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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Aparna!

M guess karne wali thina!😔
Babaji iss me b competition!
N as always im late
Waiting for the next!



thank u dear

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u jasika
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part 6

Husband- excuse me aapne jo suit pasand kiya hai woh meri wife ko pasand aaya hai aur uska koi other peice nai hai toh kya aap muje woh suit de sakti hai. woh mujse naraz hai toh main unhe usse mila sakta hu.

Girl turn and both get shocked and said

Girl - AAP

Husband- TUM

Girl - maan sir aap yaha

Husband - pratibha tum?

Me - ji kuch shoping ke liye aayi thi but aap?

Salesgirl - mam inn sir ki wife ko who suit pasand aaya tha toh bt who last piece that oh humne mana kar diya.

Me - it ok aap who suit inke liye pack karwa dijeye

Salesgirl - ok as u wish. And salesgirl went to pack the suit for maan.

Maan - iski koi jarurat nai hai hum kabi aur le lege.

Me - no sir its not ok agar woh suit mam ko pasand aaya hait oh unhi k pass hona chahiye main kuch aur try kar lugi.ek sach kahu toh who dress mam par hi jyada aacha lagega.

Me - excuse me sir, muje kuch kaam yaad aa gaya main chalti hu. Hav a good day sir. Bye sir.

Tabi waha geet aa jati hai par abhi tak ussne muje nai dekha bcoz meri back unki taraf thi aur who maan ko kahti hai-

Geet - maan chaliye yaha se muje ghar jana hai.

Again salesgirl maan ke pas aati hai woh suit pack karke unne dene ke liye n said - sir, ye raha suit iski billing counter par hogi.

Geet - par ye suit toh kisi aur ne liya tha na?

Salesgirl - but sir ke kahne par unhe ye dress aapke liye pack karne ko kaha aur shayad woh inne janti hai.

Geet - ok thanku for ur services.

Geet - kyn thi maan who ladki hume use thanks bolna chahiye.

Maan - pratibha

Geet - pratibha aapki p.a.

Maan - ha wahi

Geet - toh ab kaha hai

Maan - tumare aane se kuch second phele hi gayi.

Geet - maan aap yahi rukomain dekhti hu kahi aas pass hogi

Maan - geet main bhi chalta hu. GEET! GEET!GEET

OUTSIDE THE STORE

Geet roming here there to find pratibha and she saw a slim figure talking on her mobile. Geet came near her and stood behind her and wait karne lagi uski baad katam hone ka. Geet ko uski baate sun gayi , who kah rahi thi(main yaha wahi conversation de rahi hu jo geet ne suna)

Me - ha main mall me hu.

Other side -XXX

Me - nai main akele hi aa gayi

Other side -XXX

Me - mera mann nai tha. Mummy plz baar baar ek hi sawal mat pucho jiska answer aapko pata hai

Other side - XXX

Me - nai kuch nai liya, pasand hi nai aaya waise bhi muje kaha shadi me jana hai jo nai dress lu.

Other side - XXX

Me - nai mera mann nai hai jane ka. Bye ghar aake baat karti hu.

Maine phn cut kiya toh geet ne mere shoulder par tap kiya aur muje bulaya

Geet - pratibha

Me - mam aap yaha

Geet - ha main maan ko who suit dekar tumne unne muje manane me madad ki hai aur tum hume thanks kahne ka mooka bhi nai diya.

Me- isme thanks ki koi baat nai hai mam. Aapko who suit pasand aaya that oh sir use apko dena chahate the maine toh unki madad ki bus.

Geet - acha tekh hai main who suit tab lugi jab main tume tumari choice ki dress nai dilate.

Me - nai mam, main aapse kaise kuch le sakti hu.

Geet - alle lo ! kyn nai le sakti ?

Me - mam plz, mera mann ye accept nai karega plz mam.

Geet - ok tekh hai par ek coffee toh hum sath pee hi sakte hai.

Me - ok tekh hai mam but sir

Geet - hey babaji! Maan toh uss store me mera wait kar rahe hoge aur mera phone bhi unni ke pas hai. Bhut peresan ho gaye hoge main itni deer tak nai pahuchi

Maan - ho rahe hoge nai ho raha hu

Geet - maan aap aa gaye hum toh aane hi wale the aapke pas. Koi nai aap aa gaye, chalo ab hume coffee pilao. Main toh isse kah rahi thi ki kuch aur dress pasand kar lete hai bt mana kar diya.

Me - mam plz aisa mat kahiye.

Geet - ok tekh hai, par coffee toh pini hogi.chale maan.

Maan - chalo

AT CAF COFFEE DAY

Geet - maan aap humare liye coffe liyo tab tak hum baate karte hai.

Me - mam, sir kyn layege main le aati hu.

Geet - nai ye tumare liye treat hai toh maan hi coffee layege

Maan coffee order dene ke liye jate hai aur geet mujse puchti hai

Geet - pratibha why r u upset?

Me - no mam, I am nt upset.

Geet - sorry bt maine tunari phn conversation sunli thi aur muje pata hai ki tum thodi upset ho.

Me - nai mam issi koi baat nai hai

Geet - its ok tum batana nai chahati toh koi prob nai hai

precap - we will read why geet was super angry on maan and maaneet moments

WILL PRATIBHA SHARE HER PROB WITH GEET OR NOT?


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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Yaar ye prathiba itni complicated q h!😕
Hope she opens up a bit!
Waiting for the next!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
awesome try to write longer updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
nice update
geet gauss right by hearing pratibha's talk
hope pratibha will share her problem with geet
😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update, thanks for writing longer update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 7

Geet - pratibha why r u upset?

Me - no mam, I am nt upset.

Geet - sorry bt maine tunari phn conversation sunli thi aur muje pata hai ki tum thodi upset ho.

Me - nai mam issi koi baat nai hai

Geet - its ok tum batana nai chahati toh koi prob nai hai

Me - nai mam plz aap bura mat maniye actually baat aisi hai meri ek cousin ki shadi hai aur mera mann nai hai jane ka and meri mom force kar rahi hai muje jane ke liye.

Geet - agar apki mother itna bol rahi hai toh unki baat maan lo unne acha laega.

Me - I knw but prob is dat I don't like to go in the parties.

Geet - well u should go to party and enjoy urself.

Me - thank u mam for ur suggestion but I m njoying my life with my work. I don't need party to njoy.

Geet - alle lo tum toh bilkul maan ki tarah baate kar rahi ho who bhi aisi hi baate karte hai.

Unki ye baat sunkar main thoda smile karne lagi aur tabhi maan sir coffees ke sath aa gaye aur puchne lage ki hum kya baate kar rahe hai

Geet - kuch nai bus kisi ke workaholic hone ki baat kar rahe the.

Maan - geet plz ab firse who baat mat suru karo

Geet - ha -ha main hi toh hu jo sab baate suru karti hu, aur aap toh bht bole hai.

Main unki meeti nok-jhok musurate hue sun rahi thi tabhi maan sir ne meri taraf dekha aur puchne lage

Maan - why are u smiling like this

My smile get faded and get feared and said - nothing sir and sorry sir. I think I'll take my leave.

Geet - no u r not going now plz stay some more times.

Me - nai mam muje kuch kaam yaad aa gaya hai muje jana hoga n thanks for coffee.

Geet - thanks ki koi baat nai hai dear. Its great time with u

Me - bye mam and hav a gud day sir

Maan - ya bye see u tomorrow

Geet - bye and take care.

After pratibha left from there geet to maan

Geet - she is vry sweet girl but I can see there is longing in her eyes.

Maan - ya I can see tha too she always stay aloof in office.

Geet - bus ho gayi aapki office ki baate suru, kal se phele hi main naraz hu apke iss office ki baato se

Maan - geet main kya kar sakta hu jab koi important call ho toh use attend karna pada.

Geet - maine kab mana kiya aapko phn lene se but 3 ghante tak who bhi dinner bech mein chodkar.

Flashback-

IN THE LAST EVENING

After returning from office maan is trying to pacify her but geet doesn't give any hint to get pacified.at last maan set on his knee and said to geet

Maan - geet plz itni kya narazgi office ka kaam tha uski presentation Monday ko hai toh karna aisa kahna pada.

Geet - acha tekh hai main kuch nai kahti aur apko maaf bhi kar deti hu.

Maan immediately takes geet lips in his for a soul searing kiss. Geet senses become numb for few seconds and after dat she also respond and when their breath become short they apart and geet said

Geet - maan chaliye dinner karte hai apne lunch bhi bhar kiya tha.

Maan - ok main fresh hokar aata hu.

Both are having there lunch suddenly maan phone start ringing and its overseas client so maan have to attend dere call in middle of dinner and it take 3 hours to short out dere queries and this made geet angry on maan again

FLASHBACK END

Geet - maan muje apki health ki parwah hai isliye aapko kahti hu lunch n dinner time par kiya karo par ussme bhi aap office work ko le aate hai

Maan - geet main aisa isliye karta hu kynki muje pata hai kit um hona mera khayal rakne ke liye

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ye maan ko na butter maarna ache se ata h😉
Kya line tha tum hona mera khyal rakhne k leye!
Waiting for the next!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so short but lovely update.. maan ka jadoo chal gyaa... hehe.. waiting for more..

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