Maaneet Chithra Katha~8~(Pic 50&final note Pg 123) JUN 30 - Page 28

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😃 hello ji...🤗
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THANKS TO ALL



Todays BG song:Zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba

Film: Musafir




Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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42

UNVIELING OF HER TRUTH





Mean while in Handa house, not finding geet in house, all were worried more about their family reputation... Brij got the information that geet has gone to Amritsar and he went to bring her back...


Chanting the sacred name of "Vaaheguru", trying to regain as much strength as possible from the Almighty, Geet started her journey back to her house, knowing the path ahead wont be easy for her... She was aware that her decision to bring her child to this world wont be easily acceptable to her family... And she had the hardest task to do too... Disclosing the news of her pregnancy before the family... She felt a shiver even thinking about Daarjee and Brij...


Geet was forcefully brought back home by Brij... And the question session started... Geet admitted that she had gone to Amritsar to meet Dev...The name Dev, brought back the sinful memories... Daarjee was roaring that dev is now not a part of her life...But geet replied back that he is and he will be a part as now she is pregnant... "Main Dev ki bacche ki maa banne waali hoon" the words were ringing in the haveli shocking each and every person...


Daarjees thought went to his "anmol khaandaan ki izzat" ... Brij was like a wounded lion roaring around and looking for a chance to grab his prey... Taaiji seeing her sons anger, knowing how devious he can be at times, suggested abortion... All seemed to agree with her...Daarjee entrusted Brij to do all the needful and asked to call daima ... Shock would be an understatement , which all felt , when they heard geet announcing that she wont abort HER BABY...


It was like a clash of mamtha...Geets mom arguing to abort the baby, for geet... where as geet begging for the life of her baby... They knew that it was not geets fault, but it was their wrong choice that made them see all the worst...But knowing about Brij, they wanted to safeguard geet from him... Not knowing how to keep geet safe, Rano lied to daarjee that geet has agreed for abortion...


To be contd...






Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I remember this part of the show, I cried for her
such a painful part of the story

The BG song adds to the scene so much

Nice narration

you clearly brought out the difference in the Mamta of both Geet and her mother

Her mother and Geet both are out to protect their child

only one of them has the approval of society and the other is looked down upon though it was no fault of hers.

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Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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hey lakshmi.. great work asusual.. yr writing skills r geting betr n betr.. hope we wd have more of yr writtings..😉
evrything ws good.. good picture good description.. good choice of song.. perfact!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey LD!
The narration was good and all but the one that took the cake was the pic!
Not because of your good editing but due to your choice of the pic!
You chose the perfect expression on Geet's face. The pics you have chosen for this siggie is simply awesome! Especially the left one! My heart wrenches at that pic!
Good choice Di!👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
damn her family
first they thre her to the vultures
and now killing her baby
grrr they made me so mad they did
but you sure said it beautifully di
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poor soul suffering a lot ...

well written dear ..👍🏼

dear

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