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Kkiran

@Kkiran

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#141

OMG THAT WAS JUST TOO FUNNY...poor chickens lol

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Bindu sharma

@-indu-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Nice update...

I am still laughing at the plight of maan ...😆

I am sure geet is in deep trouble now...😉

Hope he does not take the advantage of his effect and hurt her...

I really wanted this to be funny but bot emotional...rest is upto you...

Thanks for the update...

If u r sending pm's plz add me in the list...

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Anusha

@..AnushaGeet..

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: -indu-

Nice update...

I am still laughing at the plight of maan ...😆

I am sure geet is in deep trouble now...😉

Hope he does not take the advantage of his effect and hurt her...

I really wanted this to be funny but bot emotional...rest is upto you...

Thanks for the update...

If u r sending pm's plz add me in the list...

Hey dear...Thanks for the comment..and I am glad you liked it..
I wont reveal much..but dont worry..He wont do any such thing...

I only send the PM's on the weekends..but for the daily updates.. please follow the link which is given in the update..but PM's will be there on the weekend.. I will add you to the list anyway..😊

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Craziest_MG

@Craziest_MG

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#144

oh godd ...jaani dushman
Sooo after each others life
Maan ki achhii band bajaying ...hahaha

Bechara running after chickens ... Family laughing on him
Ab isse zada kya aur bura ho sakta hai

Oohhh ... Kuch toh hua hai ...lol

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achu66

@achu66

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Nice Update. Poor maan geet ne kya haal banadiya uska...Msk running after Chicken 😆 😆 😆

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

😆😆😆😆tooo good yaar..i was laughing while reading this till my eye got teary..maan chasing chicken😆😆😆..geet is real pranster..now dnt know what he going to do to her..i think seduce her😆😆..will be interesting..pls cont soon..

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

re your note.

I am not sure what to say. You are right that this happens to many writers. I have seen it.

I am not sure why some cannot write a little more. But it must be disheartening. And worse are the silent readers.

I may not always know what to write but I try!

Do I have any advice to fix this problem? Not a single one. Just know that you are doing a great job despite not receiving the appreciation you should!!!!

I do have one issue with some comments. Why do some ppl give a summary of the chapter? You wrote the chapter so why on earth does the reader give a summary??? I never understood that idea.

Edited by 4ever4love - 11 years ago

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

part 3
excellent...
OMG this is damn hilarious...
am so enjoying this...
Geet is too much...
her cribbing and her plans are so naughty...
and Maan is too much...
he actually fell for her lies and acts...
hahahaha...
the scene was fantastic...
she should have taken a video from her mobile...
and the others too laughed so much seeing Maan in that condition...
and now he has understood her prank and her reason too...
cont soon dear...