MG ff Uljhe Rishtey----kahanni ek unkhili kali ki part 16,17 on128,139 - Page 63

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahimaan





sorry huma
next part is IMP part of this story and i don't want update it in hurry so
please would be mama don't get angry


ok i m not angry and will wait till tommorow ok take care bye and i think its night time in india so take care gud night
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Posted: 11 years ago
Note

hi dear me and gunjar update welcome os for pooja welcome
just read that please , waiting for your comment

link


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/107980597


Mahi
second post on page one where maan ask pooja for dance that part written by me

and other is written by gunjar and she make fab job so
please read that and comment please
it give her courage to written more

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 12


Maan took geet to meera meera just admit geet , she scold maan for geet condition but when he say he don't have idea that she went to collage ...meera its ok maan but this is a alert called ha next time may be geet or baby l...but maan put hand on her mouth and nodded in no tear come in maan eyes

all night geet is unconscious just murmuring what is her fault what is her fault maan and meera feel so helpless , in night meera brought coffee for them and say maan what was you thinking

maan- just thinking about destiny game dear hear I am searching of my child who lost because of my so called wife mistake , agare maine ushe ghar se nahi nikala hota till now I kill that b**** meera , and dadi don't know about it I just saying that she is on shoot for 3 month , and she even don't giving number of that doc also what shall I do meera and other side look to her she just going with all this pain because of someone mistake yaar ...ok merra I want ask one thing is she have idea how she get in all this

meera nodded in yes ...she also searching for that doc yaar

just than they heard faint voice of geet ...they run to her bed there she open her eyes , maan saw so much pain in her eyes that just ...meera called softly how are geet now ,geet look to meera than maan , all flashback come in her mind and she get panic is baby ok she just caressed her tummy and ask meera with panic dr di wo to tikh hai na

meera get her worry and say softly don't panic geet baby is ok , than she look to maan and she get now maan also know about her for second worry come in her face if he misunderstand her or blame her like other and tear come to her eyes she give painful look to maan , maan get her mind and took her hand in his hand , both feel something odd but they ignore and maan say don't worry I will not judge you like other , just relax , but ya i want know each and everything last 2 month things each and every thing , if you comfortable and trust me , and you can say anytime , now tomorrow anytime geet

geet feel relax and say in low voice thanks sir , she just say no will say now it self I just want to share with you two , so i get some ans

meera di wo wo geet fumble with word

meera- are you comfortable

geet nodded in yes and say maan sir can you turn your face please

maan get her uneasiness and just nodded in yes and turn his back to them

geet took long breath

geet - wo di I have some problem with my monthly periods , her face turn red in shyness , she saying this all in front of male first time , now maan get her shyness he just control himself and listen carefully

I don't get regularly sometime it came after 2 month sometime after 3 month so our hostel dr. suggest me that hospital name and took appointment for me so at that day I went to that Dr. but I think nurse make some mistake because when i laying in bed one nurse come and she just tell me to spread , spread my legs

maan closed her eyes , he don't want make her further embarrassed , he say in low voice its ok geet don't say in detail , geet in mind just thank him and say than they just told me to go and come after 8 days and when I went after 8 days that nurse that doc went on leave , i get surprised and ignore , they tell me to come after come after when I get period , after one and half month when I don't get period , first time I don't feel pain in my abandonment when ever period come late it will hell for me its so painful di ... but I got other smitten like omitting want to eat bland that Italian food and all

i read this all in science so I get tense , but no body touch me like that way but as alone nobody is their to guide , I have to take decision for me so I just buy pregnancy test and got result positive , you know di I used 5 kit that day , a tear come from her eyes that day change my life than i met dadima and than you di , geet closed her eyes ...meera just took her palm in her hand and say softly , maan also turn to her

geet you want this a baby na

geet just nodded in yes like small child

meera- than you have to make yourself more strong geet as physically as mentality , every one should react in their way but you have to fight for you for this baby dear , what is happen in collage its wrong totally wrong but you have to make you strong like stone else this world cant you live peacefully dear , think about it baccha

after lesion word baccha geet make face and maan bite his cheek and give teasing smile to geet and say ha baccha you know na meaning of baccha

geet make angry face and say paata hai it means kid , she turn show her back to them and mummer mere ko baccha hone wala hai and they calling me kid I hate you babaji

meera and maan just burst in laughter and geet cried I hate you two also

precap

maan in collage principal cabin with geet and vikram

next update on next Friday enjoy

Edited by Mahimaan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update mahi...
thank god maan was on time...
meera and maan are hell worried for geet but now they both will be the support for her...
oh god the way geet reacted aftet gaining consious was heart wrenching...
she was very afraid for her baby...
just want to kill that vikram for this situation...
geet trusting maan was nice..
she was ready to tell to maan everything...
oh god her past was really hurtful..how can a docter be such careless...
hope maan soon join all dots and find truth...
oh gosh when meera called her baccha her reaction was so cute...
lovely again maan called her kid...arre maan babu kid kand bhool gayye kya???
lovely at last the diverted her mind and made her relaxed...
mahi app kyu itni dd ban rahi ho...app ko yeh suit nahi karthi...
aise intresting precaps derahi ho aur kehthe ho ki next update friday how we will wait yaar...
plzzz try to update soon...
Edited by gunjar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear
geet's conditional is too painful

mahi dear wat is it
next update on nxt friday?
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear...I loved the last part...Geet always get angry whenever she is called kid...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice but sad update
geet share her pain n past with maan n meera
meera ask geet to be strong for baby

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Posted: 11 years ago
so she gets irregular periods so she was referred to this hospital
but what a huge mistake they did
man did they not check if it was the right girl or not
seems not
what did they do
damn she is just a child could they not tell
i know she hates to be called that
but she is a child only
very sweet innocent child
but someone who is brave enough to fight this world for herself and her baby on her own
damn man so much she had to go through in such small age
well am glad she told them about it
this way they can find out who did this
so sam has been thrown out
well that makes sense
why we didnt see her in his house
thank god one headache outta the way for now
but yes geet will have to be strong
she is so cute when she heard meera call her bacha
not again man
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow great story please update soon
it's an amazing story to read and tell
thanks for sharing your story with us.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
geet tells everything thing to maan and meera!!!!!!

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