
May be tomorrow morning or in the middle of the night. .
I don't know when..
Will update hopefully!
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Posted: 11 years ago
why do you want to discontinue and end when the story has come out so well...plz do not do that.
you have written it wonderfully...it is an interesting and different concept and every update had been fascinating...And there is nothing to feel disappointed about it.


Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice story read it in one go ..
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART-12


After the dream of yesterday night there was certain doubt which started to eat me.. so I thought it's better to confirm it rather than think n spoil your day...

As I headed towards her cabin someone said she'd be in the conference room in meeting with the clients with each passing second my fear only increased. .. as I saw the clients leave I entered the room with my mobile. .

She was so much engrossed in her work that she dint even notice me entering ...

Itook out my cell n gave a ring ... but to my horror it was her n I saw her phone ring! As she took the call with that sweet smile on her face...I froze in my spot!

Only a painful cry escaped from my lips! GEET!

That's when she looked up to me..with so many expressions playing on her face..confsion,realisation, excitement to hurt!

I was too numb to react!so I silently left from there!


It's been more than 6 days. . She didn't even call me or atleast tried to explain her self! I know I was stupid to react such a way but u can't expect someone from her status n society. . In ur life!

Knowing her I know she was genuine n not playing with my feelings. . She is too innocent to even think of such things but will every thing be back to place!

I wanted to talk to her at least once as living with out her was no less than nightmare for me!

So I decided to end all misunderstanding n prepare for the out come!



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It's been 6 whole days I've talked to him.. n he got to know the truth. .. but he didn't even talked or questioned me about everything!

He said he would cage me in his arms n never let me go! But he didn't even turned back!

I knew it would happen but this fast!I didn't expect. .

Now even proved it to me by not even calling me.. I thought pouting!

Y god y did you do this can't u make me at least a bit BEAUTIFUL!

If only I was pretty he wouldn't have left me...

Sighing I tried to concentrate on my work as I was still feeling weak...

That's when I saw him entering my cabin looking as dashing as ever. ..

I tried to stand up but to my utter dismay every thing blanked out n I collapsed !




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Seeing her condition my heart wept! what's wrong with her???
What happened to her y is she looking soo weak!

Her face was pale with dark circles around her eyes. .. somethings terribly wrong with her.. as I saw her faint!

I immediately rushed towards her called her driver n took her towards the nearest hospital!

After checking doc prescribed some medicine. . N adviced her of complete bed rest!

As we were about to walk out I picked her up in my arms n walked out of the hospital!

I asked the driver to take take us home...
All the while I didn't bother looking at her!

I only held her securely from shoulder.. so that she doesn't fall. .

As we entered the gate I was amazed to see he beautiful building in front of me..It only added to my insecurities. ..






To be continued...



Hay people!
From now on the dreams will decrease. ..
As they r with each other it will b parts instead of dreams!


P s:about the previous note If I tell u the reason I will b showered with all the beautiful galies n long lectures so in order to save myself I won't be telling you the reason!😉
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice story
Loved it continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

why do you want to discontinue and end when the story has come out so well...plz do not do that.

you have written it wonderfully...it is an interesting and different concept and every update had been fascinating...And there is nothing to feel disappointed about it.



Wo something happened which I won't want to share..😃
Even if I do..
I know I would be blessed with some nice lecture😆

So...
Next part updated do check😎
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: achu66

Nice story read it in one go ..
Waiting for the next part

Thank U! 😊
N next part given!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

where r u

waiting dear

Sorry yaar!
Slept of with all stupid things running in my brain!🤢
Next given!

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_DD

Nice story

Loved it continue soon

Thank U😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for liking! 😳

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