THE LOCKET (22) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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bina_a

@bina_a

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Posted: 11 years ago

#901

hey Avi... I don't know why but I'm happy after reading this chapter. thumbs up girl :) there are lots of wow factors in it. i loveddd dev's song :) :) excellent job i can't pinpoint what i like!! i loved it completely. hey I'm glad you wrote about sujal-kashish :) :)

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maansi25

@maansi25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#902

Amalgamation of three stories

Beautiful

Darji and Geet talk Heat touching and full of sentiments

Messages 😉

Relishing bit by bit whatever is left

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Micky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#903

lovely update

marraige is a bond where girl has to leave parents and go in new family and it takes time to get along with the new relations but the parental relations are never broken till death

geet feeling alone in daarjis pov but she has every relation in one person i.e., daarji

and now Maan is with her also

now waiting for their marraige

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Pooja Verma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#904

beautiful part

daarji-geet's part was beautiful & emotional too.

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Anny90

@Anny90

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Posted: 11 years ago

#905

ohho..Every character of ur story has its own unique way to express the feelings and emotion...

for Thakur family the morning start with family hug..

sujal kashish part is nice ..now she is giving him a li'l bit of tough time..

darji guddi convo is too emotional...

end part was funny..the use of that song..😆

am definately gonna miss this all..

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ramarora

@ramarora

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Posted: 11 years ago

#906

liked sujal kashish part but missed out on maan geet
an emotional update
waiting to read more

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Desigirls12

@Desigirls12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#907

wow lovely emotional touchy update..te way chandan and poonam with they kids was lovely touching scenes..te way khaish and suraj ki scene was lovely.. oh god geet and darji ki emotional talk was lovely emotional touchy.. i feel sad for darji after geet left he will be alone, but i know my maan wont leave him alone..te way darji seeing his gudia last time was lovely emotional..naughty maan and teasing geet was lovely..i love te update

Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago