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Posted: 11 years ago

#891

Originally posted by: Susegad

Yes you are and so we love you.😳
Will edit on my thread too.
MIthey Mithey sapne aap ki shubah ratri mein Dq Ji.🤗

Thank u ..

u too

wrote the outline so that I don't lose the scene

sometimes the whole scene is on the tip of my fingers and then when I go to write it the next day I have forgotten it

Mera GN
past midnight now..

🤗

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mahishah

@mahishah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#892

Nice update waiting for their wedding

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#893

nice update
chandan and his family time just before tara getting married is so nice. finally he is having happy family
now coming to sujal when someone had bad relationship once then it is sooo hard to believe someone again and \
he is going through same but slowly slowly he is realizing. like the new avatar of kashish😆😆

love the conversation between geet and darji and how he explained what she is to him and how he made her understand about her duties after marriage

omg love the way maan texting her bb2b and her ans😆😆😆😆

ek baar to maan bechara 😆😆😆puzzle kar diya

poor manisha why she is like that😆

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 11 years ago

#894

part 98-1 - start lovely ...seeing happy thakur family and enjoying thier happy time ...
sujal to pura phas gaya...lagta hai pinky ne pure chennai express ko plan me shamil kar diya...now he wants to eat breakfast made by kashish..
what darji told to console geet was just beautiful...phir bhi myaka chhod ke jaana to dil tod hi deta hai...rula diya tumne..
again end was funny...geet making fun out of him...
who was that...manisha...poor soul...uska dil toot gaya..lol.

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Zeal-DD

@Zeal-DD

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#895

Loved it...

Poonam-Chandan-Tara-Megha together are adorable... I liked theirvhappy moments before tara's wedding

Geet-Darji scene emotional and touching... I literally cried while reading that part... I like Darji's advice to Geet...

Maan's text ❤️ jab Shadi ho jaye tab Khudi apne hatho se Pila dena Geet ko 😆

Manisha looking maan longingly Hahahaha and song Admi hon Admi se piyar karta hon 🤣 I loved all the songs opted to the situation but I just loved Manish's song the most 😃 GOD every one loves Maan.. Bechari Geet Kis Kis se bachaye gi Maan ko Girls se ya Boys se 😆

I'm sad that the story is ending but sad smily nahi banaya 😊

Thankyou for Update

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bbindu

@bbindu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#896

beautiful emotional update!

Chandan and Poonam enjoying family time with Tara and Megha. Sujal is finally trying to understand Kashish, hopefully things will work out soon. Daarji and Geet very emotional talk; it touched my heart and I had tears in my eyes as reading. Dev is doing bhangra, of course his wedding day. Eagerly waiting for the next part.

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srikrithi

@srikrithi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#897

Chap 96:

Sujal kashish track started! Wow!!

Geet gave dev & maan punishment!

Maan selection of poem was nice.

Chap 97:

Pinky ne to do insane Maar diye ek tere se.

Maan geet scene so romantic

Chap 98 part 1:

A final family time for takurs.

Kashish ke hat mein jaadu ki Chadian lag gai.

Bechara sujal.

Darji & geet scene was emotional.

Wedding day approached.. Yay!!!

Manish(a) so sad.

Continue soon.

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swatikgupta

@swatikgupta

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Posted: 11 years ago

#898

nice update...
geet and darji part was very emotional...
sujal and kashish part was good. finally he understand that she is different from his ex wife...
maaneet was as usual awesome...
dev and tara part was little but nice and thakurs family morning start was also nice...
waiting for next part...
little upset on ending of this ff...
continue soon...

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libros

@libros

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#899

Nice emotional update...
Thakur family moments were so sweet...while kasish n sujal scene was fun..hehehe
Daarji's thinking and emotions so beautifully portrayed...
Loved the update ...thanks for pm