MG Fate of the unfortunate thread 2, part 20,21,22 on page 84,94,114 - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
oh god poor thing
waiting for her hubby
but that was just a monster
with her uncle
he needs to be hunted down too
what did she see at such young age
the cruelty the barbarian
and she couldnt do anything as her parents life was at stake
for them she bore anything and everything
but muski how did she happen
if she took pills
well am glad she has muski at least
thank god for that
she had some relief
man that was so emotional
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
feeling very sad for geet...
geet told maan tht hw brij n dev trapped geet n her parents in this marriage & then whatever happened nxt with geet was worst then any nightmare yaar...
finally after opening up & sharing her pain with maan hope geet feel light at her heart and determine herself to punish those monsters...
maan will be a great support to geet during this phase along with rano,adi,veer,pinky and nandini...
above all of them muskaan will be the one to have a new zeal in maan and geet...
mahi the song selection yaar just mindblowing and makes me speechless...
the song truly describes geets and maans feelings yaar...
my mind is totally clouded with the lyrics of the song...
very emotional update dear...
now waiting to read more..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Good geet told about her to maan
Poor geet went through so much😔
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Posted: 11 years ago
great update...glad that geet open up to maan & shared everything...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely emotional update! Poor Geet! She tells Maan everything! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear glad geet open with maan hope she meet with bright life soon again
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Posted: 11 years ago
GEET FINALLY OPENED UP AND SHARED HER HORRIBLE PAST WITH MAAN
MAYBE NOW SHE WILL START TO HEAL THOUGH IT WILL BE A LONG ABD PAINFUL JOURNEY


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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update...
emotional...
finally geet opened up shared her past with maan...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 17

maan say geet now took brake , called me when you want to talk and please look first muskan , she must be scare ok geet nodded in yes after so many days geet openly talk to someone and she feel so light after that like some weight from her heart go away , she feel so lite and now she want to meet muskan ,maan got her mind and open door , all just come in , adi ,veer ,nanina along with dr pinky and rano ma , rano just hug geet

geet first time with clam voice say ma I am ok , geet eyes start to serch muskan and veer get with her gesture and just run to brought muskan , in no time he brought muskan to that room , and geet just run to muskan , she just madly kissing her and crying with saying iam sorry beta , sorry and start to look if muskan have any marks on her body , just than dr nanina come clsed to her and say she is ok miss handa

geet look to her and say thanks dr nanina , kya you introduce me to all

nanina feel so much happy as well as all

and veer come to his happy mood and say wo kya introduce karagi , I will say

he just pull maan and adi to himself and say we are , Gandhigi ke teen bander , all just laugh on his talk , geet give confused look to maan who just shake his head

oh He is first bander thoda kam bolta hai , but man ka sacha hai He is great Maan sing Khurana smile karne ke liye bahot bhhav khata hai

geet giggle on veer words

all just happy to see her happy

Just than adi come closed to veer and say

and he is Veer , hamesha act pehele karta hai and baad main sochata hai maine galat kiya ya sahi ...ishi liye , ye ladki ko kiss karne ke liye duseray ladki se pita hai and adi laugh to his style huh u huh u

adi look to pinky and pinky just give to angry glare to adi , adi just hide behind maan

all just laugh on adi but maan give him side hug and say geet he is man of word , always respect other , don't get angry easily , have rabit heart but sharp brain , ye do no naam ke friend hai nahi to bhai se come nahi hai

geet just admiring them , she like their bond , maan continued , aur huamre group main ke chidiya bhi , dhikati bahot saket hai but moum se bhi zada soft hai , man ke hai schi ,thodhi akkodu hai but that ok , dreaming about some one that someone come to her ask about her date than purpose her than aham aham ...

Nanina and veer face turn red in shyness, and maan give hint of Nanina mind to veer ...rano get it that it about naina and veer ohhh

Nanina so feel shy she just excused her and went from their, pinky also say bye to all of them , she again give glare to adi and adi jump in his place

veer just come near her and say with emotional voice , we don't have family geet we are orphan , but we four are family to each other and our family me and adi don't have any little sister , we just waiting for her geet ...

and veer and adi also went from their , adi went to home for fresh up and veer went to nanina office

Geet get emotional and say maanji you have such beautiful friends

maan just nodded in yes and come to muskan and kiss he cubby cheek and she give big smile to maan , maan say bye to all three lady and went from there and geet just look to him than went near rano and just hug her along with muskan , both are so happy after so many days

veer just enter in nanina cabin , maan give him good hint , nanina just froze in her face , after their first kiss , she feel so much shy to face him and now he is in her cabin and both are alone , her cheek turn dark red in shyness poor soul just want to run from there , she just took file from table and went to window and ask in low voice , what you want , but her low voice telling that she loses confidence and veer smirk on that , with slow step he just come to closed to her very closed , his body almost touching him , nanina just hold her breeth and just bite her lower lips

Veer just blow near her ear and say ohhh so someone want date , purpose and all that ohhh, nanina just gulp her silva she cluth file tightly to her chest

veer just turn to her , and look all red face with closed eyes veer just bend his face near her and blow to her lips and in reaction her lips shake for second , so miss nannina can you my date in this Sunday please , and nanina open her eyes in shock and saw veer eyes full of love and passion for her , she don't expecting this from veer and ask absate mind , kiss karne ke baad date

that brought naughty veer , she slap herself in mind and bend her head , and veer just come near her pull his chin and ask so what to you want after kiss , lat me guess , a Love ma****...

nanina just hug veer and cried veer , I hate you , you stole my first kiss and I will not forgive you for that , you know I am so shock that cant I even respond to our first kiss , veer smirk with her talk and naina eyes winded in shock oh what she say , she scold herself and say Nanina your big mouth , she just scolding herself and veer just took her talking lips in his lips and nanina get shock with his act , she just start to hit him with her tiny hand and veer just say in her mouth respond nanina eles you again complain that you don't get chance to respond ...and naina just start to respond him

just than maan along with Dr pinky entered in nanina cabin where they saw veer kissing nanina and naina hitting him ,pinky mistook them and she try to went veer to hit him , but maan get her moment and just closed pinky mouth with his hand and pull her out

she is trying to hit maan , but maan grip at last they come out and maan say they are couple , he is not forcing her , pinky just nodded in yes and pointed to his hada , maan took his hand back , and pinky took long breath and say

To unko cabin lock karne nahi aata , usulees ,just call be when dr nanina have time form her kiss ...pinky just walk from there , maan just want to bang his head , and say oh god on name of friend , I have circus , they are less that this Dr pinky come in my life tom boy ... shoul she give any body chance to kiss her oh god maan you become insance , he just knock nanina cabin and say lodly ,Veer usko chod de

Veer and nanina just shcok with maan voice and knock on door , both stop to kiss each other , they just make them clam and nanina say come in

maan - veer manine tumme hint deke sab se badi galti ki hai yaar , this is hospital and she is dr hear

Veer - so it is written anywhere you cannot kiss dr in hospital

maan want to bit him but just than nanina mobile start to ring , maan give glare to nanina who look so shy and don't looking to maan , he swallow lips , maan give dead glare to veer and , he smiling like what ...

But nanina face turn white in next moment and mobile sleep from her hand, she just pull maan with her

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


hey i want your comment on precap also because your comment give me direction to story for upcoming update so please try to guess who is musky father thanks

Mahi

always troubling yo all 😉



part 18

nanina just took maan to dadi room and veer and maan miss the heart bets , maan eyes start feel with tears , veer just come closed to him took his hand and nodded in no tiro entered in dadi room , maan stop in door when he saw so many doc there , naanina give look to veer , veer just nodded in yes , nanina entered in room and veer say , maan chalo , we are with you , don't give up yaar please , but maan like small child denied to entered , his mind stop working , he don't want hear bad about dadi health , he feel so helpless and tear start to flow from his eyes

just than geet come adjured door of her and dadi room and her eyes went to maan , and she froze in her place , the man who behave like strong man, crying on door and cant ready come in ...she feel some pain in her heart like someone pinch her ...she just run to rano ma and say ma ma wo maanji , geet faring voice and maan name , dadi come to her mind and rano just run to dadi room ,where so many docter around dadi bed and maan crying on door , not ready to come in ...rano just run to maan tear just falling from maan eyes

rano just cup his face , but he just blank and just crying , rano say veer took maan in geet room hurry , veer just pull maan with him to geet room , maan eyes on dadi bed veer make sit him on geet bed , geet with so much fear watching maan

Rano again cup maan face and called softly maan beta, maan beta but maan not even blinking his eyes

rano just took him in her hug and say , you want to cry , cry but talk to me , apne ma se bath nahi karega beta

maan come back with word ma , he just hug rano and start to cry bitterly maaa wo dadi , bhi chali jaaygi muje chodke jaise meri ma chali gayi main akel ho jaaunga muje dadi chiye dadi , she is one with me when all thought I kill my ma in my 5 year old age , please ma bring my dadi please

geet gasp loudly with news and put her hand on her mouth veer just give teary look to geet she don't know why but his cry just making her sad , she don't want to see him like this totally brake down ,tear just come in geet eyes

geet get shock that this man baring so much pain but always ready share other pain ...

rano just caressed maan back and sa beta she will be ok , she wil be ok , don't cry like this

maan just lay down and put his head on rano lap and say maaa bahot thak gaya hu , happiness to mere luck main hai nahi and I accepted that but I just want my dadi all healthy in front of me , can I accepting more than why god don't give me that why ,

my own father don't want see my face I accepted that

my father send me hostel I accept that

my other family never took me granted I accept that

they even don't bother to invite me in my own little sister marriage

thak gaya hu ma , I am so tired with all this ma ...rano just caressed her hair and say so ja beta so ja

just than room feel with soft voice

yes geet singing in front of bababji

maan so much tired he not look to her but start to lesion that prayer who make him clam he just closed his eyes

Itanii Shakti Hamen De Na Daataa

Manakaa Vishvaas Kamazor Ho Naa

Ham Chalen Nek Raaste Pe Hamase

Bhuulakar Bhii Koi Bhuul Ho Naa

Har Taraf Zulm Hai Bebasii Hai

Sahamaa-Sahamaa-Saa Har Aadamii Hai

Paap Kaa Bojh Badhataa Hii Jaaye

Jaane Kaise Ye Dharatii Thamii Hai

Bojh Mamataa Kaa Tu Ye Uthaa Le

Terii Rachanaa Ka Ye Ant Ho Naa

Ham Chale

Duur Agyaan Ke Ho Andhere

Tu Hamen Gyaan Kii Raushanii De

Har Buraaii Se Bachake Rahen Ham

Jitanii Bhii De, Bhalii Zindagii De

Bair Ho Naa Kisikaa Kisiise

Bhaavanaa Man Men Badale Kii Ho Naa

Ham Chale

Ham Na Sochen Hamen Kyaa Milaa Hai

Ham Ye Sochen Kiyaa Kyaa Hai Arpan

Phuul Khushiyon Ke Baaten Sabhii Ko

Sabakaa Jiivan Hii Ban Jaaye Madhuban

Apanii Karunaa Ko Jab Tu Bahaa De

Karade Paavan Har Ik Man Kaa Konaa

Ham Chale

Ham Andhere Men Hain Raushanii De,

Kho Naa De Khud Ko Hii Dush{}Manii Se,

Ham Sazaa Paaye Apane Kiye Kii,

Maut Bhii Ho To Sah Le Khushii Se,

Kal Jo Guzaraa Hai Phirase Naa Guzare,

Aanevaalaa Vo Kal Aisaa Ho Naa

Ham Chale Nek Raaste Pe Hamase,

Bhulakar Bhii Koi Bhuul Ho Naa

Itanii Shakti Hamen De Naa Daataa,

Manakaa Vish{}Vaas Kamazor Ho Naa

geet just singing for maan , she want to make him clam , she cant see him like this , she don't want to herself but want maan happiness , she just with closed eyes pray to god for dadi health , she just finish her song and look to maan who clammily sleeping on rano lap , geet just come out along with veer

Veer mummer thanks to geet and geet nodded in yes

geet just went to near dadi bed , now there is only naina present and her face telling that dadi in bad condition geet just took dadi hand in her hand and say hello dadi , I am geet hand , mother of muskan ,I know you are old and want to sleep but your grandson need you dadima , he don't have anyone other than you in name of relation , please come back to him please and a tear fail on dadi hand and dadi hand shake for second , geet gasp with this and called dr she sshake her had I feel it , nanina and veer just shcok with geet and she saw dadi try to open her eyes nanina called other doc and say vee and geet for some second

after few minute chaking dr declared that she come out from coma , and dadi also open her eyes fully and say meek voice maan , veer just run to maan and tell rano , rano just wake up maan , maan saw rano ma whose face glowing with happiness , he want to ask but rano ma just took him to dadi room and point out to dadi bed ...maan just froze in his place , it is dream for him , dadi just say in low voice maannn

maan like small child and just hug her and cried in her hug

dadi feel bad for him ,and start to caressed his back with so much love , nanina just come to maan and say bro she is wick please give her one or two days please , maan nodded in no like small child who is not ready to give his candy , dadi chukkel with maan pout and face , just than geet say in low voice , maanji it is for dadi health and maan just nodded in yes in second , nanina look to veer and veer look to nanina

precap

maan come to know about geet touch and dadi come out from coma

musky birth story her father name tell by dev and land escape from maan feet i am devil 😡 now think why maan react like that 😃

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago

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