THE LOCKET (22) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 21

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat

If I may say that as I read the update ...I was technically Dancing and going Gaga over this "Half buttons-undone-thudilicious- Hot-Desi-Maan" 😳 😆
Yeh kya haal kardiya Avi ne Mishti ka😆😆
And then when this hot Maan called his innocent Naraaz seductress : "Baby doll" I was in singing mode: baby doll main soney Di ...Yeh duniyaaa..duniya pittal Di...*Ehem clears throat ... Yeh that's what u made me into Avi Ji ... Singing and Dancing Maaneet Fantasy dreamer somehow pulling off reading the actual chapter doing these theatrics! Heheee😆😆😆 I had no idea of that video when I used to sing it😆 Phir gana bandh ho gaya..

*** But seriously Thud was that moment when this sweet simple Geet gave into the moment and happily danced in his embrace...and that pic to compliment the scene I imagined brought back thousands of amazing memories from the Geet FB-page where all I remember doing was analysing every nook and corner of the scene and gagaaing in the then Gurti/Maaneet moment *** haaayeee... Thank you for such a dreamy memory Ji It is still one of my favorite pics of them offscreen..❤️ it

I can't tell u how apt Palin was in giving u the title of writing Pass-com ! U
really have made your own genre and niche in this ffworld of GHSP... no where can anyone compete u with it ...Aap Toh ustaad Ho Ji !!
I am quoting one such brilliant pass-com moment from the ch: "... Not to be left out Adi danced on the side, not a button out of place" 👏 🤣 I read and re-read that line coz I could remember that very moment in the show too when I watched it then ... I don't think I laughed that much on our beloved Adi ever ! ** huh hahahuhaha huh -in Adi style** I laughed at that too. We share the same humor gene😆
... Aisa Drunk happy Devdas ko Ghar lejaane ka maukaa sabko miley !! Theeennn what followed after ..were those warm and cheek-reddening moments... I remember in one of your previous replies to someone's comment u wrote about how readers might be thinking the story is dragging and they are just waiting for the SR ! Well let me tell u i am no such reader ... Those hours and mins and secs that Maan counted ..I want them to go just as slow.. aakir sabr main hi Toh mazaa hai !! Don't think on those lines Ji ... I have loved these 95 chapters wholeheartedly and I know that as you may draw the curtains on its century I will probably think to myself : I wish there was more 👏 😳 It is kind of tough to draw the line myself. These characters have strayed into my dreams or wafted in and out as I work out. I feel like even though there was separation in the beginning, I made up for it enough later on. I am glad you think so Mishti. That makes it worth the while to have written it.

And to draw the line to my words .. I am waiting for the next and more 😛

* Off-topic note- wanted to say that I read your comments on Shika's web of love chapter ..And I was nodding my way through and feeling the same that u felt ...very well written appreciation note Ji...dont think of yourself as less of a commenter! When u really are not 😃 *

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

it was fun to read this update

god i love this so much

poor guys socha ladkiya jealous ho jaayengi but bechare khud ki bachelor party me shok sabha mana rhe the until geet decided to crash the party

& then came d best part, maan ka badshah ban jaana in his fake drunk state. that was damn fun

geet bechari ko pata bhi nhi chala

maan was craving for geet from so many days & finally got his time with her. their opening up all the gifts from bride shower. it was beautiful to see them together like this until bua start her jasoos giri again

Originally posted by: priya111111

oh god sab ladke ne milkar maan ki bebasi ko dekhkar usko poori tarah se phasane ki koshish kiya aur sab apne apne partners ke saath enjoy karne lage poor geet jealousy ke maare kitna tadap gayi aur maan uski jealousy ko dekhkar drama continue kiya finally apni misty ko manahi liya

dev aur maan ne kya drama kiya ki usko galthi se kisine pilaya aur boli geet ne usko sach maan kar maan ko apne saath lekar gaya aur maan khoob faida utaya par buddu geet ne tho last tak nahi samajh payii jab samajh gayi tho maan ne usko baat karne ka mauka hi nahi diya😆😆😆

haila sach mein besharam hogaya hai yeh ladka ab do din bhi dur rehna ka chances nahi dikh rahi hai itna speed hogaya hai 😆😆dekthe hai do din kaise beetega uska

Originally posted by: Zeal-DD

Omg total enjoyable uodate... Loved it

Bohat payar araha hai 😃 Acha payaar diya Annie ne Veerji ko 😆 besharam Maan (BM) wanted to make trailer once again... Hahhaha do din Mein puri picture bana sakta hai phr bhi itna sulk kar raha tha 😛

You are the only one who mentioned the trailer..😆 observant are you?😆

1st ever bachelor's party in which grooms were sulking and wanted to go back to their brides... Evil brains thought to make girls jealous 😛 Acha tareeqa tha

Both Khurana brothers Kitne chaloo cheez haan, BM acting and Geet Jhali fall into trap again 😛 Badshah-e-hindustan wanted a Kissy-wissy from Malika-e-Hindustan... I like that Nighties Part Besharmi at its peak 😆

I want to write more because I loved the update that much but I don't want to bore you ❤️ awesome part

Originally posted by: krsh07

Hi Dear, When you send us the link to Blog, I want link of India forum also, since I have to search this FF then comment. Hope you understand.

Originally posted by: maanland

sorry dear could not comment on the last part

It was so beautiful

geet singing for her maan and maan coming to her all lost in her

so dreamy😳😳

loved it so much

this bridal shower concept was new

but I liked it so much doing all the masti and having great time with your girlfriends

great idea😉

and this update

superrrb avi

loving their teasing , their roothna manana everything so much

oh dear how beautifully you write such parts

loving it so very much

maan and dev are really naughty

maan's drunk act and his dialogues were too good

their moment of togetherness and his eagerness his not breaking up his promise no matter what

loved everything so much

bua angrezo ke zamane ki jailer

😆😆😆

thank you thank you thank you so much dear avi for such lovely parts

🤗

so u set ankur for sasha

no one should be alone in this wonderful loveful story

Originally posted by: Desigirls12

wow lovely cute naughty update..te way all boys want they girls to cum to party so making them to get jealous was lovely cute.. maan ur geet wont get jealous who said she will burn u and te girl who touch u, she is ur sherni.. te way geet ki angry seeing and dancing with him was lovely cute.. but wen she know came to know tat my maan was drunken, naughty khurana brothers made geet fool was lovely cute.. te way te taking my maan to home and my maan want to spend time with his geet was lovely cute..wen geet know tat my maan is acting and her gussa but my maan know how to cool her was lovely cute.. te way my maaneet ki night chupke chupke was lovely beautiful..i love te update so much..

Originally posted by: ashdd

great ,mindblowing all the tarreeph for u...

kya update hai...😊

geet jealous...😃

malika-e -hindustan, badshah-e -hindustan ka romance hume bahut pasnand aaya...😳

nayughty maan...

loved the update totally...😃

Originally posted by: sona-rai

hawww CHI CHI BABA JI itnaaa Besharam Maan ..
haeyyy AVIII
Sona Khush huiii :)
hehehehehehe
jhappiisss

Originally posted by: punam2712

CONGRATS FOR THE NEW THREAD

GEET CAN NEVER SAY NO TO MAAN FOR ANYTHING

HE KNOWS HOW TO MELT HER

AND HE KNEW HOW TO GET HER TO COME OVER

LOVELY ROMANTIC UPDATE

I LOVE THIS MAAN