MG ff Uljhe Rishtey----kahanni ek unkhili kali ki part 16,17 on128,139 - Page 52

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 8
awesome...
hahaha that was funny...
Geet is such a kid...
but Maan and Daadima are here to take care of her...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update loved cute geet feel bad 4 her but maan & dadi will takecare loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice part
do continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Poor Geet, but she has wonderful people with her to support her !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

part 9

please look this video and imagin geet under table

i cant get pitcher so

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l6SDrIjPx4c

maan just point to her room , just than dadi phone start to ring she know geet don't drink milk so she say to maan to give her personally it need for her and baby

maan just took milk glass in her room

he called her but no response ,she is not looking in room he just turn to leave he heard mummer from under the table maan put glass on table and bend down



and get shock there she under table and mummer no babaji save me save me from that MILK it is so YUCK maan eyes winded in shock and next time burst in laugh she literally hide with fear of mile oh too much



geet drag glare to him like why you laughing on me

maan some how control his laugh and say come out choti chuyiya

geet just make o shape mouth , come out from table and say what you called me sir

maan - play with word umm come out


geet - after that

maan - wo wo bhul gaya , kuch bola tha kya main

geet - get irrited and say you called me choti chuhiya a choti RAT how dare are you you Dracula I am not small I have right

maan- vote I know it ...but what is this drakula , ek hi din main kitne naam dene wali ho muje


geet - you get what you deserved sir

maan ok ok small kid I get it

geet make face and say don't called me kid

maan kid nahi blou to kya bolu milk ke naam se asie bhaag gayi upper se table ke nichy chup gayi ho and saying don't called me kid , you are just kid ok


geet again point out her finger to him and say sir don't called me kid ok and I am not hiding because of milk wo to main ha exercised kar rahi thi


maan - under the table geet


geet wo wo geet ka style hai

maan -uhhh stop all this lie and accept that you just scared with milk ,agar kid nahi hoti to ye doodh ka glass ek hi time main pee jati , maan say with smirk now geet get fix and just look to milk she make such face ,maan just want to pull her cheek she looking so cute


geet just took that glass closed her nose with finger and just drunk in one gooo

maan just cant stop himself she have mark of milk on her lips he just pull her cheek and say so cute ...and went to sleep


geet get shock with maan touch and his word she mummer dd


just than maan say loudly Geet look your face in mirror , you are such KID and just run to his room


geet look to mirror mark of milk on lips she make face and say kid na ok you will see real kid on Kc tomorrow sir

and she get sleep

next morning she wake up early with sound of rain drop and just like small kid she just run to garden she just love rain , always ready to play in rain

geet just dancing in barish , she just love rain and she just forget
that she is Km she just running hear and there in garden like
free bird , without any pain , dard free from all tension

she start to play in rain just like small kid just running hear and their

maaan come to window to saw rain and look playing geet in rain in his dress ...she just fold her pant , her sleeves of shirt and playing in rain

she just caressing flower and try to hold butterfly

Dil hai chhota sa chhoti si aasha

Masti bhare man ki bholi si aasha

Chaand taaron ko chhoone ki aasha

Aasmaan mein udne ki aasha

Dil hai chhota sa chhoti si aasha

in this small heart there is a small wish

naughtiness full heart's innocent wish.

the wish which touches the moon & stars

the wish of flying in the sky

Mehak jaoon main aaj to aise

Phool bagiya mein mehke hain jaise

Badalon ki main odhoon chunariya

Jhoom jaoon main banke baavariya

Apni choti mein baabul ughaiya

as the flowers are fresh in the garden

i also want to be today so fresh.

i will pull the (chunari) of the clouds.

i will just dance by becoming crazy

i will tie the whole world in my pony



she herself looking like beautiful butterfly just beautiful she is kid just kid mummer maan who watching geet from his balcony



Dil hai chhota sa chhoti si aasha
Masti bhare man ki bholi si aasha

Swarg si dharti khil rahi jaise
Mera manna bhi to khil raha vaise
Koyal ki tarah gaane ka armaan
Bijli ki tarah machloon ye armaan
Jawaani hai laayi rangeen sapna




as the earth is blooming like the heaven
my heart is also blooming like that
i wish to sing like cocoo
i wish to (machal) like lightning
(javani- teenage or actually it is called as the age to love or marry)
javani has brought colorful thoughts.

but next second he just miss his heartbeat ,geet who just taking round and round went near swimming pool , maan just run to her self in second he reach to her side and just pull her to himself geet just come on his hug oh poor girl get scare with sudden pull ,maan one hand rest on her tummy like he looking the child is ok or not ohhh his breath stuck on his throat fro second

geet with so much scare look to maan , maan somehow control his anger and say geet careful pool main gir jati to than she notice pool oh she gasp loudly and put her hand on her tummy and mummer sorry , tear come in her eyes

maan get her mind and say to divert her mind to kid kab ready hoga KC jane ke liya ya first day per hi late geet

geet come to herself and say NO dd I will come on time and stop called me kid ok

maan just give teasing smile to her and start to walk than stop for second and called her again hey kid get ready fast

precap

geet ka kid kand in kc

maan talk with sasha and adi

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
aaj updates ki bahar aayi hai kya 😆
bt i cannot read...soo sad..
issse pehle mommy gussa ho..
i came to take bst wishes frm maaneet...😆
n m done studying...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mirror1521

aaj updates ki bahar aayi hai kya 😆
bt i cannot read...soo sad..
issse pehle mommy gussa ho..
i came to take bst wishes frm maaneet...😆
n m done studying...



mirror go away
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Posted: 11 years ago


thn hw will u c ur face 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mirror1521



thn hw will u c ur face 😆



face ki bacchi exam ka time ky hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
acchha baba ja rahi hu...
nobody loves me 😭
BYE...!
Edited by mirror1521 - 11 years ago

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