MG SS: SEDUCING MR.PERFECT - CHAPTER 3 PG 9 - UPDATED - 27-04-2014

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SEDUCING MR. PERFECT - IT ALL STARTED WITH A LIST

BY MS. HANDA


There is one Korean movie called Seducing Mr.Perfect. I had watched that movie numerous time yet I am still a sucker of this fantastic movie. The main lead in that movie, Oh! he's one perfect hunk. *Sigh* Again I borrowed the title from this movie, but my story concept is nothing to do with the original story of this movie. Enjoy the read and let me know what you think of my version of Seducing Mr. Perfect


PROLOGUE


"Mom..! Where are my socks?"A 8 years old Garv yelled from his room.

"Mom..! Where is my abacus kit?" again Garv asked his mom looking at his study table drawer.

When garv didn't get any response from his mom who was busy at making breakfast in kitchen, he yelled again with his high pitch voice. "Mommm!... Where the hell is my Ipod? "

Geet heard garv's yelling and cussing from kitchen "Garv! First of all, no more play station for yelling; second no pocket money for this week for cussing...!I warned you..Your bad "

Garv groaned and kicked on the wet towel on floor which was thrown by himself after taking bath; just like his Papa.


Geet guessed what he might be doing now; she knew her son inside out "Garv! I want that wet towel in laundry basket now..! And your abacus kit is in your papa's study; where you forgot on his table last night. Your socks are in the third cupboard, 2nd drawer"

Without another word Garv collected his abacus kit from his papa's study quickly, pulled up his socks. He was ready to go his school now.

But he had this feeling he forgot something; "Oh! Yeah..my specs"

"Mom..! where is specs? And and my ipod? "

To that geet replied while setting the table with breakfast.


"Garv..! This is too much "..geet sighed and replied again " your specs is over your head and I don't know where you have kept your Ipod"

Garv adjusted his square framed specs.

"Mommm! I want my ipod at any cost.." garv screamed from his room.

A bowl slipped from Geet's hand when she heard her son's thunderous scream.

To that geet complained to her babajee

Bahut hasi aarahi hain na aapko..! kya ek toofani kam thi is ghar jo aapne aur ek meri gale bandhliya.

"Bunny..have your breakfast first, I will search your ipod"

When Garv heard his mom's given nick; he lost it.

"Mommm don't call me that ever again"

"Because of you everyone at school makes fun of me, especially those stupid girls; they call me hunny-bunny"

Garv said while pulling out a chair at dining table.

"Hey! Stupid kisko bola...? " Geet asked her son pointing her index finger at him blowing her curls aside with air puff.

Garv knew his mom acts so funny and amateur at times.

"Easy mom..! I called my class girls stupid...not you!" Garv said while hugging her waist. Garv saw his mom wore jeans shorts and pink shirt today.

"Err mom what day is today? " garv said drinking carrot juice and making funny face - perfect, his mom's another experiment on him ..papa save me

Geet "Bunny...oh! sorry sorry.. emm Garv; what kind of question is that? Yesterday is Wednesday so today is Thursday. " geet told him while serving parate to his plate.

Garv made all kind of faces "mom! No parata's please...I want egg white sandwich"

Geet "Why? Whats wrong with parate..chup chaap khaalon..you can't leave this table unless you finish off your breakfast.."

Garv knew its no use of arguing with his mom on breakfast topic, she always wins even with papa.

Garv asked after couple of minutes "mom! when papa is coming back..? "casually.

To that geet asked raising her one eyebrow "Why? "

"Nothing" garv shrugged off this shoulders without looking at her..

"Actually you are wearing very short short today, you never wear them whenever papa stays at home..that's why" garv said while trying to control his laugh.

Geet held his ear "Badhmash ..meri majak udatha hain? ..kya thumare papa kam the jo meri maajaz uda uda key mujhe tang karthey hain ..abb tum uskey bte charge leraha hian.."

"Ahh! Mom ..leave my ear..dhukrahi hain.."

Geet "Chup chaap khaalo"

Geet to her babajee sunnliyan aapne? Hey kittna apne papa bannraha hian...aapko maine kaha tha na issko mere jaise banana ko? Aap bahut chaalak hogai ho...no more bajans for you.

"Mom..if you are finished talking with your babajee! Can i have my ipod? "

Geet nudged his head gently "Finish your breakfast first," looking at the wall clock "you are getting late.. I will drop you off to school today"

Geet walked to his room to get his ipod, which he might have left in his bed itself.

By then Garv had finished his breakfast and carrot juice - yuck. Geet returned with his ipod and a bunch of keys in her hand.

Geet asked garv, whether he finished his breakfast or not. To that he showed his empty glass nd plate.

Geet kissed his forehead "Challo..late horahi hain..." said taking his school bag and lunch box.

Geet opened door to leave at the same time someone at door "Honey...I am home"

He greeted with mischievous smile on his lips looking at the surprised-shocked geet.


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...To Be Continued...


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P.S: Well..! 😳I am not going to say anything🤓...Let me know whether you want this story as OS or SS. Don't forget to press like button and leave your precious comments.


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Rose

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INDEX

PROLOGUE (SCROLL UP)

CHAPTER 1

CHAPTER 2

CHAPTER 3


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CHARACTER SKETCH


Garv Singh Khurana: 8 years old, only son of Geet and Maan singh Khurana. He is a carbon copy of his papa.



Geet Singh Khurana: 32 years old, Archaeologist, Manager at Kohinoor Museum, Mumbai. It's been 8 years since Geet and Maan are happily married.


Maan Singh Khurana: 36 years old, Professional Photographer at National Geographical Channel. He loves Geet and his son Garv so much that he can't stay away from them for long. especially his honey bunch - Geet.


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Edited by GurtiWonderland - 11 years ago
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Nice prologue..waiting fo t chapters:-):-):-)
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Loved it a lot...
Felt like seeing K3G movie!!
Superb start!!
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wooowww...
awesum concept...
waiting for update egarly...
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Congrats for the new story
Very interesting one👍🏼
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Awesme prolog
waiting 4 update
erm..waiting 4 BCB too..
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Waiting 4 more continue soon plz
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I am on my way to home from office.😛 1 hour max hon! 😃. Typing on my ipad, will post from pc once I reach home.
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Originally posted by: GurtiWonderland


I am on my way to home from office.😛 1 hour max hon! 😃. Typing on my ipad, will post from pc once I reach home.


will be waiting

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