Re-posting MG OS - Saajhi - Completed

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Saajhi

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On this special day when GEET, MAANEET and GURTI came into our lives bonding us all together with the strength of their love and our love for them. Here is small contribution from my side A TRIBUTE to the ever so gorgeous couple MAANEET and the magical show GEET HUI SABSE PARAYI.

Keeping the essence of GEET as a backdrop and using some of the most precious and priceless scenes and dialogues which are deep inscribed in our hearts. I am weaving a small story to grace this event . Hope you all like it and support me.

PS: I have used some prominent and amazing scenes but have changed it a little according to the flow of this story But have used some awesome dialogues from GEET show.

Character Sketch:

Geet Handa- a 18-19yr old innocent girl next door who is a total movie-buff, unaware of harsh reality of life. She dreams of her hero to come and create their magical lovestory, just like the larger than life love stories shown onscreen.

Maan Singh Khurana - a guy in his twenties, very successful and has taken over the responsibility of Khurana Constructions at a very early age and has done wonders to its success. Every girls dream. But he hates girls who fall all over him for the Khurana name and fame. Finds ways to avoid meeting girls short listed by his Dadi and Mom for marriage. Waiting for that one girl who will fall in love with HIM, The Real Maan.

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PART 1

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[Geet's POV]




Panting I stood near a tree to take a breath, looking behind to the distance I had covered in few minutes. I shot a quick prayer to God, "Aaj toh baal baal bache Babaji!" I turned around reminding myself, "Jhalli peeche mat dekh ab tujhe aage hi badhna hein".



I looked around for some help and saw few lights illuminating at a distance probably a roadside stall I assumed. I slowly inched towards the stall carefully hiding myself from being recognized though I had covered a safe distance but still better be safe than sorry. Just as I was thinking over about how to go about, a conversation caught my attention.




"Paaji Amritsar jaane ka raasta yahi hain na?" I looked in the direction and saw a young man facing his back towards me was inquiring with the stall owner. Getting a affirmative answer and picking up some food articles he inched towards his jeep.Putting the packets in the jeep he again turned to pay some guy, I assume he was a mechanic.



This was my golden chance!!!






[Maan's POV]



Driving on towards Amritsar, I just couldn't believe Dadi could con me like this. She feigned being ill so I come here and she will force me to attend some stupid wedding. No... not the wedding but to look around for prospective brides for me and flaunt me around. I thank my stars and that soul who left the phone receiver unattended so I could hear my Dadi's master plan and was saved from further embarrassment.




I had just covered a considerable distance when saw many cars reversing and moving back. I stopped the car and inquired about the sudden chaos to a man standing nearby. He informed me that some major accident had occurred and all the roads were blocked ahead. It will take hours to clear the traffic. I asked him for any other way to go to Amritsar, only to be disappointed as the accident site was one of main junctions and all roads coincide there. I had to wait till morning. I too was very tired so asked him about some hotel nearby he told me about a small guest house on a outskirts of this village. Thanking him I reversed my jeep and taking the small bypass towards the guest house. When I was startled by a voice.




"Oh hello! mujhe kaha le jaa rahe ho tum?"



I instantly pulled the brakes and with the impact of sudden halt, a feathery weight being... slipped forward through the gap between the two seats. Pulling her up I tried to comprehend what on the earth was she doing in my jeep. Clad in a simple salwar-khameez, hair tied up in two braids and comfortably draped in a shawl, she seemed a young girl maybe in her late teens.


She was beautiful!


Poking of her finger on my shoulder broke my reverie.



"Aye Mr ... mujhe kaha le jaa rahe ho tum, mujhe Amritsar jaana hain abhi! ... Toh jeep ghumao aur mujhe drop kar do. Samjhe."




Did she just order me ... Maan Singh Khurana ... This girl had guts!




"Tumhare Papaji ne mujhe tumhare liye driver nahi rakha hua hain... ke tumhaare kehne se main apni jeep chalau ... Ek toh chori chupe zabardasti tum meri jeep mein aakar baith gayi ho aur mujhe hi tevar dikha rahi ho."




"Yeh kya baat hui ... aap bhi toh Amritsar jaa rahe the aur mujhe bhi waha jaana tha issliye main baith gayi." She justified her action so coolly as if it was not some big thing and upon that her hand caught my attention.




"Tumhe yeh kya koi Punjab Roadways ki bus lag rahi hein? ... Jahan mooh uthaye tum baith gayi aur upar se free ka khana bhi kha rahi ho ... Manners naam ki bhi koi cheez hoti hain, lekin tumhe toh nahi pata hoga... hain na? ... Kisi ki cheez lene se pehle permission lete hein". I said controlling myself.




"Yeh koi khana thodi na hain... yeh toh snacks hain... timepass ke liye... Aap ko bhi khana hain, yeh lijiye. Isme itna bura maan ne ki kya baat hain ...Ab chaliye mujhe Amritsar chod dijiye mujhe der ho rahi hein" She pouted.




Though angry but I couldn't deny she looked so cute! ... I felt like pulling her cheeks! But ... getting a grip over my wayward thoughts. I continued.



"Wah! mera khana mujhe hi offer kar rahi ho. Thank you so much ... Aur ab tum meri jeep se utro aur apna raasta naapo (leave) ... kyun ki yeh jeep wahi jaayegi jahan ke liye yeh chali hain samjhi tum ... Get out of my car". I shouted.


This girl was trying my patience!



[Geet's POV]



'Geet yeh toh bhadak gaya kuch alag try karna padega' I thought and started wailing loudly and my attempt succeeded.




"Dekhiye meri Dadi bahot bimaar hein issliye main Amritsar jaa rahi hoon unhe milne ... ab main akeli ladki itni raat ko kahan jaaungi iss jungle mein."


"Sorry main apki gaadi mein bina pooche baith gayi lekin mujhe aap sharif lage aur aap bhi Amritsar hi jaa rahe the issliye... Aur mujhe bahot bhukh lagi thi toh maine ek biscuit ka packet khol ke kha liya... Main aap ko iske paise bhi de doongi...Sacchi." I said in between my sobs. mentally patting myself.



'Wah Geet tu toh bahot acchi actress ban gayi hain!'




"Dekho pehle tum rona bandh karo ... its ok main tumhe Amritsar drop kar doonga lekin kal! ... Tumne suna hi hoga accident ki wajah se saare raaste bandh hain... Toh aaj raat ko hume iss guest house mein hi rehna hoga ... Okay". I nodded.


'Aye phasa!' I smirked.





[Maan's POV]



We entered our room. It was not safe to let this girl stay in a separate room. I assume she is too innocent and naive ... totally unaware about reality of life. She hadn't even noticed the lusting eyes over her at the guest house reception so I had signed as Mr & Mrs Khurana and opted for just one room.


But I guess it was one of my grave mistakes but too late to rectify!




Before I could look around the room properly she declared swallowing her yawn that she was too tired and wanted to sleep. Not waiting for my response she plonked herself in the middle on the double bed and covered herself with a blanket and slept ... eager to slip in her dream world!



But not so fast!... Where was I going sleep?


There wasn't even a sofa in this small room. I have had enough for the day first Dadima and now this girl was trying my patience. I just marched to the bed to wake her up, if the princess thought she can have her beauty sleep and I would watch her around she was sadly mistaken. Pulling her up I confronted her.




"Oh rani sahiba ... hum dono ko yeh ek kamra aur ek bed share karna hain ... share samajh mein aata hein? "


"Toh izzat se uss taraf tum aur iss taraf main sounga ... samjhi tum ... Agar tum soch rahi ho ke yeh bed par tum akeli so jaogi aur main chup chap dekhta rahunga toh bhool jao." I finished grabbing the blanket, it was a tiring day.


But my relief was short lived as after sometime I felt her pulling my blanket but I pulled it again. The push and pull continued for few minutes but finally with all the force I pulled the blanket and she along with the blanket landed on me.





Her petite body over me and her face in the crook of my neck... A current passed through me when she tried to lift herself of me ... her smooth cheek grazing my stubble and when my eyes met hers I felt like drowning in them!


This was the first time I saw her so closely her face mere inches away from mine.There was a distinct radiance in her, so pure just like a dew drop... so delicate just like a bud and so beautiful just like an angel.!



'Maan whats wrong with u' I chided myself.


Venting out all my emotional frustration on her I spoke.




"Mere saath sona chahti ho ... toh aao yahan meri godd mein so jao ... Kabse mera blanket kheech rahi ho".




"Dekhiye ... aap yeh mat sochna ke main aap se darr jaongi ... yeh bed jitna aap ka hein utna mera bhi hain."


"Toh meri marzi main jahan chahu so jau. Mera naam Geet hain ... Geet Handa... naam toh suna hi hoga! ... Toh mujhse panga mat lijiyega."


"Kaan khol ke suniye ... Hoshiarpur ki panjaban hoon main darne walon mein se nahi... iss bed par aur iss blanket par mera bhi haq hain ... samjhe aap." Did she just challenged me.


So her name is Geet ... Geet Handa but even I am Maan Singh Khurana!





"Accha ... toh main bhi Maan Singh Khurana hoon ...aur mujhe koi dhamki nahi deta! Samjhi... abhi dikhata hoon." saying I pulled the blanket and she too held it tight.


I just couldn't believe in the middle of the night here I am fighting for a blanket with this crazy girl!



This girl was making me do things I had never dreamt of!


I stopped realizing that earlier there were two blankets in the room then where was the other one? ... Looking around I saw madam had probably in her sleep kicked it down on the floor.



"Ek minute", I shouted gaining her attention who was still busy in her tug-of-war game.



"Ok time please", she replied.




'Oh my God!' she was seriously one of a kind.



"Tumhara dimaag toh kharab nahi ho gaya hain ... itni raat ko apni neend barbaad kar ke tumhe lag raha hein main tumhare saath koi game khel raha hoon!"


"Mera blanket chodo aur apna blanket ... jo tumne neeche zameen par giraya hain usse lekar so jao." I ordered her but her reaction just left me astounded I couldn't believe I am stuck up here with her.




She burst out laughing while I just kept staring at her like a fool trying to comprehend what on the earth did I say was so funny. Done with her laughing session she spoke.


"Toh yeh pehle batana chahiye tha...bekaar mein hum dono tug-of-war khel rahe the ... Aap bhi na bilkul meri tarah ho ... De taali." She lifted her hand for giving a high-five.







Snapping the last thread of my patience I spoke,"Chup ... ek dum chup! ... Apna blanket uthao aur chup chap so jao!"


"Aur ab agar tumne ...ek aur shabd bola ya mujhe disturb kiya toh main tumhe uss balcony mein bandh kar doonga ... Samjhi tum." I said with finality and she quietly did abide finally sensing the seriousness in my tone.



But there was more in-store for us when loud bangs on the door of our room broke our slumber.Getting scared of the loud noise she clinged to me, her droopy eyes fighting to remain open. I comforted her and walked towards the door only to find the guest house owner vacating the rooms.



I asked him the reason he appeared scared and disclosed to me that there were some riots in the village and a violent mob is on a loose. He urged me to leave at the earliest as its not safe here anymore. He had already pulled down the shutters of the guest house to avoid any damage to his property.




Having no other way out, we left the place. We got in the jeep drove on. She was unusually silent and I didn't ask her much as right now it was the best to move out from here quickly .


She was my responsibility and I need to safeguard her!




We had barely drove a little, when we saw a huge mob with lighted torches and swords stood blocking the road. We were trapped I reversed the car and drove it off the road taking the kuccha raasta (through the woods) but probably they had seen us and were following us. I had to act fast. Finding some dense bushes around I turned off the ignition and hid the jeep there.



We moved away from the jeep as we couldn't use it anymore. Luckily at a safe distance, amidst the bushes we found out a small cave like structure maybe an old temple and we took refuge there. The mob bypassed the place looking around frantically for us as the cave was successfully covered by the dense bushes.




Breathing a sigh of relief ! I looked at Geet who was still clinging to me, she was petrified with the sudden events.


"Tum theek ho?" I inquired to which she just hugged me tight and started crying.



"Mujhe ghar jaana hain", was the only thing she kept muttering non stop. I hugged her back trying to comfort her.But her next plea depicted how vulnerable and scared she was.




"Mujhe mere Maa-Papaji ke paas jaana hein."







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Part 2
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"Geet sab theek ho jaayega tum waise bhi kal apni Dadi ke ghar jaa rahi ho hai na main khud tumhe wahan chod doonga. Darro mat", I tried to assure her but she burst out crying more loudly. I placed my palm on her mouth though the mob was away but still any noise from our side could be dangerous.






"Sshhh" I warned her against making any noise.



She slowly confessed, "Amritsar mein meri koi Dadi nahi hain, main ghar se bhaag kar aayi hoon ... Main toh Mumbai jaa rahi hoon Shahrukh Khan se mil ne." I was shocked with her revelation.




"What!!! ... Tum paagal ho gayi ho kya? ... Kuch akal - wakal hain ya nahi tum mein? ... Tumhe zara bhi andaaza (idea) hain ke tumne kya kiya hain!"


"Tumhe kya lagta hain Shahrukh Khan tumhara Chatrapati Shivaji Terminus station par wait kar raha hoga!... Woh ek super star hain Geet ...yuhi nahi mil sakte usse!"


"Haqeeqat (reality) ko dekhne ki koshish karo Geet. Yeh koi film nahi hain! ... Yeh log jo talwar leke humaare peeche pade hain woh koi bhaade ke (hired) actors nahi hain ... jise ek filmy hero ki tarah main akela maar ke bhaga doonga! ... This is reality!!!!" I burst out on her.





"Agle pal hamaare saath kya hoga yeh koi nahi jaanta ... yeh log hume maar ke yahi dafna (bury) denge ... toh bhi kisi ko pata nahi chalega! ... Hamaare gharwale hume dhoodhte rahenge har jagah."


"Bacchi nahi ho tum Geet! ... Pata hain kitne haadse hote duniya bhar mein ... kabhi socha hain tumne? ... Tumhare jaisi kitni ladkiyaan films ke chakkar mein apni zindagi barbaad kar deti hain..."


"Ab tumhe apne parents ki yaad aa rahi hai... Ghar chodte waqt ek baar nahi socha tumne... kitne pareshan ho rahe honge woh aur tum yahan ... ." I lashed out in disappointment.


I just couldn't believe she had just left her house to meet an actor, not once thinking about consequences... And now we are stuck up here in all this mess. It couldn't get better than this I thought.



"SORRY!!" She apologized.





"Main toh sirf ek baar Shahrukh Khan se milkar wapas aanewali thi...Sacchi... Babaji ki kasam!" She sweared pinching her throat while I tried hard to keep my face stern seeing her childish antics.




"Main Papaji aur Veerji ko prove karna chahti thi ke ... agar unhone mujhe force kiya toh main sacchi mein ghar se bhaag bhi sakti hoon!"




"Kis liye force karenge?" I raised my brow now this was heading some other way, she continued slowly.




"Meri shaadi ke liye. Woh meri shaadi uss Bunty se karwana chahte hain ... Mujhe woh bilkul nahi pasand! ... Mujhe apni Babli kehta hain ... khotta, ullu, gadha, nalayak!"


"Woh hero thodi hain! ... woh toh comedian hain! ... Main usse shaadi kabhi nahi karungi issiliye main bhaag gayi!" She declared.




But I felt a strange pain in my heart. The very thought of her marriage to someone ... just shook up my whole being! I knew I was falling for her...She was different from all other girls I have met.


'Geet... My child woman!'




Her statement broke my thoughts. "Mujhe aisi shaadi nahi karni!"




"Toh kaisi shaadi karni hein tumhe?" I asked her. I was getting to know her now and I wanted to discover every facet of her. I could see a gleam in her eyes as she animatedly spoke.




"Mujhe arrangewali shaadi nahi karni ...lovewali shaadi karni hain! ... Jahan mera dream man ek hero ki tarah aaye aur mujhe ek white horse ya phir ek bahot badi expensive car mein bithake apni khoobsurat duniya mein le jaye! ... Mujhe flowers, gifts, cards, chocolates de aur romantic dates pe bhi le jaaye." She shared with me some of her fantasies for her life ahead leaving me astonished.


She was living in her own dreamworld which was largely influenced by movies. She was way too far from harsh facts of reality!





"Geet yeh saari baatein sirf filmon mein hoti hain ! ... Tumhe pata bhi hain Mumbai kitna bada shehar hain?... Pind ka chota gaon nahi hain jahan tum akele ghoom ke wapas aa jaogi!"


"Rahi baat pyaar ki toh ...Pyaar ho jaata hain aur jab pyaar hota hain toh yeh flowers, gifts, cards etc ...maayne nahi rakhte... feelings maayne rakhti hain!"


"Romantic dinners se zyaada ... saath baith kar ek chota biscuit ka packet share karna maayne rakhta hain... Apni khushi se zyaada apne pyaar ki hasi maayne rakhti hain!"




"Jiss din tum MAIN ke badle HUM ke maayne samajhogi ... uss din tumhe pyaar ho jaayega..." I declared.




I looked at her she was attentively listening to what I was telling her probably todays events had already given her a much needed reality check and now she did understand the seriousness of the situation we were trapped in. Not wanting to scare her further I spoke.




"Geet thodi der yahi ruk kar aaram kar lete hein ... subah hote hi main tumhe tumhare ghar le jaaunga." She nodded.



I looked around it was indeed a small temple of Devi Maa. A small diya was lit here which I felt strange as looking at ruins around I doubt anyone would visit this place often. But chose to ignore as I was too tired to ponder over these details right now. Geet went near the idol and I too accompanied her, praying for a while and then we both sat down near a pillar closing our eyes to rest a little.





After sometime some faint noise caught my attention I opened my eyes to see Geet was feeling cold I guess her shawl must have been lost somewhere in all this chaos. I removed my jacket and covered her she cuddled up in it seeking some warmth I smiled seeing her.


In just a matter of few hours so much happened, she just barged in my life and turned it around. In these few hours it seems we have lived an entire lifetime!


And now I know what I feel for her... is love! But she is totally unaware about these feelings. Whatever maybe the case I will always cherish this love even if it isn't reciprocated.



I LOVE HER AND THAT'S WHAT MATTERS!!!!



[Geet's POV]


Maan... yes he said his name is Maan Singh something. He told me to sleep for sometime but I couldn't sleep a wink, first the fear that those people will kill us and second I was feeling cold and hungry too. But I can't trouble him anymore, he has already helped me so much. I couldn't help thinking over...


'Maine unhe itna sataya ... phir bhi unhone ek baar mujhe akela nahi choda aur aaj mujhe ehsaas bhi dilaya ke maine ghar se bhaag kar kitna galat kiya! ... Agar main sach mein kahi phas jaati ya kho jaati toh? ... Main toh kabhi bhi ghar se bhi akele bahar nahi gayi! ... Thank you Mata Rani aap ne inhe mere liye bhej diya ... Yeh bahot acche hain'. I felt him stirring maybe my thoughts were too loud so I pretended to sleep but he realized that I was feeling cold so he covered me with his jacket.





I slowly opened my one eye and glanced at him, he had again closed his eyes and for the first time I looked at him carefully.


He was so handsome, not clean shaven but ... as Rajji says that now stubble look is very hawwtt! I was getting a different feeling seeing him.


'Jaise mere pet mein gudgudee ho rahi ho... par aisa pehle toh kabhi nahi hua?... Lekin Channi Di jab shaadi kar ke wapas kuch din maayke aayi thi toh unhone bhi toh yahi kaha tha ke ... jiju ko dekhke unke pet mein gudgudee hui thi ... Aur phir unki shaadi ho gayi! ... Toh kya meri bhi shaadi ..."


"Main bhi kya soch rahi hoon woh mujhse thodi na shaadi karenge... woh toh kisi wadde (big) shaher ke lagte hain! ... Aur ab toh meri reputation itni kharab ho gayi hain ke ... bilkul nahi karenge'. I smacked myself.


Was I actually thinking about marrying him ... what is wrong with me! He told me na that when I will fall in love I will think about HUM not only ME ... I guess I need to sleep.



[Maan's POV]


Suddenly there were some loud noises outside, those people must have come again finding us. I gestured Geet to keep quiet and not to panic. I tried to hear their conversation. They had got some shawl nearby I closed my eyes in regret!


It must be Geet's shawl!



I need to act fast and save her at any cost. I moved to look around with the faint light of my mobile and saw a small hollow in a dark corner ... it was a perfect place to hide Geet. Holding her arm and we quickly ran towards the place but in the dark Geet slipped and hurt herself. We didn't have much time so just lifted her up in my arms walking up to the place to hide her there and instructed her.







"Chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye... kuch bhi Geet... Tum yahan se bahar nahi aaogi! ... Agar main pakda bhi jau ... tab bhi nahi! ... Main jab tak na kahu tum bahar mat aana ... Samjhi tum." I could see tears and fear in her eyes not wanting to waste any more time I gathered some hay stakes around to cover the hollow.




She held my hand, "Maan". This was the first time she uttered my name, it suddenly sounded so good but right now I couldn't even wait to let that feeling sink in me!




"Mujhpe bharosa hai Geet?" I asked her.




"Khud se bhi zyaada..." she replied and I smiled assuring her and covered her again. I prayed to God to keep her safe even if something happens to me and she reaches her home safely.




I quickly moved away from the hollow as the mob broke in the temple there were around 10-15 men. One of them said I was not the man they were looking for, maybe I was the one helping them, so they caught me. I was too confused to react first but did give them a tough fight!


They were too many ... so they overpowered me and started beating me up ... So that I disclose the truth to them! I had no idea about whom they were talking but was satisfied that atleast ... My Geet was safe and they will never reach her I smiled at the thought of My Geet!


And that fueled their rage, they started hitting me all the more with their lathi's but a sudden scream stopped them.


"MAAN..."






I closed my eyes in defeat as I saw Geet emerging out from that dark corner.




"Please unhe mat maariye... please chod dijiye ... woh mere pati hai ... hum ne kisi ko nahi bhagaaya aur hum toh iss gaon ke bhi nahi hain ... bas yahan phas gaye hai." She pleaded to them but in vain.





"Lagta hai yeh sab mile hue hai. Iss ladki ko maaro phir sab bolega yeh ladka, " said one of the man. But taking advantage of the chaos I slipped out of their grip and hugged Geet they started hitting us both but I tried to take all the blows on me protecting her in my arms!





"Ruk jayiye, please bandh kariye yeh sab." We saw a couple who had been hiding behind Devi Maa's idol coming out. The mob was hunting for them probably and they had mistook us as this couple in the dark. Some more people entered the temple ... they were some influential people I guess. It seemed as some personal problem. The couple's confession confirmed my assumption.



"Bas kijiye, hamari wajah se inn dono ko kyun maar rahe ho aap log ... yeh toh yaha ke hai bhi nahi ... Aap log hume dhoondh rahe the na toh hum aap ke saamne hain ... Inn logon ko jaane dijiye ... Yeh toh bekaar mein hamari wajah se phas gaye." The man confessed.




"Yeh dono kaun hai aur inhe kyun maar rahe ho?" One of the middle aged man questioned the group I assume he was their head.




"Main batati hoon Papaji ... inhe laga ke yeh dono humse mile hue hai lekin yeh sach nahi hain ... Aap hume maar na chahte hai na ... waise bhi aap ne hi mujhe yah zindagi di hai!"


"Humne Devi Maa ko sakshi maan kar shaadi kar li hai! ... Ab agar hum mar bhi jaaye toh koi gham nahi ... Bas please inhe jaane dijiye." The girl urged.




"Yeh toh Maan Singh Khurana hain ... Savitri Deviji ka pota aur yeh ladki toh Brij Handa ki behen hain". One of guy recognized both of us.


"Arre nikkamo itne bade aadmi ko haath lagane se pehle socha toh hota." He blasted all the people.




"Bete hume maaf kar dijiye ... Aap log jaayiye yaha se ... yeh hamare gaon ka maamla hum suljha (solve) denge." The girls dad urged me. I was sure that they were gonna kill this couple in the name of family honor.


The old, regressive and sick mentality!




I had two ways either I move out of here safely thereby securing Geet and myself leaving them deal with their issues! ... Or the second one was to fight for this couple as they need my help but Geet...




Holding her hand I walked out of the temple. Geet was my responsibility and I had to keep her safe. The moment we walked out of the temple she just hugged me! She broke into sobs looking at my wounds and said.


"Kitna khoon beh raha hai ... hum yahi ruk jaate hai aur main aap ki chot pe patti baandh deti hoon."





"Nahi Geet hum yaha nahi ruk sakte ... yaha khatra hai! ... Main theek hoon tumhe meri fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi." I asserted sternly.




"Kitni aasaani se apne keh diya meri fikar mat karo1 ... Yeh sab meri hi wajah se hua hai... na main ghar se bhaag ke aap ki gaadi mein chupti aur na yeh sab hota! ... Aap ko kya pata mujhpe kya beet rahi thi jab woh log aap ko maar rahe the! ... Kya zaroorat thi aap ko wahan ruk ne ki?" She complained.




"Toh main kya karta tumhe akela chod ke bhaag jaata ... unn gundo ke haathon mein?"




"Kyun kar rahe hai yeh sab ...woh log kitne khatarnaak the! ... Agar aap ko kuch ho jaata toh? ... Kyun mere liye apni zindagi daav pe laga rahe hai ... lagti kya hoon main aap ki? She questioned me as tears glistening her eyes.


Hauling her close to me I declared to her.





"Meri zindagi tumhaare bina adhoori hai Geet! ... aadat pad gayi hai meri zindagi ko tumhaari Geet! ... Inn kuch ghanto mein aisa lag raha hai jaise hum ne saalon ka phaasla tey kar liya hai!"


"Aur jab tak main hoon ...kisi bhi musibat ka saaya tumhaare aas-paas bhi nahi aane doonga... Kisi bhi takleef ko tumse pehle mujhse ho kar guzarna hoga... Samjhi Geet." She just kept looking at me. Slowly tearing her dupatta she carefully tied it around my wound. Her eyes not once breaking the eye contact but we were running out of time.




"Geet ab meri baat dhyan se suno... yeh jagah highway se zyaada door nahi hain... subah hone ko hain ... Main tumhe highway tak drop kar deta hoon! ... Please meri baat maan lo aur kisi bhi public transport mein apne ghar chali jao ... Please Geet." I pleaded her but in vain.





"Nahi mein kahi nahi jaaungi! ... Main jaanti hoon aap mujhe yahan se bhej kar khud akele andar jaana chahte hain ... Lekin main aap ko yahan akela chod ke kahi nahi jaaungi... Samjhe aap!"


"Aap ko kuch ho gaya toh main kya karungi? ... Kahan jaaungi? ... Aap ko dard hota hai toh takleef mujhe hoti hain ... Pyaar jo karne lagi hoon main aap se ..."


"Main samajh gayi hoon ke mujhe apne aap se zyaada aap ki fikar hain... Main bhi aap ke saath andar jaaungi ... Jo bhi hoga uska hum milkar saamna karenge!" She had just confessed her love for me so easily while I was still trying to find ways to make her realize my feelings for her.




She was still unaware of the fact that unknowingly she had confessed her inner feelings. I knew wasting time to send her back was futile as my sherni would not budge from her decision once made. I could see it in her eyes.



She had accepted me whole heartedly and ... now there was no return!




These few hours had inscribed our love deep in our soul! ... We were on a threshhold of death and still both of us were worried for each others well being!







Making up my mind I spoke. "Ab iss pal ke baad hum jeeyenge ya marenge..."


She completed the remaining sentence."Saath saath." holding my hand firmly we headed back in the temple to save the lovers.



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Part 3
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Taking advantage of the crowd we slowly sneaked in and hid behind a pillar, we had to plan our move and wait for the right time. Their conversation caught our attention. Where the father of the girl was blaming her for bringing shame to their family by marrying an out caste guy. The girl reminded her father that he is the same guy whom all of you looked up upon, hailing from a poor family he struggled but studied hard, became a doctor and leaving back his bright future in the city he returned to serve his people in this village. He is the same man who saved your life and he is the same man who loves her for what she is not for their wealth. He respects him like his own father unlike those prospective grooms family who want girls families head lowered in front of them.




"Aap log hume maarna chahte hai na toh ruk kyun gaye aage badhiya aur maar dijiye hume ... Hum dono ek saath ji nahi sakte toh kya hua ... ek saath mar toh sakte hain." The girl finished.





There was silence in the temple for few seconds. I could see hesitation in her fathers eyes but still he ordered his men to kill both of them while he made his way out and was about to throw his sword but I caught hold of his sword and dragged him towards his daughter.





"Jaa kahan rahe hein aap ... apni beti ko sazaa nahi denge? ... Waise bhi kehte hain na bacche jab galti karte hai ... toh maa-baap hi unhe sazaa dete hain! "


"Phir aap ki beti ne toh gunaah kiya hain ... toh usse sazaa dene ka haq sirf aap ko hain! ... Chaliye talwar uthaye aur maar dijiye inhe." I spoke out. With the sword in my hand and their leader at my mercy, non could gather guts to attack me.





Looking towards a helpless father I added.


" Kyun? ... Nahi maar sakte na... kyun ki aap bhi yeh jaante hain aur maante bhi hain ke woh sahi hain! ... Aap ki nazare apni beti ke pyaar karne ki sharmindgi (ashamed) se nahi balke ... issliye jhook gayi hain kyun ke aap uske pyaar ki sacchai ka saamna nahi kar paa rahe hain." I stated.




"Tum wapas kyun aa gaye ... jao yahan se yeh hamare gaon ka mamla hain." The girls brother spoke seeing me.




"Yeh tumhare gaon ka nahi ... humaare desh ka maamla hain." I silenced him.



Suddenly some more people entered the temple. One middle aged man moved ahead asking the girls father reason behind this chaos here. Geet ran to that man hugging him, I assume he was Geet's father.


I was relieved now!




To finish up the task in front of me I grabbed the girls fathers hand piercing the tip of the sword made a cut in his hand and similarly made another cut in the groom's hand, taking both their blood on my palm I moved towards the crowd.




"Ab mujhe bataye ke inn dono ke khoon mein se inka khoon kaunsa hain aur iss ladke ka khoon kaunsa hain?"


" Nahi bata sakte na ... Kyun ki Bhagwaan ne bhi insaan - insaan mein koi farak nahi rakha hain! ... Farak toh hum logo ne banaye hain relegion, caste, creed and colour ke naam par!"


" ... Kal tak yeh yahan ka doctor tha toh sab uski izzat karte the aur ... aaj achaanak sab badal gaya... Kya yeh patients ki caste dekh ke unko treat karta tha? ... nahi na."




"Aaj yeh ladka apki beti ke liye marne ko taiyaar hain! ... Main aap ko challenge karta hoon aap apne caste mein se ek bhi aisa ladka dhoondh dijiye jo aapki beti ke liye apni jaan de de ... Nahi dhoondh paayenge kyun ke saccha pyaar milna itna asaan nahi hain!"


" Aapki beti ko mila hai ... Woh khush hai toh usse khush rehne dijiye ... kyun do masoom logo ki jaan lena chahte hein aap." I further proclaimed.




"Main Maan Singh Khurana inn dono ko yahan se lekar jaa raha hoon! ... Agar kisi mein himmat hain toh mujhe rok ke dikhaye." I announced grabbing the couples hands. Before we could move out the girls father with folded hands stood before us.




"Ruko bete aap sahi keh rahe ho! ... Main hi apne gusse aur jhoothi shaan ke nashe mein andha ho gaya tha ... Apni hi beti ki jaan lene chala tha lekin ...tumne meri aankhen khol di."



"Mujhe maaf kar do tum log ... Aaj main kitna bada paap karnewala tha... Lekin ab main vada karta hoon ke main khud inn dono ki shaadi dhoom dhaam se karunga." The girls father was repenting on his actions and I was happy all ended well.




"Tune bilkul sahi faisla kiya hai yaar mujhe khushi hai ke aaj tune badlaav ko apna liya hai." Geet's Papaji spoke greeting his friend.



The girls father hugged him saying, "Yeh sab tere damaad ki wajah se hua hain ... tune Geet ki shaadi Maan Singh Khurana se kar di aur hume bulaya bhi nahi." Now it was our turn to get shocked when Geet's Papaji looked from Geet to me and back towards his friend answering him.




"Yeh mera honewala damaad hain ... Shaadi abhi hui nahi honewali hai ... bahot jald!" He announced proudly.





Seated in the Handa Haveli, I narrated all the happenings about how I met Geet to the temple fiasco. Luckily Geet's family members had known about her whereabouts from her friend Rajji who knew about her plan and the guest house owner had also helped them by recognizing Geet. They had been looking for her and reached the temple in time seeing so much chaos there.



Destiny had played its part and here I was sitting in my future sasural where elders were fixing our 'rishta' . We had returned back to Handa Haveli only to find my family seated here, Geet was the girl Daadi had chosen for me and planned her falling ill act to fix our alliance and Geet wasn't going to marry any Bunty-Shunty etc. It was a prank that Handa's had played to irk her and it backfired badly.


But as they say 'all is well that ends well!'.




Our wedding was in two days due to some auspicious muhurat though Geet had beaming with happiness but still I wanted to meet her alone. Everything was happening at a lightening speed and I wanted to be sure that Geet was happy with the recent developments. Taking permission from Mr Handa, I escorted the excited Geet towards the car.




"Hum date pe jaa rahe hai?" She asked thrilled with the idea. I smiled at her excitement and drove on.




I wanted to sit in a peaceful place where we could talk freely and spend some quality time together without any disturbance so had planed a quiet dinner by a bonfire on a secluded camping site. But Geet's excitement for our first date had made me ... Maan Singh Khurana nervous!


What if she is expecting a romantic candle light dinner in some 7-star restaurant? ... What if I have disappointed her etc. Many thoughts running in my mind as I finally halt the car at the venue.







I escort her towards the Cane wood table and chairs by the bonfire making myself comfortable on a chair beside her I spoke.



"Woh Geet mujhe laga ke hum aisi jagah baithe jahan hum aaram se baat kar sake, issiliye maine..."







"Yeh toh bahut khoobsurat hain! ... Ek dum unique date hai hamaari! ...Filmon mein toh hamesha wohi same same formula hote hai ..." She pouted.


" Aur aap toh mere super hero ho ... meri zindagi mein ek dumdaar entry kar ke mujhe jeet liya! ... Kya attitude hai aap ka ... gussa toh ek dum angry young man ki tarah aur fighting toh kisi bhi hero ko peeche chod de aur aaj aap ne itni acchi romantic date plan ki ek dum out of the world! ... Aap toh mere superstar ho... Sabse best!!!" She exclaimed putting all my nervousness to rest.


She was totally unpredictable.A moment back she was beaming with happiness and now suddenly she looked at me nervously. Insecurity evident in her eyes.







"Papaji ne kaha aap India ke one of the most eligible bachelor ho ... country ke top businessmens mein aate hai aap! ... Ladkiyaan marti hai aap pe aur main toh ek chote shaher ki... aam si ladki hoon ... Mera aap ka kya mel?"


"Aap ko mujhse bhi acchi aur khoobsurat ladkiyaan mil jaayegi ...jo aap ke status ki ho ... shaher se ho ... bahot padhi likhi ho aur main..." She voiced her fears.




"Tumse behetar kaun ho sakta hai Geet! ...Tum woh ladki ho ... jisne mere baare mein jaan ne se pehle mujhe dil se apnaya ... Tum woh ho jo sirf Maan se pyaar karti hain!"


"Mere saath jude naam ... shohrat (fame)... daulat (wealth) se nahi! ..."


"Tum woh jisne apni maasoomiyat se pehli hi nazar mein mujhe apna deewana bana diya ... Par ek baat hai ... tum bahot uljhi hui ho Geet! ... Tumhe samajhna thoda mushkil hai." I asserted to which she cutely pouted and got up from her seat but I held her hand and added.







"Tumhaari yeh uljhane hi zindagi ko jeene layak banati hai Geet! ... Har pal badalti ho tum ... tumhara haste - haste rona toh kabhi rote - rote hasna ... kabhi shaant toh kabhi chanchal... agle pal tumhaari zindagi mein kya hone wala hai yeh koi nahi jaanta!"


"Aur yahi baat mujhe tumhaari acchi lagti hai Geet ... Kuch ho na ho par tumhaare saath zindagi badi dilchaps (interesting) hogi Geet." I concluded.




"Aap itne acche kyun hai? ... Aap ne mere liye itna kuch kiya ... mere liye apni jaan khatre mein daali ... Aaj main aap ko kuch dena chahti hoon!"


"Yeh taaviz Babaji ki maher hai hamaare rishte par ... jo hume zindagibhar ke liye jod dega." She said tying the taaviz on my neck.







I forwarded my hand asking her,"Zindagi bhar ke liye..."







She nodded placing her hand in mine as I promised, "Ab se zindagi ki har subah tumse shuru hogi aur har raat tumpe khatam."






"Zindagi ki har subah aap se shuru hogi aur har raat aap pe khatam." She repeated the words promising our togetherness forever...







I opened my arms for her and she readily hugged me and we stood there amidst the beauty of nature living OUR SPECIAL MOMENT TOGETHER...









Author's Note : This is my Tribute to that show Geet Hui Sabse Parayi which was, is and will always be closest to our hearts.

Hoping that very soon we will have this magical couple back together in a show and we all will see the Maaneet Magic again.

Thanks to all who helped and supported me for this OS and also for my FF Hamaari Prem Kahaani...

My friends who helped me with the pics. Thank you so much dearies!!!

I have used many pics here but somewhere I felt those moments without the pics would be incomplete.
I hope you all like it.

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Edited by heytal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi I think I may have read it! Bt thanks 4 da pm n fab emotional OS! beautifully written
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good to read it againg..
Loved it<3
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flat for sure after reading this haiyye
wow what a meeting they had
her running away to see some hero
and him running away from his bride to be
which turned out to be her
well kya baat hai
only they can have such meeting
wow man the way he saved her
the way he made that girl's father realise his fault
and how he confessed his love for her
not to forget her
wanting to being with him when he wanted to make things alright for the couple
hmmm well it all worked out for our maneet
and her hero is even better than reel life ones
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Beautiful os..read already many times but still feel like reading it again and again..thanks for this wonderful os
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Loved it a lot.
Starting from Geet innocence, their silly fight, explaining love, falling in love, trust, romantic date.
Apt pictures too.
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it's wonderful heytal. thanks for pm.

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