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Posted: 11 years ago



Teaser



Mitu's loud wailingmade Dadi and meera to clutch their heads in worrisome. Maan is trying to make her calm but looks like princess is non nosense mod right which made Maan really helpless.

"Vicky !!! Just stop munching that junk.. and help me" Maan said in frustation to see vicky casually sitting on the couch and eating like an famished elephant.

"Didn't I say before too.. let me take her for an outing.. but when Baba Maan singh khurana listen to others" Vicky said nonchalantly ... Mitu throat chocked but she is sobbing loudly.

"Let Vicky ... take her out for some fresh air Maan.. now even too with him" Dadi said

"Hmmm.." Maan said unwillingly than immediately added ... " Dare you Vicky to show even slight carelessness".

"Yes vicky beta !!!! Take her out , only if you could responsibly or else just forget it" Dadi warned him.

"Don't worry yaar.. I am not a kid anymore.. just trust me and bhai it's not like you are not going to security run behind mewith double speed" vickd added mmischievously and gathered Mitu in his arms with her bag...


Mitu was so reluctant to got to him and leave Maan but at last Vicky has able to coaxing her to come to him with his funny daces.




Maybe I am lacking somewhere than tell me

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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting teaser
lol xx vicky mast bolta hai

dear you r not lacking in anything
bas joh apki writing ki respect krte hai unki respect kro
remaining go to hell
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice teaser
maan is tensed for mitu
haha vicky making fun of baba maan singh khurana
eagerly waiting for update
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Posted: 11 years ago
vicky is become bold in front of maan ... what made mitu cry and maan is tensed for her... where is geet dear... maan allowing his mitu with vicky... tempting teaser
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice teaser waiting for update
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice one
u handling story perfectly
without any doubt carry on
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting teaser mitu seems to be missing some one where is geet can't wait for the update .
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Posted: 11 years ago
kya hua baba maan singh is not giving Mitu to anyone
geet ne kuch aur kiya kya
jaldi jaldi sulah kara do

you are fabulous writer
why do you have doubts
nothing is lacking in you
keep on writing whenever you get time and nothing more
we love your ffs

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice teaser...waiting eagerly for the update...your writing is amazing and lacks nowhere...I love your ffs...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nteresting teaer is Mitu missing Geet who is asleep longer than her usual time

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