POLL CLOSED ON FALLING FOR YOU!!! MY DECISION ON PG 10!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Check Page 10

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"Is this really your idea of some sick joke?" I yelled at my parents, my father winced but my mother; she was still the same cold statue, expression and almost as if she was bored.

"Before fixing this marriage why didn't you ask me?" I raised my voice looking from my dad to my mother.

"What is the point in asking?" My mother huffed. "You were going to marry him one day whether you like it or not" she shrugged.

"I won't marry him" I snapped tightly narrowing my eyes at her.

"You are!" she stated firmly. "Whether you like it or not. You're marrying him, it's a promise we made to his late father and your dad and I intend to keep that promise"

"So get your precious daughter Selena married to him then" I snapped angrily.

"They want you as their daughter in law and plus your sister is only 18yrs old, you're 21 for God's sake" she sighed heavily.

"You know what? Stick this wedding where the sun don't shine" I stormed out the living room climbing the stairs, walking down the hallway I headed into my room, I slammed the door shut behind me, because it didn't seem loud enough so I pulled it open and slammed it again with a lot more force.

I was not marrying a stranger! Never ever!


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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
sorry i did a mistake in casting vote...i too want to read it...so continue please..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I really like prologue di I want to read this
Plz continue 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely I like the prologue 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is your story. it is upto you how you want to write it. i am liking it this way also and i will read it if you will rewrite it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey,
I casted a Yes for u to recommence the story, if u wish. Onlu because if u as a writer are not comfortable with what you will write then there is no point in continuing.. you will not be able to do justice to the story.

However, I have just commented on the already written version and had requested that the difference in this concept is the fragility you added in creating the concept... I just read the new prologue... I feel like you have lost that softness and added a blunt nudge in the main character of Geet...esp in whom the hesitancy u showed through her soft mumbled were much more realistic... I hope u don't mind my Frankness in expressing my thoughts... I just wrote with what I could understand... A first person narration can be much more easier to write, you are right... But there is an added advantage that its much more personal too.. it should be easier in mellow words to express the same as in third narration...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice prologue
do as you wish😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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no matter if u rewrite the story or u continue this one i ll read both of them 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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liked the prologue
do as you wish


but a question as you said you changed the story cant you just windup in 1 or 2 parts the ongoing story its a wonderful story ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
hi tanya
plz don't do this ..i enjoy reading falling for u a lot and i don't want it to rewritten ...
plz continue the old one ..
and this prologue ...u can form this as basis for ur another story ..
don't spoil the fun of falling for u ...i DON'T want it to berewritten ..
plz ..

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