THE LOCKET (22) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 20

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

very very beautiful parts !! enjoyed them fully !! first girls party ...with sasha daring geet and geet singing an english song for her maan...how maan came hypnotised...and poor boys were thrown out !! and then came maan's dancing drama and drunken drama and we got geet driving the bike with maan behind her...superb !! per yeh kya...again maan melted her...its unfair that he takes advantage of her innocence...now, really want geet to give him back...make him suffer a little atleast...as we don't want to anger the deewana maan too much...😉...!! waiting...

sorry for late comments...!! things are really hectic now a days...!! do pm me pl...love the story !! will reply when ever possible...

Originally posted by: annbell

omg .. mindblowing update .. 😃 ..

i loved it through out .. bang on .. 👏 ..

no wonder maan is also not less .. .. i thought only dev n annie got this dramabazzi from daadi .. wat an acting .. n geet being innocent fell for it ..

every scene .. every dialogue .. excellent ..

Beautiful updates...Chap 94 and 95...Love...love..full of love in both the updates..Perhaps this is called love in the air..loved Giit's declaration of her feeling..a english song.Maan and his Besharam words and actions...Wr has the silent,behind the shadows Maan gone?Acting drunk to get few moments of love with his love...
Oh Avi,u make us fall in love with the concept of love through ur beautiful writting skills..Take a bow 👏 👏 👍🏼
Loved how u made sure each charcter in TL finds now...For even Shasha an Ankur is there.Pari and Tej?
Uff waiting eargerly for the marriage cermonies in Avi's style of just love love...

Originally posted by: muskanp

Oyen oyen
Lovey Dowey update
Marjavan iss sweety maan pe
Hain kitna nautanki kiya geet ke Saat

Oh baby she is so innocent
Oh 2 days bhari pad Gaya na 😆


Sherni geet was so much fun to watch

I loved how u showed every ones reaction wonderfully


Loved Arjun taking caring of his wifey just brilliant

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Maan n Dev ke Arjun jiju chalu hain... Maan too wants to see his Giit J... Moron.. N Dev N Maan dono milkar Giit ko ullu bana rahe the.. but bada maza aya bachelor party mein.. Poor Maan.. if dev wouldn't have saved him... his Giit would have make him to run behind her..😆 haww.. Giit's besharam maan planning everything ... 😉Awesome update.. loved it..❤️

Originally posted by: aditi_2010

Part 94

I loved every part of it.Sasha was someone who had earned my respect. In most FFs I have read Sasha had not only been negative but downright evil. But here was a Sasha strong, confident and modern woman who has a strong self dignity and self respect!!! Loved her and Dev's friendship!!! Bridal shower was fun and loved the song by Geet...and the way Maan came in front to appreciate and acknowledge her love

Part 95

Naughty!! That's the best way to explain this. loved how the guys planned and finally got the girls. Loved arjun, the perfect husband and a father to be. Jealous bambi was a treat but I loved how innocently she fell for Maan and Dev's trick. Maan's dialogues in his attempt to be drunkard had me laughing!!!

Most importantly it was the last part, the intense yet sweet moments that took away my heart!!! their yearning, longing and waiting for each other made it beautiful!!! Loved it totally di and I am sorry for being late!!

Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

he he he we got Shasha's love story also. 😃

Maan is such a draamebaaz. poor geet kaha phasi Dev or maan both are devils-in-team..😆

nice update avi.

Originally posted by: honeygrape

hayeee...why am i not getting bored of this maaneet romance...Aviii you are the bestest in writing romance mmy dear...lovlyyy part...couldnt read it before😕 too much busy with my thesis work n all...loved every bit of the update...you should never come out of your maneet world😃🤗

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

maaneet in ur words makes them more loveable... sachi😳

sms waala was so sweet... Pyaar aa raha hai tum pe 😳😳 chura liya meine😉Accha kiya😃 Can you imagine how hard it was to write the quiet Maan now? Avi itna bolti hai aur wo bilkul chup tha😆

dev maan is so so sweet... apni bachelors party main bhi they r missing their biwi 2bs😆 ... maan ke kithne nek vichaar hain sab ke baare mein... feminine gundis??😆😆😆

loved this jealous track... but i loved more when dev came up with the awesome idea and maan became aalampana😆

Ek chooma Baadshah-e-Hindustan ke liye".😆

sab ne sochke besharam gifts hi diye hain geet ko😆
Wo khud toh kuch nahi karti, isiliye Avi ko ungli tedhi karni padi..😆
story ke ending se pehle more pair .. sasha and ankur👏

eager to know what will be the wedding gift😳😳😳...

mere dev tara ko nazar andaaz kar diya is baar bhi😭
Dev wala part next for you and esp for you😃

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-