Punarvivah ..Thread# 31..... Part-57/page-127..(New TH. link in index)

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When son's wife died the parents thought to remarry their son to someone as they could not see him spending his life alone at such a young age. But when their son died why didn't they think to remarry their daughter in law ?They accepted her as her daughter but didn't try to remarry their this daughter





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All outing updates are dedicated to Indu. She was asking me to give an outing sequence since long.. and I promised her to give it after the marriage of Maan and Geet..so here start the outing updates..❤️ .❤️

And sincere thanks to all my buddies who killed the last thread without any update..Love you girls for your hard work😆😆😆




Part -56

Handas were at KM within one hour after knowing about Geet. They were in Maaneet's room. Sudha and Gautam were looking worried but seeing her in a better condition took a sigh of relief.

They asked Maan about what happened and he explained everything to them.

They were talking and Maan's phone beeped .. He took the call It was from one of the client. He excused himself and went to the study as he had to discuss some important with him.

Ram asked handas to come down as he wanted geet to take rest but Geet cribbed -No papa I m getting bore here..I too want to go with you.

Ram-but geet you are not in condition to move.

Geet-But I want to go ..

Rahul-no problem Geet ..I will take you there

Geet-Sure? Giraaoge to nahin na

Rahul-How can I say that? It depends how much heavy you are...chalna hai to chalo..

Geet-Yes.. I will go

And Rahul picked her up.. But she came in a naughty mood as she was getting this precious opportunity to trouble Rahul. She giggled at her thought and she tickled him and Rahul was not ready for this and he was about to drop her but Geet was holding him tightly so she was safe. Rahul glared at her and said ..Geet behave ..

Ram who was moving ahead of them .turned and asked-Kya hua?

Geet-Kkkuchh nahin papa..

Rahul said in a stern voice-If you dare to do it again I will drop you here only..

Geet mouthed a sorry-I could not control..bachpan yaad aa gaya.

Rahul smiled to hear that. He brought her down and made her settled on the sofa in the hall

They all chatted there. Maan came there after his call ended and he saw Geet sitting with all in the living room. He got angry as he thought that she came down by herself.

Maan-Geettt ..how many times I told you to not move..Why don't you listen to me..

Geet-Maan I did not..

but Maan cut her- can't you rest for a while.. you need to give rest to your leg. Rahul tried to stop him but he ignored him. He sat near her and asked- If you move like this how will you recover? Has the pain increased in your ankle?

But Geet did not reply and she turned her face while pouting ..

Maan-Now what happened? Why are you making such faces? Speak something.

And all were smiling looking at both of them. Maan looked at Geet first and then he noticed all smiling on him.

Maan-what happened? Why you are smiling?

Ram-Maan.. you are not alone here who cares for your wife. We all care for her .Do you think we allowed her to walk?

Maan was confused-Then how she came here?

Rahul wisphered in Maan's ear -Maan.. you are not the one who love her we too love her. And said loudely to him- wo kya hai na aaj isko ride maine di hai...

And Maan was tongue tied after hearing it. He scolded her for no reason. He looked at Geet but she twisted her lips and turned her face to the other side.

Rahul-she used to ride on me in childhood but Geet one thing I must say..you are very heavy now..Ohh My back...aahh

Geet mouth was opened with shocked-Haww ..Rahul How can you say that..you are a bad brother..I hate you..

Maan was searching words to talk to Geet. He tried to talk to Geet but Geet completely ignored him.

Now elders ignored them as they knew that nothing serious was there and they came to the important topic of the date for the marriage

Gautam-Mr. Khurana ..the auspicious day for marriage is after diwaali ..so we have more than one month time ..Do you have any problem with that?

Ram-Absolutely not Gautam ji..

Rahul looked at Anie who was standing near him with a smile at her face and Rahul held her hand and pressed that and anie got scared at his this act and tried to free her hand but he did not leave her hand. Finally she stood there in that position without protesting as everyone could notice them doing that..

Gautam-I have one more thing to say. Mr. Khurana . every year we go to our village ..we have big land there which is needed to be looked after .so we go there to give the responsibility to someone there.. Last year people there asked us to bring Geet and yash and we had planned to go there after Geet's exams..but ...He sighed and again said..Now they want Maan and Geet to come as they all want to meet him. I was thinking about all of us to go there. You as well as Anie too can see where the roots of her would be family are.

Geet became happy hearing about that-Yess papa we all will go..

Ram-It's a nice idea Gautamji. I m free but ask your SIL ..if he has time to go there or not.

Maan-Papa I was just talking to one of the client. He lives in USA and starting the business in the india. He is unable to come here because of some personal problem. He wants to meet me and he is calling me at his place .and I have to go there for the meeting and the second thing... Geet is also not well so how can we go?

Gautam-Maan we will go after Geet is recovered .I think do teen din me wo theek ho jaayegi ..and we are not going to stay there for a long time. You can go meet your client after returning from there.

Maan wanted to say no but Geet was looking at him with hopeful eyes..He had already scolded her without any reason and he did not want to make her more angry. He thought that he could manage for three or four days ..so he said yes to go..and Geet became happy.

Geet-Really Maan ? We are going?

Maan nodded -Yes

Geet- Thank u so much Maan.

And maan smiled as Geet was happy again without any much effort

Ram-arrey gusaa khatam?

Geet-yes..and she giggled

After spending some time at KM, Handas left.

Ram asked Maan to stay at home as Geet could need him and he went to office.

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It was night again and Geet determined in her mind that she would sleep properly today..and she tried her best to sleep away from Maan so that she could not disturb him.She even tried to keep a pillow between them . Maan raised his eyebrow and she said-wo..wo It will help be to turn without hurting my leg. And Maan nodded. Both slept at their places..but once she slept she started to twist and turn in her bed. Maan was sleeping but felt something moving on the bed .he opened his eyes and saw Geet turning frequently in the bed. He thought that she was dreaming something bad so was doing that. He observed her for few minutes but she did not stop. He called her slowly-Geet,,,Geet

But she was in deep sleep. He wanted to make her calm and thinking about what he could do. He thought for some time and slowly took her in his arms to make her calm.. he patted her head smoothly and Geet put her hand around his waist and slept..Maan waited for few minutes. She had stopped moving and seeing her sleeping calmly, he too slept while taking her in his arms.

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Morning

Maan woke up and found Geet in the same position in which he made her sleep. She had stopped tossing in the bed after coming in his arms. He again wished her a silent good morning by kissing her and stayed in that position to cherish those memorable moments. Few minutes later Geet too woke up and Maan closed his eyes to see her reacting. Geet opened her eyes and found herself again on Maan.

OH no..Not again..was her reaction and she got up instantly and thought-Geet you again did that. Roz roz aise kaise chalega and now as I have promised Maan so can't go to sleep on the couch. Please God ...help me...today too he is sleeping but some day he will come to know about this habit. I m felling embarrassed to imagine that day. Geet prepare yourself for that dayand sighing deep she got up from the bed as her ankle was in a much better condition She could walk now ..

Geet entered in to the washroom slowly as she was still feeling pain bur was able to walk and Maan understood by whatever Geet complained to herself. He knew now that it was habit of Geet to roam in the bed .Last day he could not get anything but today he understood .He had a solution now as Geet slept peacefully after coming in his arms. He had found the method to make Geet sleep peacefully.

He waited for Geet to come out .She came and said-GM Geet.

Geet avoiding him-GM Maan..

Maan-Ankle kaisa hai ab?..He did not want to indicate anything about the morning

Geet-It's fine now I think It will be fine by tomorrow. Thank Maan everything you did for me..

Maan now asked her in very casual voice-Geet why are you thanking me ..You don't need that..achchha did you sleep well at night?

Geet was shocked to hear that. Did he know how she was sleeping but Maan pretended perfect for not showing that to her. She looked at him and statured-Y..Yes I slept well.

Man smiled in his mind and went in to the washroom.

After that night..

every night Maan took Geet in his arms after she slept to make her sleeping calmly. He too was feeling contended after having her near him and Geet too stopped chiding herself after waking in Maan's arms as she could not do anything about that. It was not possible for her to wakeup whole night to stay away from Maan. So she accepted that as she thought that Maan was ignorant about it. And she too took a little advantage of this situation.She now started to stay in his arms for few minute and look at his face. While doing that a smile adored her face.

But there was one confusion in her mind. It never happened when she was with Yash. She never woke up in Yash's arms. Yash always asked her in the morning to sleep properly as he had to made her sleep straight two or three times every night ..But Maan never complained her about that ..He never said a word to Geet..Poor Geet... least she knew that It was only Maan who did that all intentionally.

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Geet wanted to join the FH . Maan did not want her to go to FH in that condition but Geet knew that they were going out for few days so she had to instruct Pinky and Rohit about the orders which were to be delivered to the customers. So after lot of requests Maan let her go to the FH on the condition to not to stress herself. She promised him and went to the FH.

She had recovered in few days and today they were going to their village

Guatam had hired a luxurious bus to go there so that all could enjoy that journey .seating arrangement was not like usual buses.



It had seats side by side on the both sides of the bus and there was an empty space in the middle of the bus.


Their village was near Nanitaal. It was going to take several hrs to reach there. Maan attended some of his urgent meetings before leaving ..It was late afternoon when they left.

At start Geet and Anie, Maan and Rahul ,Gautam and Ram and Priya and sudha were sitting in the pair. Maan and Rahul were sitting in front of Geet and Anie

Geet was telling Anie about their village. Geet was telling her how she used to enjoy a lot there as she felt always good being there with the children of the village

Maan and Rahul were talking but were listening Geet's chattering too. Sudha had brought so many eatables with them. All were enjoying the journey..

Gautam asked Driver to stop the bus at some point where they could have their evening tea. He stopped at one dhaba and Gautam ordered tea for all. Chairs were arranged in the set of four around the tables so Ram, Gautam, Sudha and Priya settled at one table and youngsters were on the other... Maan sat with Geet and Rahul got the chance to sit with Anie... Anie was little bit scared as family was with them and she was not sure about Rahul's any action towards hersef . Rahul sat near her and took her hand under the table and looked at her smiling.. Anie knew that there was no use of protesting so she let him hold her hand and was looking at all too if they were seeing them or not.

Geet was so happy that she was not able to hide her excitement. She was telling Maan and Anie about how she and Rahul used to swim in the flowing stream and Rahul always used to lose to her.

Rahul-OHh come on Geet ..I always did that intentionally so that you did not feel bad.. warna to main hi jeet jaata.ladkiyaan ladkon ko swimming me nahin hara sakti..

Geet-Haaww jhooth bol rahe ho..Don't chalange me Rahul.. you know I always won ...Oh now I got it ..trying to impress Anie.. hai na..

Rahul took out their entangle hands out of the table all of a sudden-I don't need to impress her. She is already impressed . and he kissed her hand seeing their parents busy in their talks. Anie's color blew with that and she was so embarrassed as her brother was in front of her. She tried to free her hand but could not. Geet's mouth opened wide to see her brother flirting with her fianc openly..They were having some pakode with the tea. Maan tried to ignore them as they were engaged and had a right to spend some time together. He put a pakoda in his mouth without seeing it and it had so many pieces of green chilly that he started to cough ..His mouth was burning. Geet got worried seeing him coughing. She held him with his shoulder and patted his backwith another hand so that he could get relief. She gave him water to drink.M<aan drank that but it did not help him. All saw him coughing and came near them.

Ram -Maan are you ok..

Geet-I m sorry Maan..I was talking too much that you ate it without seeing it..I M really sorry..

Geet asked the dhaba man to bring some sugar and she made Maan to eat that..and after eating that sugar Maan felt relaxed and Geet took a sigh of relief. She again made him drink water. Maan was feeling fine after eating a lot of sugar.

They had finished the tea. Rahul paid the bill and they started again.

Maan was still feeling burning sensation in his stomach because of those chillies. Geet was now sitting with him. She was looking worried-Maan ..are you feeling ok or not..she asked if he needed some juice or something else .. but Maan said that he was fine and she did not need to worry.

Rahul was now sitting with anie and was In front of Maan and Geet. He noticed some changes In Geet.. Geet was looking worried for Maan and she was taking care of him well. Maan was in love with Geet so his care for Geet was not a surprise for him but Geet behavior was amusing him. After some time it was dinner time and they halted at some restaurant..

All had taken out their warm clothes to put as it was cold out side.Hill area had started. Maan was not feeling cold so he did not put on his jacket and was going out of the bus but Geet stopped him and handed over his jacket to him-Maan it's cold outside Don't go out without it..and he took that without protesting-Hmm ..while taking the jacket he held Geet's hand which was under the jacket..and Geet's heart again skipped a beat with his touch. Maan too looked at her and she lowered her eyes ..Nowadays She was trying very hard for not letting him see in her eyes as she was afraid of something to be fined in her eyes by him.

.Rahul was on the mission now to observe those two.

They all were sitting around a big table . when waiter came to take order..Geet strictly ordered him not to put chillies in the food..and asked to bring some extra chillies for who ever wanted to eat them.. Rahul was still observing Geet... All enjoyed the dinner as it was not spicy and was tasty.. This time Maan paid the bill.. all were moving ahead while Maan and Rahul were behind them.

Rahul walked too slow and maan too walked slow as he was walking with him.

Rahul-So Maan..How is life going on?

Maan-what do you mean?

Rahul- I mean with Geet.. You told her or not about your love for her?

Maan looked at him and shook his hand in no.

Rahul-WhyMaan? If you will not tell her how can she know that you love her.

Maan-Rahul..I still don't have that courage to tell her the truth..I don't want to lose her trust on me? I m happy the way we are.I don't need anything else from her. Pyar me bhi hum wahi karte hain na... we think for the other first before ourselves in love..we too are doing the same..so why I need to tell her..

Rahul-No Maan I don't agree with you. She needs to know it. Maan may be she too has started to feel about you.

Maan-I doubt it sometimes too but every time my hopes are turned down ..I want to see love in her eyes but find there only care for me..and Rahul... I don't have any problem with that..If she has started to feel something then I want her to feel it to that extant where she will be able to justify my love for her..I want her to understand the fact that love happens without thinking. It comes out from the heart not from the mind. Sahi galat soch kar pyar nahin hota...

Rahul-I understand Maan..but you were not wrong na..You loved her after Yash left..Yess ..if you had loved her before that then it was really wrong..Geet is a mature girl Maan . she will understand you.

Maan-Rahul actually Geet knows something about me and arpita which you don't know

Rahul=And what was that?

Maan-Geet knows that I did not love Arpita..Don't take me wrong Rahul. We were a couple who did not start to feel love. At least it's true from my side..This is right that we shared physical relations but I don't now why I never felt love for Arpita .May be we were taking a long time to feel that.But Arpita left before that. Now if I tell Geet about my love for her then she can connect this to herself..she can think that I ignored Arpita as I wanted her to behave like Geet..What if she hates me for that. I know I may be wrong in judging Geet..but I don't want to take risk.I don't want to lose Geet..

Rahul-Can I help you? I mean agar tum kaho to main bata doon Get ko?

Maan was scared-Nooo way Rahul..Please don't do this..I beg of you..

Ram called them to come in to the bus as it was very cold and they were getting late too..

Rahul knew that it was complicated matter after hearing whatever Maan said but he was not going to sit idle. He decided to think over it..They got in to the bus and the journey started again.

The journey was still long. It was night and all retired to take the sleep.Now Maan knew about the sleeping habits of Geet so he slept on the next seat of Geet so that he could see her at night . Weather was cold so she needed to be taken care as she had a habit to throw the covers with her legs.

Geet too got assured if Maan was feeling fine or not as he was not used to eat chillies.. Rahul shook his head seeing those two stupid persons who were in love but not trying to understand that..But he was determined now . Maan had again bound him but he had some other plans..

Precap.. as you all know..Trip continues


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Part-57

They reached the village in the wee hrs. It was very cold.. But for their surprise some villagers were present there to welcome them.

They were some senior people of the village including the sarpanch. Gautam was a very respectable personality as he had done a lot for the development of the village without any personal interest. He had helped the villagers to build a school there where all children of the village including girls studied. Modern systems of education were being used there.

Many young men of the village worked in Handa industries in Delhi and their families were doing well in the village...

All got down of the bus. Villagers welcome them. Geet and Rahul came forward to touch their feet and in return found many blessings.

Serpanch looking at Maan-handa sahib ye Geet ke pati hai na

Gautam-Haan sarpanch ji..ye Maan hai aur hum damaad ke saath saath bahu bhi le kar aaye hain..Ye Anvesha hai..Diwali ke baad rahul ki shadi hai is ke saath.Maan ki bahan hai ya aur ye dono hamaare samdhi hain..Ram ji aur Priya ji.. and village people met Ram and Priya with full respect.

Maan and Anie too took their blessings. Villagers have heard from Gautam about Khuranas . They knew that they were so rich but did not get a hint about that by their behavior..sarpanch asked the care taker to take the luggage in. They all came in and the tea was ready for them . They enjoyed the tea in that cold and felt relaxed. After having the tea Villagers left as it was early morning and asked all of them to take some rest.

Elders decided to take some rest while all youngsters decided to take a walk as the weather was so beautiful. First.. it was a hilly area and the second no sign of any pollution was there in the air.

They walked a little long .. Anie and Maan found the village quite beautiful...Rahuil and Geet showed them the building of school. It was quite big and looking like some modern schools as they had seen in Delhi.

They returned and all had their breakfast...

Now it was time to take care of for what they were there...Gautam had called the senior persons of the village to know the about the problems of the village...and for the issues related to their land

Women too came to meet Sudha and Priya and Obviously to meet Maan and Anie too as they were their SIL and would be DIL..

And for the surprise of Khuranas ..there was a group of children too who were there to meet Geet..As they knew that she was married now and with her Inlaws..So they were standing in a corner. They did not find her like she was before marriage ..they could see that there was standing a different Geet..least they knew about whatever happened with her in last one year

Geet saw them and came -Arrey tum log yahaan kyun khade ho? Geet di ko bhool gaye kya?And she spread her arms for them ..and kids became happy to see that gesture and fear disappeared from their hearts and they came near her,,she hugged them and said-Aao yahaan


and she took them to her inlaws. ...

She introduced her them to her inlaws and Khuranas were surprised to see that Geet knew the name of every child..Rahul went in and came back with a bag in his hand. He gave it to Geet and Geet opened it. There were chocolates in the bag. She gave a chocolate to one little girl..,she brought her hand to take that but Geet took it back-Not like this..you have to give me a kiss in return..and that girl smiled and nodded. Geet gave her the chocolate and she kissed on her cheek in return...

Geet-aur jis kisi ko bhi chocolate chahiye he will have to give me a puppy otherwise no chocolate..Theek hai ? and All kids repeated this act os kissing her on her cheeks..

Maan and Anie were watching this with amused expression but Rahul was smiling to see her sister as she loved kids and enjoyed their company..

Priya and Sudha were talking to the ladies and Gautam and Ram were busy were gents..Rahul..Anie and maan were watching Geet who was busy with the kids...Maan watched the kids kissing Geet and he did not know what happened to him.. The scene in front of him awakened the feel of little J -everyone can touch her, kiss her except me..and It's me only who should have this right only. She is mine first.. He moved ahead in a trance and spread his palm in front of her like some hypnotized person -She put a chocolate on his palm without seeing who was there as she was busy in taking another chocolate out of the bag and received a kiss on her cheek in return .

Geet-Thank U ..and looked at kid who kissed her and froze at her place. Geet felt her cheeks turning hot with the change of the color... she felt her blood rushing towards her ears..her senses stopped to work.she stood like a statue. She was staring him ..her eyes forgot to blink..She looked in to his eyes as he too was looking at her with deep eyes..

Anie's mouth opened to see the act of her brother..and Rahul ... he knew that Maan was now in trouble as he had to give an answer to Geet for this act..

Children giggled to see them and they laughed putting their palms on their mouth...their giggling brought both of them back from their dreamland..

Maan came back to his senses realizing what he had done ..Now he had to cover up his act before Geet..he started to think fast..

Geet-Maan ..aap..ye..

Maan had fined the answer for that very quickly- Wo Geet you asked them to get a kiss in return of that chocolate..otherwise you were not giving them chocolate and I wanted to take a chocolate ..and I could not wait long for that because chocolate were going to be finished..I thought that rule was the same for all so I did that ..I m sorry if you felt bad..and he returned the chocolate back to her..

Geet-No it's ok.. you can take it..

Maan-Thanks ...and without wasting time he turned from there, took a deep sigh for making himself safe from the questioning eyes of Geet ... He was feeling her gaze on his back. his eyes met with Rahul who was watching him with a smirk on his face and Maan smartly raised his eyebrow looking at him. For Anie ... she did not know about the personal life of her brother and his wife..She only helped them earlier as Rahul asked her to do that to make them comfortable with each other..as they were married in some awkward situations.

after the distribution of chocolates ,the children took Geet outside of the house.


Anie too was with them. They all sat on the stairs outside of the house .It was their routine whenever they were in village. They used to talk to Geet for hrs..they always told her about what happened in the village in last one year ..which family got a new member...Kids were talking nonstop and Geet were listening to them but her mind still was wondering in that kiss land..so she was sitting quietly there without talking to them.

A girl said to geet-Didi aap badal gaye ho..(You are changed)

Geet-wo kaise?

Girl 2-haan didi..jab aap pahle aati thi to bahut saari baaten karti thi..ab dekho hum baat kar rahe hain aur aap sirf hamaari baaten sun rahi hain(Yesdi..when you came here earlier you used to talk a lot..and now only we are talking you are only listening)

Geet-nahin aisa kuchh bhi nahin hai(No..nothing is like that)..I m the same Geet

A boy- If that so then let's go for the swimming...

Geet-n nn nahin swimming nahin

Boy2-see we told you that you are changed..and they sat there silent with a pouting and grumpy face..

Geet-aisa bilkul bhi nahin hai..dekho na saath me sab hain ..aise me swimming ke liye jana theek hoga kya..(No ..not like that,all are with me so it will not look good na to go for swimming)

Kids were looking disappointed ,,They already had made plans for swimming..but Geet was not supporting them..and then they saw Maan and Rahul there. A little girl was sitting with Geet. Maan took that girl in her lap and set near Geet.

Maan had heard their talks as he and Rahul were standing on the window , which opened outside of the house. Kids with Geet were sitting near that window so their talks were audible to Maan and Rahul. Both came out to be a part of that group. Rahul sat near Anie .

Maan- I think Geet does not know how to swim..and he looked at Geet with his corners of his eyes to see the reaction of Geet

Geet mouth opened as she knew that Maan was aware of her swimming.

Boy 1-nahin ..she knows..we all go to swim in the stream..and she had defeated rahul bhaiya so many times in the swimming competition.

Maan-Achchha ?? and he smirked to see Geet and said-your Rahul bhaiya was saying that he lost to your di intentionally. Am I right rahul ? and he winked at him. Rahul nodded in yes and Geet responded at this.

Geet-Maan..Rahul was lying..

Maan- How can I believe..

Another kid to Maan-Do you know swimming?

Maan-haan.we have a swimming pool in our house..

Kids laughed to hear that. Geet too smiled at this even . Rahul too smiled as he knew that Maan was being trapped in his own trap.

One kid- there is a difference between swimming in the pool and stream..In pool you have still water but stream is flowing..so it's tough to swim there and Geet di can defeat you in that.

Maan-I don'e believe this .. she can't defeat me.. I can bet.. .. (to Kids) araey she is scared ..I know her she will not accept it

This ignited the spark of original Geet in her- Maan you can't chalenge me. I can swim here far better than you can..

Maan-Then prove it..

Geet-think twice Maan before challenging me ..you know it very well that it's dangerous to challenge Geet.

Maan-It's not necessary that you always will win..

Geet-don't try to be the object of their fun Maan.They will laugh at you

Maan-For that you have to defeat me and for that you will have to go for the swimming

Kids were now excited..as they had seen Rahul losing to Geet so many times..Now they wanted to see Maan losing to her.all said-Yes didi accept it..and show him that you are a better swimmer than jijaji..

Rahul understood the intension of Maan. He knew that he wanted to bring that Geet back which had disappeared long time ago..and he knew it too that geet was the girl who loved to take challenges..and he was right..Geet accepted that challenge.

Kids became happy and they informed their elders who were there and talking with Handas and Khuranas...

Girls informed ladies that maan and Geet were going for a swimming competition and Sudh said-Geet .. leave these childish behavior..you are married now but priya stopped her - Sudha ji jane dijiyei n logon ko..Let them enjoy.. .. and sudha agreed as Geet's MIL gave her consent. Geet changed in to a top and 3/4 leggi..as she could not were the swimming costume..Anie was not interested in swimming as she never swam in natural water .. She was looking little uncomfortable Rahul today kept himself away from Maan and Geet as he wanted to leave them alone with each other .both were going with them to enjoy the competition.

They were coming out of the house where boys were waiting for them...they had already informed them about their plans.

As they came out of the house they heard the gents of the village..They were saying to the kids-Damad ji hi jeetenge..

Kids-why..Geet di is a very good swimmer. She had defeated Rahul bhaiya so many times

One man-Haan .. Rahul is her brother...lekin pati ke saamne patni jeetegi to pati ki kya izzat rah jaayegi.. sab hansenge un par ki pati kamzor hai patni se

Geet heard it and stopped.. she turned to say something but Ram said-arrey nahin ..ye sab purani baaten hain..aaj kal sab barabar hai..ladka ho ya ladki ..chhota bada kuchh nahin..

Geet smiled to hear it and she moved without saying anything to them.

All reached to the point

(I don't know anything about the swimming competition..I don't even know about any rule of swimming..all the competition part is only my imagination to create a suitable scene for the update)

It was a beautiful stream. Clean sparkling water was flowing there..Anie was little scared to see that. The water was flowing with much noise

There was place at a little height on the shore of the stream..It was made naturally with the cutting of the hill..it was used to take dive in to the stream

Rules were set. they had to swim four time along it's width. It was very long..so they had to swim along with the width of it and it was tough because while swim they had to fight with the flow of the stream..Maan stood on the edge of the stone from where they were going to jump..

Maan was in his trunk and his upper body was bare and he was looking hot.. geet looked at him and felt some butterflies in her stomach but she shrugged her feeling as swimming was in her mind. Maan gave Geet his hand to help her in coming up on the stone ..and Geet held it to come up. He unintentionally pulled her with little more force and Geet landed on his bare chest..and she kept her hand on his shoulder to balance herself. Geet blinked her eyes twice to absorb that feel of his body in her mind.. Maan was already trying to control himself since Geet started to sleep with him . and he had done masters in controlling being Geet around himself. He parted her away from him and made her stand properly muttering a sorry to her. She too controlled her body and stood with him to take the dive.

And kids counted -I.. 2..

Maan- All the best Geet..

Geet looked at him and said-Same to you..

Maan-Do you think you can win..what if you lose?..bachhon ke saamne kya izzat rah jaayegi tumhaari ? See .. How confident they are looking for you.

Geet smiled-Think about yourself Maan...what if you lose..you are here for the first time..so you should take care of your reputation.. main agar haar bhi gayi to kya farak padega?

Maan- First you have to defeat me..uske baad sochna ye baat..

Geet-Ok. Then... Wait and watch . Maan showed her his thumb. They were ready now

Kids counted three and Maan and geet jumped in to the stream and the competition began.. kids were shouting-Geet di..Geet di..

Anie was alone there who was shouting-Bhaiya..Bhaiya.. to support Maan.and Rahul pulled her towards himself with her waist and her voice stuck in her throat. Kids were looking in to the stream only as their pride was at stake. Anie looked at Rahul with some horror but he was looking in to the water.

Rahul-kya hua ? chup kyun ho gayi?..continue your cheering yup for your bro..

Anie -rahul you are taking the advantage of me now days..It's very dangerous being alone with you..

Rahul-then do the practice for it..you are going to live with me permanently after one and half month..aur main kya kya karunga tum soch bhi nahin sakti..

Anie's eyes widened at this..She got shied and said-Rahul leave me please ..

Rahul-achchha ..don't you like it?..He looked at her with her raised eye pulled her little more towards him.if you don't like it them you move away..I will not leave you and he looked at her with naughty eyes..Anie looked at him and with a smile, she stood unmoved in his arms.

Maan and Geet had covered one lap.both were side by side .second lap started and Geet and Maan were still at same speed.. third lap was going to be finished..they both touched the shore at the same time that meant .. they both were together till now. Fourth lap started and after few minutes Maan touched the shore after finishing the lap but Geet was not there.. Maan searched here and there and found Geet coming behind him..and Kids were like-Oh No.. all faces hung down seeing Geet losing. Geet finished the lap... maan looked at her but she did not look at him..Maan came out of the water and he again gave his hand to Geet to come out of water.

Kids came near them..

Geet looked at their hung faces and said-Sorry.. wo kya hai na..do saal ke baad swimming kin a yahaan to shayad main thak gayi and lost... but don't worry.. next time I will win..

Kids were upset and Rahul consoled them by saying-arrey muh kyun latka liya?Koi zaroori to nahin ki Virat Kohli har baar century hi banaaye..kabhi kabhi zero par bhi to out ho jata hai na..aur agar di nahin jiti to kya hua jiju jeet gaye .kya faralk padta hai..you can be happy for him na. He is here for the first time so you should congratulate him..go .. and kids understood that and congratulated him. Geet was smiling to see them congratulating him..

Precap-Rahul hits in Geet's mind and confused Geet asks Maan about Love😉


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Hello Friends
My son is leaving for the Hostel on this weekend
so I m quite busy these days in arranging the things for him ..and want to tell you all that this week I will not be able to give the update..
I will try to update after he leaves..
Hope you all will understand-Rashmi
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u updated ..good good ..
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😳 Thank you rashmi...for fulfilling my long long time wish...😆


Nice update...

So maan is j...Rahul ne Jo geet ko neeche laya...Bechare ka chance miss hogaya...😆


Arre Rahul maan se poochna tha ki Woh kaise uthaya hai geet ko...hum sab ko pata chal jata...😉



Sab outing ko jaa rahe hain...😛...geet ke Bachman mein...😃...geet aur maan mein competition honi chahiye...swimming ka...😆



Outing ke baad maan us jayegajayega...Kya hoga waha...



Thanks for the lovely update...waiting for more...😃




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