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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome part
geet is soo nice
liked the way she handles maan
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 7


He walked in & sat with the Priya & Sam.
Priya kissed his head lovingly - tumhe khush dekar hum bhi bahut khush hain Maan
Maan smiled & hid his face in her embrace.

Priya reluctantly said - Maan humne aapka saaman neche rahkwa diya hain
Maan didn't want to hear wat was coming next.
Priya - they will be moving in ur room


seriously they gave his room to Dev & Nt. Maan bit his anger

Maan just faked a smile & pulled out of the hug - waisen bhi geet ko recess lightnings nahi pasand

Sam smiled weekly, only she could hear the breaking of his heart. She knew he was hurt & he was just putting a brave face for mom.
Sam - did u check on geet
she tried to divert him
Maan took the cue & went to the out house.

He just walked straight into her room. He stood rooted seeing her walk out in towel. She almost screamed but then went back in without creating a scene. She came out wearing a robe.. only to see him still standing there like a statue.
Geet - aisen khaden raho ge yah bologe bhi, wat made u walk into a girls room without knocking.
He snapped out.. & just went out .. yeh kya kar raha hain Maan. Wats wrong with u. oh my god.. she is so hot he mumbled & knocked the door.
She changed quickly into a beautiful salwar kameez for the evening & sat infront of the mirror to dry her hair. Maan didn't dare to look at her. He himself don't know wat blunder he might do. Then the whole room thing came back in his mind & he sat in the bed making a face.
Geet looked at him through the mirror - kya huwa she asked drying her hair
he just stuffed his head under the pillow & sulked - mujhe yanha aana hi nahi chaiya tha
this whole idea is so dam stupid.
Geet put her towel down & sat next to him - kya baat hain
Maan - I am done here
geet caressed his hair. He snapped irritated. He got & marched up & down. She waited patiently for him to open up.
Maan - Mom gave my room to them
how shameless can they get. Common don't they feel anything. Anything at all. Got dammit I had designed the whole dam room for her. The curtains, the wall hangings.. the paints.. the dam recess lights he groaned
geet yuck - recess lights. I hate them
Maan - u do
geet - oh it sucks..
Maan just sunk in the sofa. I don't think its good idea. Lets go back
geet - aisen nahi Maan
she tried to calm him
Maan - don't worry I will pay u the whole amt
geet came around & knelled down infront of him - Maan u don't want that room, do u?
I know it might hurt.
U have to any way let go, might as well do it in style

he nodded looking lost at her. The clear water droplets still dripped down the ends of her curls. It was too tempting to let go. His eyes followed the droplets while his fingers slowly pushed the curls. He leaned over losing his senses. Their breath mingled.
Her lips trembled. Her lips looked delicate .. he felt the urge feast into them.

both of them looked away when they heard Sam clear her throat

sam - & I thought u were upset abt the whole room thing.
Maan didn't know what he was abt to do before Sam came in. He felt is heart flutter a bit. An alien feel engulfed him. He caught one last glimpse at her as Sam dragged him to change.


She smiled at him sweetly but the flush around her cheek said something totally different & the lashes that hid those hazels. Oh man.. she is so beautiful he thought.
thanks a lot for the comments & likes
love
muskan
NEXT PART 8
Edited by muskanp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome updates !!
I'm so mesmerized by this story!!
Just too good!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb part
Does geet know about maan ...how she accepted to be with him
Eagerly waiting to see nt & dev's expressions when they meet geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow is she a real angel she didnot come for his money that is sure i hate his family how can they snatch that
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear
liked it
btw who is geet...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww poor maannn... He seem sooo innocent in this ff.
bechare ko kitnaa pain ho raha hoga I understand.
love the calm composed geet..
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 6 and 7
am loving this story
my goodness this geet is really super cool
and as i said ts her who will be handling maan now
dev n nt r hell bent on poking their nose into others lives
but am so in love with this geet and cutie maan
another updt before sleeping di...pleeejjj
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Posted: 11 years ago
Poor maan


I don't know what but I feel something is not right about geet.
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Posted: 11 years ago
this maan is soo cute
i m luving both

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